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| You are a simple nothing and a big cipher in the field of Telugu literature. You are not fit to write anything about poetry. O BAratamAta, chitakagoTTabaDina mAnaM nIdi aMTU sAgipOyE kavitalani prAmANikaMgA eMchukunnappuDE we could understand your level. Stop posting your worthless comments.
Posted by: Mr. Trivikrama At: 12, Nov 2006 7:02:22 PM IST
విమర్శ గురించి విశ్వ గారు వ్రాసిన వ్యాసంతో ఏకీభవిస్తాను. వ్యాసం గురించి మరో విస్తారమైన చర్చ పాఠకుల వ్యాఖ్యలలో సాగుతోందని చూసి, కొంత వరకు చదివాను కానీ ఇంకా చాలా చదవాలి అక్కడ. తరువాత కనిపిస్తా...నేమో! (నేను తె.పీ. కి రావటం ఎప్పుడో ఒకసారే... గుర్తుపెట్టుకుని వచ్చే ప్రయత్నం చేస్తాను.)
Posted by: Mr. Kiran Chakravarthula At: 22, Sep 2006 2:35:08 AM IST
monnaTivarakU rashyaa , kamyUnijaala prabhaavam , udyamaala prabhaavam abhyudaya kavitvam pei umdi. adi oka yugaavasaram.
pIDituDu pedda baagupaDi pOlEdu I naaTikI.
imtalOnE glObaleijEshan tOsukumTU vachchimdi.
InaaDu prapamchIkaraNa kavitvam pei tana prabhaavaanni chUpakumDaa elaa umTumdi?.
I maarpulaki komta alajaDi umTumdi. aamdOLana umTumdi. kavitvam daari maLLutOdanna bhayam umTumdi. ardham chEsikOdaggadE adi.
maarpu sahajam. ayitE saahityam E rUpamlO unnaa marimta merugeina samaajamE daani moulika laxyam EnaaTikI. amdulO bhaagameina kavitvaanikI minahaayimpu lEdu I vishayamlO......
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 21, Sep 2006 5:32:38 PM IST
manchi charchE jarugutOndE! kAmESvara rAvu gAritO EkIbhavistAnu. anni kavitaa reetulanU okE kolabadda meeda vimarSinchakUDadu. praacheenakaavyaalanu prastuta charchalOni teesukuraakUDadu. naakEmanipistundanTE kAlaMtO paaTu kavitvaM kUDaa maaripOtundi. tilak kUDaa oka daggara idE anTaaDu. yuga yugaanikee kavitva svabhaavaM maaripOtundani. aitE paipaina kavitvaM enta maarinaa konni maulika lakshaNaalu maatraM okaTE. agnijallinA , amRutaM kurisinaa andaM aanaMdaM daani paramaavadhi.
ika SreeSree tana aatmakathalO cheppukunnaTTu mahaaprasthaanaM raasina rOjullO durbara daaridryaanni anubhavinchaaDu. aa tirugubaaTununchee, maanasika svEchChanunchE mahaaprasthaana gEyaalu puTTaayi. andukE vaaTilO anta balaM unTundi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 21, Sep 2006 11:27:11 AM IST
ViSwagArU, I charcha nAku koMta AsaktikaligistOMdi kAbaTTi konasAgistunnAnu. mIku visuganipistE eppuDainA Apeyyavachchu.
pOtana mahAbhaktuDanaTAniki atani padyAlu chAlavA annAru. kavi chEsE rachanalu atani vyaktitwAnni paTTistAyanna vAdanalO nAku pUrti nammakaM lEdu. kavi vyaktitwaM atani kavitalalO pratiphaliMchavachchu, lEkapOvachchukUDA. adi kavitA rUpAnni baTTikUDA uMDavachchu. udAharaNaki 'kaLApUrNOdayaM' chadivi piMgaLisUrana ilAMTi vADu ani cheppaDaM kashTaM. adE dhUrjaTi kALahastISwara SatakaM chadivi dhUrjaTi vyaktitwAnni aMchanA veyyavachchu. SatakAlu sAdhAraNaMgA AtmanivEdanA dhOraNilOvi kAbaTTi. adE oka kathAkAvyamO, purANamO tIsukuMTE akkaDa kavi vyaktitwaM kannA, kathalOni aMSamE pradhAnamautuMdi. aMdulOnU kavi vyaktitwa mudrapaDavachchu kAnI, adi eMtavarakU annadi telusukODAniki SAstrIyamaina vidhAnamEdI nAku telisi lEdu. iMkA, kavi kAlaM nATi samAjika paristhitulu aMchanAvEsE prayatnAlu jarigAyi.
