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Articles: Short Stories | | Ammaa ....naakuu Bhaarya kaavaali | |
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waav jayaajee chaa........la baagundi ekkaDaa bOr koTTalEdu kaLLamundu jarugutunnaTTo ledaa maa vaaLLevarO pakkana kuarchuni ilaa ilaa jarigindiraa ani chebutunnaTTugaanO vundi chaalaa baaga kaLLaku kaTTinaTlu raasaaru meeku chaalaa TaalenTundi ilaanTi aaNimutyalennO mee nunchi eduruchuastua ..:)
ee Okka kshaNamaina ( mee kadhalO bhaavanni panchukunna )......mee bharya ha ha ha
Posted by: Mrs. Vennela...:) At: 10, Jul 2008 9:52:44 AM IST
Upodgatham bagane vundhi, kaani bharya kavali ane yendhuku pettaru? aa place lo sedaniche manchi nestham kavali ano ledaa athmeeyatha kuripinche vallu kavalano cheppochu kadaa ante baarya mathrame santhoshanni isthundaa? bartha ivvadaa, snehithulu ivvaraa?
Yee roju prapancham parigeduthu vundhi, daanitho patu prathi okkaru parigethali barya bartha, musali mithaka, pilla jella andaru yee prayanam lo alasi povadam anedhi nijame, yevaro vachi seda theerchali ani korukune badulu thamu yentha mandhiki seda theersuthunnamu ani alochisthey konchem manasanthi ayinaa miguluthundhi....
Yee katha lo barya thanaku inko barya kavali ani korukune badulu, thana samsyalanu artham chesukonelaa bartha kuthuru vunte bagunnu ani rasi vunte justification kudiredhi....
Posted by: Mr. Theja Narendra Choudary At: 29, Apr 2008 2:26:17 PM IST
Hello Jaya garu,
This is a very nice reading.Unfortunately I could guess the justification of the title in the first few lines but that has not stopped me from enjoying the read thanks to the beautiful style of narration adopted by you.
Regarding your reaction to the so called 'controversy', I would say its uncalled for because all the readers are equally matured enough to understand the context this was written or it was supposed to mean.You will always have a one or two odd replies but the best way to deal them is to ignore them rather than reacting and giving an unncessary attention to which they dont deserve.Some people fail to relish the subtle messages given in the story and show more interest in reading between lines and try to invent new repulsive conclusions.
The best part with people like you is that you motivate more and more fence sitters(thinking of writing)to plunge into it.(may be I am one of them)
Looking forward to reading more from you.
Posted by: Mr. Srinivasa Rao Kunchala At: 25, Apr 2008 1:51:51 AM IST
Hi all,
Before somebody else blowout all over me. I decided to explain the title choosen. It has nothing to do with the living in relation-ships of same-sex in US or anywhere else.
The senstive part of the story is the lead-character is potrayed as a person who is in a situation where there is nobody to go to. So, she needs a motherly-affection/friend/support.
I am sure, this story was not that controvertial that the author is made to give an explanation. But I intend to explain it.
Posted by: Ms. Jaya Sangasani At: 18, Mar 2008 10:20:36 AM IST
CM gaaru,
I didn't mean to disrespect you. And in case if you felt it then I sincerely appologize.
Thanks again for your comments.
Thanks Telugugirl for trying to explain the issue more clearly.
Posted by: Ms. Jaya Sangasani At: 18, Mar 2008 9:02:49 AM IST
CM gaaru, your comment is little bit too strong.
She just described one bad day, not that it is going to be the same every day. You are suggesting women work because they are greedy.
Who does not like financial independence? I have quit work for a short while in between and noticed a lot of difference in the attitudes of the people around me. I still feel the breadwinner gets lot of importance in the indian families and there is nothing wrong if the woman wants a little bit of a share in it.
About housework, I think we indians are pampered by all the servants and our mothers. We should appreciate american society in that regard. Right form kids, they learn to cleanup after themselves.
It is nothing wrong to develop such habits in your family.
Basically women should stop trying to be superwomen and enjoy their life too by sharing the responsibility with the whole family.
Posted by: Mrs. telugugirl telugugirl At: 17, Mar 2008 10:05:43 PM IST
Kamalji Gaaru,
Thanks that you liked the flow of the story.
Just an FYI...I do not support any kind of vaadam...starting from 'abc'..vaadam to 'xyz'..vaadam. My story reflects so many facts that American working women face. That's all.
Posted by: Ms. Jaya Sangasani At: 17, Mar 2008 8:14:17 PM IST
CM Sir, I am not retd to reply to all your so called arguments thanks for your time.
I guess you are trying to be a great critic.
Yeah right.
Keep posting. Good luck.
Posted by: Ms. Jaya Sangasani At: 17, Mar 2008 7:36:08 PM IST
mottaaniki streevaadulloa..kuuDa purushula aaloachanalostunnaayi..! katha, kathanaM anTae Saili chaalaa baagunnaayi..! alaage..ee kathaloa..samasya oka koaNaM nunDae undi..inkoa koaNaM loa..kuuDa illaanTivae vaere samasyalunDochchu..! ayinaa..manishiki..eTuvanTi samasya laekunDa jeevanaM saagistae..sukhaaniki inkaa viluvaemi unTundi..!
Posted by: Mr. కమల్ At: 17, Mar 2008 5:21:15 PM IST
kashTaanni swaardham tO pOlchagalagaTam meekE chellindi. kaani AlOchana inkaa baavundi, vachchE bhaaryani kuDaa sampaadanalOki tOstE 6 chEtulaa vastundi kadaa.....Nice Idea. Thanks
Posted by: Ms. Jaya Sangasani At: 16, Mar 2008 8:35:31 PM IST
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