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| erakka pOyi vachchaanu, irukkupOyaanu ..
bahuSa: kavitwaM pEru vinagaanE oka rakaM poonakaMlaanTidi vachchEstundanukunTaa!
munupu evarO iddaru pramukhulu 'We agree to disagree' anEsukunnaaraTa!
manaM kooDaa 'We disagree to agree' anukundaaM!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 9, Jul 2005 10:25:45 PM IST
eitE meeru 'krottagaa' chepputunnadEmiTee?
mee vyaasaM 'DiskavareekE' udaaharaNa avutOndi! adi in`ven`shan` kaadu kadaa!
kavitwaM anTE EmiTO marchipOtunnavaaLLaki jnaapakam chEstunnaaranna maaTa!
Any way, 'The quality of a pudding lies in its eating'
ani oppEsukundaaM. EmanTaaru?
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 9, Jul 2005 8:49:52 PM IST
Well,
Observe No.1 & No.3 quoted by you.
Do not you find some rhythm & mathematically detectable periodicity in them?
3rd one contains an 'antya praasa'; Even the 1st one too, with a smaller dose!
There is a hidden metre in these examples.
2nd one : There is (rhyme) praasa of 'lla' or 'LLa' in all the three things - 'kukka pilla, aggipulla, sabbu biLLa' - Is it not?
6th & 7th : There are praasas here too.
Again I repeat, these 'chhandO bandObastulu' are 'means' for embellishing the 'poetry'but are not the end by themselves.
I too share your opinion that 'There must be some novelty & pep in the idea as well as presentation, along with an obsession for that particular topic on the part of the author.
Lakhs of 'poems' were written till date by many people who thought gaNas, yati & praasa alone constitute poetry. They were proved wrong.
Just as there is no meaning in decorating a dead body (Saint Tyaagaraaja gives this example in his SankaraabharaNa raaga - Roopaka taaLa piece -'Bhakti bichchameeyavE'), there is no use adding embellishments when there is 'bhaava daaridryam'.
Then, are we making fun of a well-dressed human being? We may enjoy the 'unconventionally dressed person's appearance too, but it is not out of appreciation!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 9, Jul 2005 3:47:33 PM IST
'kanchu mrOginaTlu kanakambu mrOgUnaa?' (aaTa veladi 3rd line of a vEmana Satakam poem)
'ooraka raaru mahaatmulu' ( kanda padyam - 1st line of a poem in aandhra mahaa bhaagavatam - oft quoted by many)
'dESa bhaashalandu telugu lessa' (used both by SreenaathuDu & KrishNa dEvaraayalu - 4th line of an aaTa veladi poem'
'laavokkintayu lEdu ..' (gajEndra mOksham of pOtana
(Saardoolam)
paivaaTini manam kavitwamgaa parigaNistunnaamaa, lEdaa?
parigaNistE - avi aa roopaalalO biginchabaDi uNDakapotE jnaapakam peTTukOvaTam kashTam ayyEdi kaadaa?
idee - nEnu 'chatraala gurinchi/ chhandO bandObastula gurinchi'
cheppa dalachukunnadi.
'tilak', 'kundurti' vanTi vaaLLu entO adbhutamaina oohalato vrasaaru.
vaaTilO 'amritam kurisina raatri', 'vennellO aaDa pillalu' anEvi - chaalaa takkuva sankhyalO jnaapakam unTaayi kaanee migilinavaaTilO chaala maTukki oka paTTaana jnaapakam raavu kadaa!
nEnu cheppEdi 'percentage of evaporation from the brain in case of a common man' gurinchi - ani meerandaroo grahistE chaalu!
Satya Rama Prasad
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 9, Jul 2005 1:37:41 AM IST
mana telugu vAchakAllO padyAlakI Adhunika kavitvAnikI samAna sthAyinichchAru.aitE chAlA mandi pillalu vATilni parIkshalakOsamanE tappa andulOni goppadanam kOsam chadavaru.allAnTi vAriki kavitvam ChandassulO vunnA lEkunnA tEDA EvI telIdu.maroha vaipu manasichchi chadivE vALLaku adi padyamainA vachanamainA 'nachchitE' chaduvutAru.anchAta chaTrAllu gaTrAlU vunTenE talalO nilustundanukOvaDam porabATE
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 8, Jul 2005 8:44:41 PM IST
satyarAmaprasAdu gAru
mI kAmenTu chadivAnu.santOsham
mI avakASanni dEnnI mEmu gunjEsukonnaTTu bhAvinchakanDi.kavitvam anantam .mEm telsukonnadi EpATi.'kavitvamanTE EviTi ' ani kavita rAsEkannA vyAsam rAyanDi ikkaDunna kottavALLaku autsAhikulakI vupayOgapaDutundi
kavitvam paTla inta Asakti vunna mIru modaTi rachanani jOkulu riDilsu anTU rAyaDam ???
