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Articles: Poetry | | goppavAram&avudAM | |
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| abhiprAyAlanu telugulO rAyamani manavi
Posted by: Bullibasu Bullibasu At: 3, Jul 2008 8:26:30 PM IST
dear friend, i like your poem because it is so simple that each one can understand and take it as a good message,
but having regard to the technique of poetry,you need not write the last three lines... all the best...Dr.Ravi Rangarao
Posted by: Dr. rangarao raavi At: 1, Jul 2008 6:17:31 PM IST
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