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| One among those best writes.A very initiative write.
manavali gurinchi pakana pedithey
meeru nindu nurellu bagundali ani korukuntunannu as there are so many concepts which need to take a form of a word from your pen which will ignite so many innerselves.I believe there is shortage of words to praise your writes.
Posted by: Sudeshna At: 11, Jul 2008 3:42:09 PM IST
Saanthi nelakonaalani kOrukundaam
'sarvEjanaa sukhinObhavantua '
'lOkaa samastaa sukhinO bhavantu'
' Om Saanti Saanti Saantihi '
Posted by: Mrs. Vennela...:) At: 10, Jul 2008 11:20:54 AM IST
Saanti nelakonaalani kOrukundaam
'sarvEjanaa sukhinObhavantua '
'lOkaa samastaa sukhinO bhavantu'
' Om Saanti Saanti Saantiki '
Posted by: Mrs. Vennela...:) At: 10, Jul 2008 11:19:41 AM IST
namaskaaram,
very good poem...all is ok... only one word should be changed instead of 'dhuuli'.. try to change with a positive upamaanam... all the best... Ravi Rangarao 9247581825
Posted by: tharun marella At: 9, Jul 2008 8:14:51 PM IST
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