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, Jul 2005 7:58:52 PM IST
KavtwamanTE
(Still I am not conversant with telugu people.com's
telugu lipi & hence I am transliterating my feelings. My dear author, please bear with me!)
1) kavitwampaina mee abhipraayaalu chaalaa baagunnaayi.
2) ee rojE nEnu telugupeople.com lo rigistaru chEsukunnaanu.( naa biodata chhooDanDi.) Yaadrichchhikamgaa idE vishayamai,
idE seershikatO oka kavita vraadddaamanukuntE - aa
avakaasaanni marevarO gunjEsukunnaaranipinchindi!
paravaa lEdu, kaneesam VIMARSAku avakaasam undi kadaa!
3) Mari konni amsaalapai meerandaroo Ekeebhavistaarani naa nammakam :
a) kavitwamantE 'kaDupu ninDinavaaDipaina kasitO
vraayaDam' kaanE kaadu. KavitwamnuNDi sphoortee raavaali; ooraTaa kalagaali.
maralaa vinaalanipinchaali.
'ChhandO bandObastulu' teesEsina kavitwam enta goppadainaa twaralonE prajalu daanini marchipOtaaru. KaabaTTi kavitwaanni 'biginchatTaaniki' oka chaTram chaalaa avasaram!
naga kaakunDaa bangaaraniki Sobha uNDanaTlE
EdO oka chhandassu/laya lenidE kavitwamanEdi
SObhinchalEdu.
AitE, 'praasakOsamEraa koosu koDakaa' annaTlugaa
unna vraata eppaTikee kavitwam kaabOdu.
'Haruvu mollamu kaavale' annaaDu Allasaani Peddana.
b) kaasukee kavitwaanikee E vidhamaina sambandhamoo lEnE lEdu. ee madhya ee vipareeta dhOraNulu perigi pOvaTam duradrishTakaram.
c) 'maa kulapODi kavitwaanni marO kulapODu
aNagadokkaaDu' - anaTamlO artham lEdu.
chivarigaa :
kalyaaNam vatchinaa, kakku vatchinaa, kavitwam vatchinaa - evaroo aapalEru!
Edainaa mOtaadu lonE unDaali kadaa!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 6, Jul 2005 7:24:56 PM IST
selav
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 27, Jun 2005 7:24:06 PM IST
okka maaTa....
( i ) meeru cheptunna maaTalloa stuff gurinchi kaaka meeru cheptunna vidhaanam gurinchae kadaa rijarvaeshan?....endukanta paTTudala ...anta stuff unna vaaLLu cheppae vidhaanaanni ela artham chaeyinchaalanae dRukpatham peTTalaeraa?...enta mandi benifiT avutaaru anduvalla ?!..kaadaa..aloachinchanDi. mee kanTribyooshan kaavaali. kaani mee paddhati valla venakkeltunna bhaavanae tappa mundukeltunnaa feeling laedu annadi feeD baak. karekT chaesukunTae poalaa...' naenu saitam samidha nokkaTi aahutichchaanu ' anukoavaDam simpul. chaeyi kaalutunnaa samidhanivvaDam elaa unTundoa oohinchukoavaDam kashTam.
