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chinnasavaraNa. saaMdrata = dravyaraaSi/parimaaNaM :)

Posted by: Mr. nihaar nihar At: 22, Feb 2006 11:46:06 AM IST

kaamESvar gaaru, naavi konni saMdEhaalu. 1) chikkadanaM? saaMdrata aMTE EmiTi? moortamaina udaaharaNalistE saMtOshistaanu. (naaku telisina naighaMTikaarthaM, dravyaraaSi/pariNaamaM ) 2) tikkana bhaarataM mottaMlO oka padyaM punarukti chEstE daanni, ikkaDa SivaareDDi kavitvaMtO jarigina daanni okE gaaTana kaTTaTaM samaMjasaMgaa lEdu. 3) praacheena kaavyaalanu, aadhunika kavitvaanni okE gaaTana kaTTagalaraa? asalu aa reMTinee, okE siddhaaMtaMtO parikiMchaDaM vivEkamaina vivEchanEnaa? 4) alaMkaarikulu vachana kavita guriMchi, aadhunika kavitvaM guriMchi Emannaaru? vaari siddhaaMtaala prakaaraM asalu nETi kaalaM kavitvaM kavitvamavutuMdaa? 5)evarainaa peddalu chebitE choopiMchaMDi annaaru. peddalaku nirvachanamEmiTi? j~naanapeeThulaa? aachaaryulaa? alaMkaarikulaa? kaneesaM oka pustakamainaa prachuriMchina vaaraa? (nEnu peddamanishi anukunE vyakti abhipraayaM kiMda ichchaanu.) E vishayaannaina ekkaDO, evarO praacheenulu peddavaaru chebitEnE oppukuMTE ika kottavishayaaleppaTikainaa velugu choochEnaa? SaMkhaMlO pOstE gaani teerthamavadaa? 6) http://www.eemaata.com/issue20/pound.pdf kavitvaaniki kaavalsina mooDu praathamika lakshaNaallO reMDavadi chooDaMDi. alaagE vyaasaMlO bhaava chitraalaguriMchi cheppina vaakyaM, bhaasha guriMci, podupu guriMchi chadavaMDi. ejraa pouMD ekkaDaa niDivi guriMchi maaTlaaDalEdu. alaa ani aayana raasinavannee minee kavitaloo kaadu. -neehaar

Posted by: Mr. nihaar nihar At: 22, Feb 2006 9:04:24 AM IST

subrahmaNyaM gAru, kiraN gAru, mIru 'kluptata' aMTE chikkadanaM/sAMdrata anE arthaMlOnE mI vAdanani konasAgiMchinaTTuMdi. aMchEta peddagA vAdiMchaDAnikEmI lEdu. kAkapOtE 'kluptata' aMTE mIrichchina arthaM mIrekkaDa chadivArO chepitE nAkupayOgapaDutuMdi. alAgE adi pAScAtyulanuMDi aruvu techchukunnadannaMduku nochchukunnaTTunnAru. kiraN gAru vEmana udAharaNa cheppAru. nEnaruvu techchukunnArannadi kavitwaMlO kluptatani kAdu. adi kavitwAniki awasara lakshaNaM anna sidhdhAMtAnni. raghOttamarAvugAru namastE, mIru kUDA 'kluptata'ki nE nichchina nirwachanaMtO oppukOvaTaMlEdu kAbaTTi, mI nirwachanaM EmiTO dAnikAdhAraM EmiTO chebitE bAguMTuMdi. nA nirwachanAniki AdhAraM A padAnikunna naighaMThikArthaM. haikU, minI kavitalu 'kluptata'ki (iMglIshulObrevityki) udAharaNalugA cheppukOvaDaM. ika aruvutechchukonna vishayaM guriMchi, nEnannadi kluptata, sAMdratala guriMchi kAni punarukti guriMchi kAdu. punarukti oka kAvya dOshamani mana AlaMkArikulu cheppAru. kAnI dAnni chAlA maMdi kavulu dhikkariMchAru (tikkana bhArataMlO reMDu padyAlu reMDu saMdarbhAlalO punarukti avutAyi, SrI SrI kavitalalO punaruktiki subrahmaNyaMgArE udAharaNa ichchAru). kAbaTTi punarukti dOshamani sAdhAraNIkariMchalEM annadi nA abhiprAyaM. ika kluptata guriMchi mIru kOT chEsina vAkyAnni kAsta vivariMchi, dAnikI kluptataki unna saMbaMdhaM vivaristE nAkarthamavutuMdi. nAku telisi mana AlaMkArikulevarU dInni kAvya lakshaNaMgA pErkonalEdu. aTu saMskRuta kAvyAlu tIsukunnA, iTu prAchIna telugu kAvyAlu tIsukunnA, aMdulO kluptata kAnI, subrahmaNyaMgAru pErkonna lAMTi sAMdrata kAni kanabaDavu. kAnI avi goppa kAvyAlE ani chAlAmaMdi sAhityavEttalu aMgIkariMchAru. aMdukE avi kavitwAniki pre-requisiteskAvani nEnu anukuMTunnAnu. chivarigA mIranna siddhAMtAnikI rasahRudayAnikI nAkekkaDA saMbaMdhaM aMtuchikkalEdu:)

Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Rao Bh At: 22, Feb 2006 1:07:54 AM IST

kaamESvara raavu gaaru, naa dRushTilO kluptata anTE niDivi takkuva unDaDaM kaadu. okka saari ee kavitalO naavi, kiraN gaarivee paata kaamenTs chadavanDi. ika Sree Sree 'avunu nijaM avunu nijaM neevannadi neevannadi neevannadi nijaM nijaM' annaa oka gEyaMlO kaabaTTi adi chakkagaa saripOyindi. ikkaDa kiraN gaaru udaharinchina kavita chadavanDi. punarukti kavitvaanikenta haani chEsindO! SivaareDDi gaari kavitvaaniki ee punarukti mElu kannaa haanE ekkuva chEsindEmO ani naa abhipraayaM

Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 21, Feb 2006 11:26:15 AM IST

'okka aksharAnni kUDA tIsiveyyalEni vidhaMgA uMDaDaM' kluptata ani anukOnu. adi kavitwaMlO chikkadanapu prAdhAnyaM cheppE oka atiSayOkti tappa vEru kAdani nA uddESaM. mIru chikkadanAnnE kluptata aMTUMTE goDavalEdu. kAni nAku telisi chikkadanaM vEru kluptata vEru. kluptata aMTE niDivi takkuva kaligi uMDaDaM annadi nAku telisina nirwachanaM. kAdani evarainA peddavALLu cheppuMTE telusukuMTAnu. ayitE chikkadamainA, kluptatainA kavitwAniki pre-prequisites kAvu. ivi pASchAtya sAhitya vimarSakulanuMchi aruvu techchukunna lakshaNAlE. ivi uMDakUDadani kAdu, lEkapOyinaMta mAtrAna adi maMchi kavitwaM kAdanI koTTipAreyyalEM. alAgE punarukti kUDA eppuDU dOshamani sAdhAraNIkariMchalEM. adi chAlAmaMdi (tikkana nuMDi SrI SrI varakU) vADinadE, raka rakAla effects kOsaM. adi kavitwaMlO kotta prayOgamEmI kAdu. aMchEta siddhAMta charchakAkuMDA, SivA reDDi kavitwaMlOni A lakshaNAlu eMtavarakU kavitwAniki dOhadapADDAyO, cheDagoTTAyO mAtramE charchistE bAguMTuMdi(EkAbhiprAyAniki rAgalistE maMchidE, lEkapOyinA vachchina nashTaM lEdu:).

Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Rao Bh At: 21, Feb 2006 0:00:06 AM IST

aaMdhruDu gaaru, meeru EkeebhavinchanavasaraM lEdu. kinda kiraN gaaru kOT chEsina kavitani kluptata dRushTilO okka saari chadavanDi. alaagE E goppa kavi kavitanainaa teesukuni ardhaM cheDakunDaa okka aksharaannainaa teeseyyaDaaniki prayatninchanDi. appuDu kluptata kavitaki praadhamika lakshaNamO, oka TeknikkO meekE ardhaM avutundi.

Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 20, Feb 2006 9:14:44 PM IST

subramaNyam gaaru ! kluptata gurinchi meeru cheppina vishayamtoa aekeebhavinchaDam laedu. kavitvaaniki kluptata eppuDoo praathamika lakshaNangaa laedu unDadu. alaanTi reDee maeD faarmulaalu kavitvaaniki laevu.

Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 20, Feb 2006 5:58:21 PM IST

alaagaenanDi subramaNyam gaaru ! Kiran gaaru ! adi aayana meeda eppaTinunDo unna vimarSa ani konta vivaristoo kindi kaamenTlaloanoo vyaasam loanoo raasaanu mari.aa parimitulloanae mottangaa Sivaa reDDi gurinchi unDaalsina anchanaa gurinchi kinda muginchaanu kooDaa.

Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 20, Feb 2006 5:33:17 PM IST

1. sariggaa idE naa pOyinT aandhruDu gaaru. aa prayatnaMlO bhaava, anubhUti kavitvaala meeda kaasta vyangyaM dhvaninchindi. SivaareDDi kavitvaanni pogaDDaaniki anubhUti kavitvaanni takkuvachEsi maaTaaDakkaralEdu ani naa uddESaM. 2. naaku telisee kluptata oka technique kaadu . adi kavitva praadhamika lakshaNaM. punarukti kavitvaaniki haani chEstundi. daaniki kiraN gaarichchina udaaharaNE nidarSanaM. 3. alaanTappuDu SilpaM gurinchi charcha jariginappuDu migataa goppa kavulu kuDaa meeku gurtuku raavaalE :) 4. ambiguity gurinchi tarvaata charchiddaaM. 5. adhivaastavikata kavitvaM gurinchi konni udaaharaNalu kOT chEstaanu. appuDu SivaareDDi kavitvaMlO adhivaastavikata enduku lEdannadee konta spashTamavachchu.

Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 20, Feb 2006 4:52:05 PM IST

