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Articles: Literature | | Sri Sri's Mahaprasthanam (In English) | |
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| Good attempt.
Few suggestions :
1) I hope you are familiar with Telugu. So you can
type the Telugu version of each poem on the top and your English translation at the bottom, or vice versa.
1) Whenever you are using Telugu words in brackets, please 'transliterate' them to the extent possible, so that any reader who reads that portion can try to understand the pronunciation of the original word.
Ex: 'mahaa prasthaanam' in stead of 'maha prasthanam'
Moreover, the word 'sandhya samasyalu' can be pronounced as 'saandhya samasyalu' or 'sandhyaa samasyalu' with your present presentation. Then, there is a subtle difference in the meaning between these two phrases.
2) I think I need not emphasize the need of clarity, in preference to pedantry. Fortunately, your translation seems to be simple and effective.
Best of luck.
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 10, Sep 2005 3:20:00 AM IST
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