Adhunika kavitArItulatO prAchInakAvyAlanu bErIju veyyaDaM sarikAdannAru. dAnitO nEnu nUTiki nUrupALLU EkIbhavistAnu. nA pointkUDA adE. vividha kavitArItulaki, vividha pramANAluMTAyi. anniTini okE kolabaddatO vimarSiMchaDaM maMchidi kAdu.
SrISrI pEru prastAviMchaDaMlO nA uddESaM atani kavitwa pramANAlani bErIjuveyyaDaM kAdu. atani kavitwaM anubhUti kavitwaM kAdu ani cheppaDamE. SrISrIdi prajala anubhUtini tana anubhUtigA chEsukunE prayatnaM. ismAyil di tana anubhUtini prajala anubhUtigA chEsE prayatnaM.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Rao Bh At: 20, Sep 2006 11:11:58 PM IST
mamchitanaaniki, saMyamanaanikI, viluvalaki paTTam kaTTE sahRudaya sabhyulatO viraajillutunna telugupIpul DaaT kaam lO 'kRushNa kRushNa' anna naa pEruni peTTukuni mOsagistU naa ai,Di. ni oka axaram maarputO mariyu profeil ni yadhaatadhamgaa kaapI chEsi gamdaragOLapu messEjilatO , tiTlatO ikkaDi vaarinamdarinI tappudOva paTTistunna phraaD ai.Di.ni tolagimchi aayaa messEjilani kUDaa DilIT chEyamani Ti.pI. DaaT kaam vaariki savinaya pUrvaka manavi.....
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 20, Sep 2006 4:32:38 PM IST
savivaramgaa nirUpimchEsariki samaadhaanam cheppalEkanO , sen#s aaph hyUmar tO ichchina messEjiki adE sphUrtitO riplei ichchina tarvaata baadhapaDO tappuDu vidhaanaalalO naa ai.Di. kaajEyaDam ikkaDunna evarikI mamchi pani kaadu. naa ai.Di. lO numDi nannE tiTTukuTunnaTlu fraaD messEjis istunna vaariki , amduku anni vidhaalaa sahakaristunna vaariki ikkaDa manavi. tappu chEstunnaaru. tagadu idi....
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 20, Sep 2006 1:20:32 PM IST
naa ai. Di evarO domgilimchi tappuDu messEjes istunnaaru naa pEru mIda. viSvaa gaarU mIku naa mIda kOpam tIralEdaa mIku inkaa?.......
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 20, Sep 2006 11:42:56 AM IST
okE kavitaki maroka kavi spamdimchE vidhaanam okaTeitE, Saastra veikhari kaligina vaaru marOlaa aalOchistaaru, vyaakaraNa vEtta viSlEshimchE vidhaanam vEru. paaThakuDi abhipraayam marOlaa umTumdi. mana vyaktigatameina abhiruchulu chUsE vaaTiki aarOpistU idi kavita lEdaa akavita ani tElchi cheppEyaDam emta varakU samamjasam ?. akavita anETappuDu baadhyata avasaram. daanni nirUpimchavalsivastumdi. I rOjullO saahitI vimarSa astavyastamgaa, aatmaaSrayamgaa , abhipraaya pradhaanamgaa umTOmdi. pratyEkimchi okariddarini ani prayOjanam lEdu. kavitvamlO vastunna maarpulaki samaamtaramgaa vimarSakuDu panimuTlanu samarchukOlEdu. paata vaaTini aadhunIkarimchukOlEdu.
vimarSa nirdaaxiNyamgaa umDaTamlO tappu emta maatramU lEdu. nirdaaxiNyatE vimarSa ani vimarSakuDu bhaavimchanU akkarlEdu.