(ii) meerannaTTu mee vimarSaloa padunae undanukundaamu. meeru raasina konni vimaRSalanu ikkaDa prastaaviddaa manukunTunnaa. kaapoatae anta Taim spaer chaesae upayoagam emanna undaa ani aloachinchaaka chaeyaali. vyaktigata vimarSa avasaramaa? kavi meedanaa kavitvam meedanaa chaesae vimarSa ani teleekunDaa elaa chaeyagalaru vimarSa?...ekasekkam chaeyaDam....egataaLi chaestoo maaTaalaaDDam paigaa maemu...cheptunna daanTloa vishayam chooDanDi...maa tiTlu maatram filTar chaesukonDi ani anaDam enduku?...aloak gaaru vimarSakuDu gaaru...mee vimarSalae kaadu...naa vimarSalae kaadu..ikkaDa poasT chaesae evari vimarSalae kaadu.....asalu ee vimarSalu tala dannae vimarSanaatmaka vyaasaalu ennoa kanipinchaayi. antoa inta patrikalloa achchayina kavitala meeda dibaeT jarigina charchalaku pratyuttaram jaragaDam ayyindi. kaanee idaenTi? pichchuka meeda brahmaastramaa?...chinna chinna kavulu inka mechyooriTee raani utsaaha vantulainaa vaLLa meeda andunaa vyakti gatangaa...maLLee ekasekkam toa ...vimarSa raayaDam chaalaa paapam anDi. meeru saahityaaniki aedo kanTribyooT chaestunnaaru anukunTaaru. kaani adi nijaaniki viruddhangaa jarugutundi. ee Tee pee vaaLLu budding poets nu encourage chaestunnaaru. alaa kaadu..aedoa baDaayiki kavitalu raastunna vaaLLu unnaaru ikkaDa anukunnaaranukoanDi...vaaLLu mee sahitee gumpu loa endukunTaaru? meerenduku vaaLLanu taDumukunTaaru?....poanee alaanTi vaaLLanu edurkoaDaaniki meeru naDum kaTTukunaarae anukundaamu..anduloa saahitee vaedika pai jarigae yuddham aemunTundi ? endukanTae elaagu alaanTi vaariki they have different bent of mind anna vishayam meeku telisi poayindi kadaa?! ayinappaTikee vimarSa paerutoa kaamenTs raasaesi alaanTi vaaLLu visukkuntae maLlee meeru ' ...chee naa vimarSaloa sTaf entoa chooDalaeni moorkha shikhaamaNi vi neevu ...' anaDam enduku?
meeru nijaaniki chaestunna vimarSaloa naaku ahankaaram tappa sahitee abhimaanam kanipincha laedu. chinna chinna kavulu kavayitrula meeda vyakti gatangaa kooDaa daaDi chaeyaDam daaruNam. idae naaku parsanal gaa unna baadha !......idi vimarSakulugaa meeku aanandaannistundaemoa teleedu kaani..manushulugaa elaa aanandaannistundoa teleedu.
(iii) alaa kaadu...oa pani chaeddaam. mee Ngaanam antaa upayoaginchi oka charcha modalu peTTanDi. oka adbhutamaina charcha. prati seeriyas kavi kavayitri munagaalanukunae charcha. oka tilak saahityam gurinchoa, oka cherabanDa raaju saahityam gurinchoa, oka Siva saagar kavitvam gurinchoa, telangaaNaa praanta kavitvam gurinchoa, kavitvam loa saamaajikaamSaalu anna amSam gurinchoa, kavitvam loa vastu praadhaanyata anna vishayam gurinchoa, chaekoori raamaa raavu saahitee vimarSaloa loaTu paaTlu anna vishayam gurinchoa, tripuranaeni saahitee dRukpatham gurinchi oka avagaahana gurinchoa, padya kavitvam vachana kavitvam gurinchoa..ilaa ennoaa......modalu peTTanDi. seeriyas gaa unna prati saahitee abhimaani abhimaanistaaDu. evarainaa aloachinchae vidhaanam loa loaTu paaTlu unTae appuDu sari chaeyanDi. idi naa sajeshan. paaTinchaDam vaddu annadi mee ishTam ani telusu.
PS : daya chaesi meeru naenu raasina
kavitvaanni cheelchi chenDaaDi mee vimarSa
vinipinchagalaru ani koarukunTunnaa. naaku parlaedu
meerelaa vimarSa chaesina..mee vimarSa valla naaloa
kavi baagupaDtaaDu anukunTae. ika meeru vekili
maaTalu raayaalanukunTae ( ahoa aandhra bhoajaa
etc ) anToo raayadalchukunnaa parlaedu.
naa paruvu aemee bajaaruna paDadu. naaku inTar neT
loakam kaadu. kaapoatae haasyam vyangyam evari
okkari sottu kaadu ani meeku telisae unDaali.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 27, Jun 2005 5:51:41 PM IST
vishayaanni cheppakanae cheputaaru. evarainaa chepitae ardham chaesukoeru.
kaafii ichchaemumdu kaasta spuun toe tiisukuni ruchi chuusi ivvaalanae vishayam anubhavam miida kadaa telisaedi. aa anubhavam kalagaalamTae sutaaramgaa cheppina vidhaanam kadaa avasaram idi telisi kuuDaa maLLii EmiTaa raatalu.