@Subramnyam garu 1) Sivaa reDDi oka bhaava kavi kaadani bhautika vaada kavi ani cheppae prayatnam loanae alaa chepaDam jarigindi 2) repetition undi kaabaTTi daanni punarukti dosham anaDam sari ainadi kaadu. alaagae kluptata annadi kooDa oka technique . punarakti doaSam ani viDigaa nirvachinchi label vaeyaalsina avasaram laedu ani naa abhipraayam. ika vishayaaniki vastae Sivaa reDDi kavitalloa unna parimitulu gurinchi doashaala gurinchi chaeraatala gurinchi ee vyaasam loa aalreDee cheppabaDindi anukunTunnaa. 3) SivareDDidi ee roaju oka unique style anDi. anduloa adhivaastavikata, correlated thinking of unrelated aspects , prasaaraaSrita lakshaNaalu, vaakya nirmaaNamu taditara vishayaalloa eeyanakoa sTail` undi. adi SivareDDi ki maatramae an`vayinchadu goppa kavulandarikee vartistundi. nijamae adae naepathyamloanae eeyanakunDae uniqueness nu cheppaDa mainadi. 4) ambiguity ni elaa prayoaginchochchoa elaa SivaareDDi vaaDukunnaaDoa adi chaantaaDanta charcha avutundi. vyaasamloa ivva baDIna udaaharaNalu baTTi meeru conclusion ku raavochchu. inkaa meeku contention laeda different opinion unTae maiyil chaeyanDi. Taimu choosukuni pratyuttaram istaanu. 5) meeku aayana kavitaloa adhivaastavikata kanipinchalaedannaaru. enduku kaadoa vivarinchi unTae naenu enduku avunoa vivarinchi unDae vaanni. eneewae meeru cheppina kavitaa sankalanaalu tappaka chadutaanu 6 and 7 ) meerannaTTu intakanTae manchi vaakyaalu jaitra yaatraloa unnayannadi vaastavam. naa vaakya nirmaaNam loa reader ku konni choaTla praablam` avutundi ani meerichchina feed byaak ku kRutaNgatalu. aitae idantaa samayam laeka poavaDam valla jarigutundi. oka saari raasaaka maLLee proof chadivi aloachinchi poasT chaeyaTlaedu. eneewae meerichchina salahaanu khachchitangaa dRushTiloa peTTukuni maaksimam` prayatnistaanu. Kiran garu ! kavita madhyaloa Suddha vaakyam loaki digi poavaDam kavitvaaniki vachchina chaeTu laedu annaanu gaani Suddha vachanamae kavitvam ani analaedanDi. kavitvam madhyaloa aaksmikangaa Sudhdha vachanamloaki konta viraamamistoo enduku elaa digochchoa adi elaa sari ainadoa it is a subject by itself ani meeru apreeshiaeT chaestaarankukunTaa. ika meeru chooyinchina udaaharaNalu kaunTar chaestoo naenu vaerae kavitalu chooyinchaali. antakanTae mundu meeru Sivaa reDDi kavitvam loa etti choopina tappulu Sivaa reDDi kavitvam meeda 1980 la loa vachchina vimarSanae. aa vimarSa mottangaa naenu subscribe chaeyakapoayina...anduloa konta oppu undani oppukunToonae ee vyaasam loa adae etti choopaanu. alaagae kluptata gurinchi konta paina vivarinchaanu. kluptata annadi elaanTi Teknikkoa repitition kooDaa oka Teknik. kluptata paerutoa kavitvaanni elaa muginchochchoa repetition paerutoa kooDaa kavitvam muginchochchu. bottom line kavi renTini sadarbhoachitangaa elaa upayoaginchukunTunnaaDu annadi vishayam. # Nihar gaaru bhaava vaadam loa bhaagangaanae anubhooti vaada kavitvam vachchindanae abhipraayamtoa raasaanu. adae akkaDa riflekT ayyindanukunTaanu. meeru bhaava vaadam loa anubhooti vaadam loa saamaajika samasyala gurinchi raajakeeya samasyala gurinchi inkaa ae janaala samasya gurinchi fit avutundi anukunTae - naaku oppukoabuddi kaadu. alaanTi prayatnaalu jariginaa avi oka romanticism laa anipistaavae tappa anduloa nijaaniki aa vastuvu poortigaa imaDadu. ee vyaasam loa SivareDDi unique styles annee munduku teesukochchae prayatnam aemee peddagaa jaragalaedu nijaaniki. idi chaalaa chinna vyaasam oka broad estimation gurinchi. aa dRukpathamtoa oa saari vyaasam maLLee chadavagalarani vinnati. meeru cheppina pustakam chadavaDaaniki prayatnistaanu. naenu bhooloakamloa unDi meeku cheppukunaedaemanTae - kamyoonisT nibaddhata toa laeda viplava kavi anae spRuhatoa kavitvam raayaDam kavitaa prapanchamloa prakaTinchukoavaDam saadhaaraNa maina vishayam kaadu. anduku kaaraNaalu okaTi isolate aipoataamanae bhayam kaavachchu laedaa general prevailing resistance kaavachchu. nijaaniki ae samsthatoanoo pratyaksha parichayaalu laekunDaa nissankoachangaa prakaTinchukoavaDam loa Sivaa reDDi goppa tanamu undi( leelagaa ae samsthanu siddhaantaanni own chaesukoalaeni parimetee undi). meeru ichchina Ngaana guLikalatoa meeru diagnose chaesina naa aNgaanaanni toliginchukoaDaaniki naa Saaya Saktulaa prayatnistaanistaanu. vara vara raavuku kalyaaNa raavuku jarigina veedhi bhaagoatam aenTi? naaku teleedu appuDappuDU paeparloa poaleesulu ichchina prakaTanalu tappa. vyaktula madhya jarigina veedhi bhaagoataaniki manam jaruputunna charchaku sambandham artham ayinappuDu khachchitangaa charcha chaestaa. elaagoo meerichchina prescription undi..:) ========= Sivaa reDDi oka adbhutamaina kavi...oka yuga kavi... oka chaaritra karta.... ani venTanae ippuDae conclusion ku vachchae prayatnam aemee laedu ikkaDa. anduku inkaa boleDu Taimu undi. adi - saahityam loa aayana poashinchina paatra aayan contribution entoa charitra nirNayistundi. aitae saahitee priyulugaa manam gamaninchavalasindaemanTae - Sivaa reDDi loa oka uniqueness undi. atani parimitula gurinchi atanikunna avagaahana intavaraku ekkaDaa bayaTa paDallaedu. Sivaa reDDi loa chaalaa mandi contemporary poets laa laeni oka nibaddhata undi. ataniloa romantic thoughts ( anTae praema ani confuse avvaddu ) unna kavi kaadu. ataniloa oka banDa sunnitatvam undi. ataniloa viplava kavi ki kavaalsina empathy undi. Sivaa reDDiku oka kaviki kaavaalsina individuality undi. kaabaTTae oka ' isTu' ayyaaDu. adee oka kaaraNam kaabaTTi roTeen` kavitvam loa koTTuku poalaedu.

Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 20, Feb 2006 1:14:28 PM IST

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