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Articles: Literature | | telugu padyAlu avasaramA? | |
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| kooralOki pOpu (taalimpu) avasaramaa ?
aTlaagE telugu padyam kooDaa!
'calories' chaalu, 'taste' akkarEdu anukunTE
pOpu akkarlEdu ;
cheppadalachukunnadi cheppEsaam; 'communication is important' anukunTE 'andamgaa' cheppE avasaram lEdu!
padyam anTE utpalamaala, madhyaakkara anE kaadu,
pratee chhandassoo oka padyam kaadaa?
mana modern kavi kumaarulu endarO EdO vidhamaina praasa kosam tanTaalu paDutoo, adi paDitEnE kavita avutundani anukOvaTam abaddhamaa?
andu chEta, padyam avasarame!
adee kaaka, EdO oka moosa lEkapOtE jnaapakam peTTukovaTam kashTam - kanuka, padyam aa vidhamgaa kooDaa avasaramE.
kotta chhandassulu puTTuku vastoonE unTaai.
Sri Sri anTaTi vaaDu kooDaa ee chhandObandObastulanu tappinchukOlEka pOyaaDu.
udaaharaNaki :
Sinare,
bhalaare
'cinema re
(a)dy made sarukkee'
tayaare
anToo vraayaka tappalEdu!
('praasa' oka 'anTu vyaadhi'. Jnaapakam vatchinaa, marokaDu daanni vaaDinaa - daanni vaaDE varakoo manaku kooDaa nidra paTTadu. EdO velitigaa anipistundi.
'Emi cheppaavu?' anEdi mukhyam anukunTE
padyam akkarlEdu
(andukanE paanugnTi vaaru 'chaakali padduku champakamaala Ela?' annaaDu.
'ETlaa cheppaavu?' anEdi mukhyam anukunna sandarbhamlO padyam chaalaa 'hridyam'gaa unTundi.
'poDi' kaavaalanukunTE kavitwam akkarlEdu
'taDi' kaavaalanTE kavitwam, padyaaloo
avasaramE!
Opikagaa pariseelistE mahaakavula rachanalalOni okkokka rakam padyam E vidhamgaa saarthakamainadO telustundi.
ayinaa, 'telugu avasaramaa?' anE paristhiti nelakonna ee rojullO 'telugu padyam avasaramaa?'
anna prasnE vintagaa undi!
naa uddesyam EmiTanTE telugu meeda Sraddha unnavaaDevaDainaa telugu padyam meeda kooDaa Sraddha choopinchi teerutaaDu.
deenimeeda kondari abhipraayaalanu telusukunnaaka
maLLee vraastaanu.
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 7, Jul 2005 1:08:55 PM IST
modaTagaa Saastri gaariki namassulu. nae raasina kaamenTs loa nothing personal ! But this is a very great debate which every telugu speaking individual should be interested in.
padyaaniki kaalam chellindaa?
ee vachana kavitva yugam loa padya kaLa roopaaniiki unna relevens enta?
asalu ae kaLaa roopaannainaa eTuvanTi dRukpatham toa chooDaali?
ae kalaa roopamaina kaala pravaaham loa eTuvanTi maarpu chendutundi?
asalu oka kaLaa roopam manchidi oka kaLaa roopam manchidi kaadu ani kwaaalifai chaeyaDam enta varaku sababu?
eTuvanTi kaLaa roopaalu prajalloa nilabaDutaayi ?
ennoa praSnalanu vadulutundi ee debate aedoa okka mukkaloa emotional gaa taelchae amSam kaadu kanuka oka manchi vivaraNa ivvaalsi undi ikkaDa.
ika ee loapu ee aarTikal choosina prati okkarini tamaku telisina toachina kaamenTs poasT chaeyamani manavi. tvaraloa naa kaamenTs poasT chaestaa teerika choosukuni.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 22, Apr 2005 1:30:24 AM IST
padyamainaa vachanamainaa aa rachana lO kavitvaM uMDaali... E prayatnamU cheyyakuMDaanE paaThakuDiki kavitvaM ardhaM avvaalanukOvaDaM atyaaSE avutuMdi.. eMdukaMTE kavitvaM moulikaM gaa ardha kaLa.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 14, Apr 2005 2:02:47 PM IST
Hi,
Just my thoughts. Sorry I don't know telugu typing ( but don't misunderstand it as I cannot write telugu).