anubhavam lEni vaaDu anubhUti chemdani vaaDu abhivyaktam chEyaDaaniki EmI umDadu. ayitE svayamgaa anubhavimchimdi kavitaa baddam chEyaDam lEdaa vyaktigata anubhavaallOmchi pomdina anubhUtE 'anubhUti kavitvaanni ' puTTistumdi anE remDu abhipraayaalu samagram kaavani anipistOmdi. sahaanubhUti anE marO emTiTI umTumdikkaDa.
kavi anubhUtini paaThakuDitO pamchukOvaDam bhaava kavita dhyEyam. paaThakuDini kaanI SrOtalO kaanI bhaava chaitanyaanni kaligimchi kaaryaacharaNaki prErEpimchaDam abhyudaya kavitva laxaNam kaabaTTi SrI SrI ni abhyudaya kavi amTunnaam.
praachIna kavitvam lO puraaNaalu kadhaa pradhaanameinamta maatraana vaaTini akavitvamanE anE dammu evarikI umDadu. EvO konni anubhUtulani darSimchi vaaTivallE avi sarvajanInamayyaayani sUtrIkarimchaDamU tappE. vaaTilO ChamdObaddameina padyaala rUpamlO kavitvam umdi. alaagE prabamdhaalu varNanaa praadhaanyam kaavaDam valla kavitvam kaakumDaa pOvu.
anubhUti kavitvamE asalu kavitvamanE bhaavana sareimdi kaadu. marO vishayam abhyudaya kavitvam tarvaata nETi kavitvam (aadhunika kavitvam ) vastu rUpamlO, vishaya rUpamlO ennO maarpulni pomdutOmdi. vaaTini ardham chEsikOvaali. lEdamTE prayatnamannaa chEyaali. chadavagaanE ChaTukkuna kavita anO akavita anO sTaampimg vEsEstE elaa? . akavitalani kavitalanamani emta maatram cheppaDamlEdu nEnikkaDa. pramaaNaalani sarichUsukOmani maatramE manavi. mahaakavi SrI SrI ChamdO bamdObastulanniTinI ChaT.. phaT mani tempEddaamanTE chappaTlu koTTina chEtulu nETi maarpulakI aahvaanam palakaDaaniki peddamanasu chEsikOkapOtE elaa?. evariki ishTam unnaa lEkunnaa maarpu aagadu.
nIhaar nIhaar gaarU
akkaDa goDla kaapari naaTakam padyaalu paaDukuni aanamdistumTE mIrikkaDa marokariki'vamta paaDutU' aanamdistunnaaranna maaTa :).....
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 20, Sep 2006 7:16:22 AM IST
kaamESvarraavu gaaru, mee aatmavimarSa, nijaayitee abhinaMdaneeyaM. i am also a student of poetry. welcome to the club:)
while we wait for viswa's opinion, SrISrI kavitvaM guriMchi mee abhipraayamEmiTi? meerichchina anubhooti kavitvapu nirvachanaM chaTraMlO SrISrI kavitvaM imaDagaladaa? nippulu chimmukuMToo niMgikegurutuMTE nibiDaaScharyaMtO veerE anna kavitaa, kooTi kOsaM kooli kOsaM paTTaNaMlO batukudaamani bayalu dErina baaTasaari anubhavaalu, saMdhyaasamasyalu ivEvee SrISrI anubhaviMchakuMDaanE raaSaaraMTaaraa? lEdE... mari mee nirvachanaM prakaaraM SrISrI anubhooti kavitvaM raayalEdaa? meerE kaadu mana samakaaleena saahityakaarulaMdaroo kooDaa mee nirvachanamE cheppinaa SrISrIni anubhooti kavigaa parigaNiMchareMduku?
aMdukE anubhooti kavitvamannadi oka pElavamaina lEbil ani annaanu. nijaaniki karuNamukhyaM anna pustakaMlO ismaayil gaaru svayaanaa anubhooti kavitvamanna bhaavana elaa modalaiMdO chebutaaru. veeluMTE chadavaMDi.
maralaaMTappuDu SrISrI kavitvaaniki ismaayil kavitvaaniki tEDaanE lEdaa? uMTE ekkaDuMdi? prastutaaniki praajekTu pani. ee charcha mareppuDainaa. :)
Posted by: Mr. nihaar nihar At: 20, Sep 2006 0:53:05 AM IST
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