|  |  | 
| Articles: Poetry |  | maradalu pilla |  |
 |  |  | Sorry to comment. There is nothing appealing in this Kavitha.
There should be good at least one of the following
  1) Content 
  2) Feeling
  3) Presentation
But I do not see anything except confusion.
I guess you talent but need little more tuning, so that you can give nice poetry. 
 Posted by:  jhon Reddygaru At: 11, Sep 2008 10:26:43 PM IST
 hi chala baga raasaaru
 
 Posted by: Mr. johnny johnny At: 11, Sep 2008 2:47:33 PM IST
 
 |  |
 |  | 
|  |  | Advertisements |  |  |  |  |  
|  |  | Advertisements |  |