Anyway here is what I say - Mr. Aandhrudu Aandhrudu was right. The first aim of literature is entertainment, satisfaction of readers. If you consider current telugu readers its really difficult to understand 'Grandhikam', also whatever the poet wants to express he can do it in normal language. For example take Sri Sri - he is called 'Poet of the age' and yet used simple language. Or take lyric writer Srivennala Seetharama Sastry his film songs are lyric yet in common language which anyone can understand (don't write off saying they are only film songs).
But Mr. Aandhrudu Aandhrudu was bit sarcastic, which I oppose. Everyone will have their own taste. But aim of poet is to entertain audience, yet provoke thoughts, not probably to compose lyric-rich stanzas. See Sri Sri peom 'A desa Charitra choosina emunadhi garva karanam Narra jathi charithra samastham para peddana parayanthvam' or 'Taj Mahal nirmanniki raalathani coolielu evaru'. Telugus can definitely claim that no other poet has ever wrote such thought provoking poems which are yet entertaining and yes in a simple language.
Posted by: Mr. wibas wibas At: 14, Apr 2005 8:42:13 AM IST
mamchi charcha. ii vishayam pai eppuDoe remDu kamda padyaalu raasinaTTu gurtu. vaaTini marokkasaari smaristae tappu kaadu anukumTuu
amdamugaa kavitalleDu
chamdamu kaavalayugaani Chamdamadaelaa
amdamu ruchikada vimduku
emduku vistari vivaramulemchuTa Sarmaa
ani praSnimchukuni
sumdaramou kavanaaniki
Chamdamu amdamu anuTaku samdiyamaelaa
sumdari vaeseDu chimdulu
amdela samdaDiye laeka amdambagunae
ani samaadhaanam cheppukunnaanu.
Chamdoebaddhamaina kavita padyam adilaenidi padam
saahityaaniki padam padyam kuuDaa avasaramae.
padam paDuchu peLLaamlaa chuusina vemThanae( chadivina vemThanae) muchchaTa golipae maaTa nijamae ayinappaTikii padyam talli laamTidanna maaTa marichipoekuuDadu.
padyam vallanae aamdhra mahaabhaarataaniki viluva dakkimdi. ippaTikii prapamchamloeni ennoe bhaashala kavulu mana bhaarataanni gaaravistunaaru anaedi nijam
bhaaratam telisinamtagaa mahaaprasthaanam teliyadu. palleloe chaduvuu samdhyalu laeni vaarukuuDaa bhaaratam telusamTaaru. mari mahaa prasthaanam maaTa?? alaa ani mahaa prasthaanaanni kimcha parachae uddaeSyam iishaNmaatram laedani manavi.
ilaa cheppukupoetumTae ii charchaa vaedika chinnadaipoetumdi.
ardham kaavaTam laedani vidyaa vishayaalanu pakkaku neDutunaamaa? Tyuushan lu peTTimchukuni marii chaduvukumTunaamu. mari padyam vishayamloe maatram alaa emduku anukoekuuDaduu.
ennoe niyamaalanu paaThistuu vishayaanni ardhavamtamgaa cheppagalagaDam amta saamaanyamaina vishayam kaadu.aTuvamTi chakkani prakriya avasaramaa anae anumaanam emduku?
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 13, Apr 2005 7:02:55 PM IST
Sree Saastri gaariki namassulu..
ee vishayamuloa naaku elaa spamdimchaaloa ardhaM kaavaTaM laedu.. manakunna okae oka goppa saahitee sampada padyam.. ammaa ani pilavaTam naamoashee ayipoatunna roajulivi.. kavitalu kooDaa kuchimchukupoayi marugujjulai poayi, naaneelu, haikoolu gaa maaripoayaayi.. miDDeela samskRuti vachchinaa cheera kaTTu sogasu, amdaM marichipoagalamaa ! pijjaakoasaM minapa roTTe vadilaesukumTaamaa ! evari aloachanalu vaaLLavi.. mana padya samskRutiloa maadhuryaani gurtimchi maruguna paDipoatunna saahityaalu veliki teesi manaki amdimchimdi vidaeSeeyuDu brounu doragaaru..
padya maadhuryaanni gurtimchalaeni saadhaaraNa vyaktulakidi talanoppae !
Saastri gaaroo mee paeru aemiTi anaekamTae tama naamadhaeyamu aemiTanaedae madhuramaina maaTa..
taene tiyyagaa umTumdi.. bellaM paakamoo tiyyagaa umTumdi..chakkera tiyyagaa umTumdi.. cheraku rasaM tiyyagaa umTumdi.. daeni teepi daanidi.. daeni maadhuryaM daanidi..
bamDabaarina naalikaki ae ruchainaa okkaTae !
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 13, Apr 2005 1:28:03 PM IST
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