adii kaaka ikkaDa telugupiipul saiTuloe kavitalu( mii uddaeSyamloe kaavu anukoemDi) raasaevaaLLevaruu maemu kavulamamDoey amTuu cheppukoelaedu. Edoe saradaagaa vaaLLa talapulaloe kaligina bhaavaaniki akshara ruupam ivvaalani prayatnistunaaru. adi kuuDaa vaaLLa udyoegamloe kaasta tiirika chikkina samayamloe. evarainaa peddavaaLLu ilaa raayakuuDadarraa ani alaa emduku raayakuuDadoe mari ilaa raayaali amTuu emdukalaa raayaaloe vivaristae emtoe samtoeshapaDi tama raatala vidhaananni maarchukumTuu umDaDam kuuDaa naenu erugudunu.
alaamTi choeTukochchi maa vimarSalatoe mimmalni uddharimchaestaam amTuu taapatrayam paDipoeyi EmiTi saadhimchaestaaru.
ikkaDi kavitalni kampyuuTaruu imTarneTTuu amdubaaTuloe unnavaariloe ii saiTu gurimchi erigina koddi mamdi maatramae chaduvutunaaru. aa koddi mamdiloenuu mari koddi mamdi maatramae raastunaaru.
imtakamTae Saktivamtamaina, nalugurikii chaeruvagaa veLutunna maadhyamaalaina sinimaa, vaara patrika, maasa patrika vagairaalaloe parama daaruNamaina saahityam vachchaestoemdi. mii saamardhyam edoe daani miida chuupimchi mii vimarSalatoe aa ramgaalanu chakkadiddeyyamDi samaajaaniki kaasta upakaaram chaesina vaaravutaaru.
ika poetae raachamallu, akkiraaju, raaLLapalli vaaru kavulu kaaru kaanii vimarSakulugaa vaariki mamchi paeru umdi. mari manakunna paeru EmiTi. telugu piipulu saiTuloe kaaka marekkaDainaa eppuDainaa manam evarinainaa vimarSimchaemaa.
sarae vimarSakulu kavulu kaanavasaram laedu oppukumTaam mari kavi kaani vaaDu kavitvam amTae anae vyaasam raastae paravaalaedaa.
vimaraSa amTae elaa umDaaloe avagaahana kuuDaa laeni vaaLLu vimarSakulaa.
manam raasinadi yadhaatadhamgaa chuusukunae avakaasam ii saiTuloe maatram kalpimchinamdukaa ishTam vachchinaTTu paeTraegipoevaDam ??
mamchi mamchi patrikalaloe vachchina kavitvaanni vimarSimchi akkaDi vaari praSamsalu pomdeyyamDi. ikkaDi vaataavaraNaanni praSaamtamgaa umDanistae adae padivaelu.
maLLii cheputunaa mumdu manakunna arhata EmiTani praSnimchukoevaDam sarvadaa Sraeyaskaram
manam cheppae maaTanu avatalivaaru gouravimchae vidhamgaa mumdu manakamTuu oka imaej Erparachukuni aa taruvaata vaariki hitavu chepitae naluguruu harshistaaru. manam avakatavaka raatalu raasi eduTivaari taatalanu vimarSistae
nettina emgilaaku peTTukuni avatali vaaDi verri kudirimdaa ani praSnimchana chamdamae avutumdi.
asalu mana paerae ikkaDa cheppukoekumDaa Edoe peTTuDu paerutoe vyavaharistuu maemu peddalam maa vayasuku mariyaada ivvakkaralaedaa amTae mana vayasu evariki telisimdanii??
mukham mumdu pogaDtaki pomgipoekumDaanuu, mohamaaTam laeni tegaDtaki kumgipoekumDaanuu umTae alaamTi vaarini mahaatmulanii parama hamsalanii amTaaru. ikkaDivaaramtaa saamaanyulae kaanii maroeTikaadu. amchaeta mii vimarSalanu aa paramaatmulakoe paramahamsalakoe samdhimchamDi. ikkaDi chinna pillalni vadilipeTTeyyamDi.
maLLii maLLii cheputaa mana arahatani adae mii arhatani praSnimchae avakaasam evarikii kalaganiiyakumDaa umTae mamchidi.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 23, Jun 2005 11:45:32 PM IST
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