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Articles: Poetry | | ప్రేమికా నీవెవరు? | |
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| Jhon gaaru exact gaa nenu em anukunnaano adi cheppaadu..
ye kavithakainaa starting and ending should be perfect and excellent.
If you had tried changing few words or meaning in the end, it would have come so nicelyyyyyyyy..
anyhow it was a nice attempt..
keep writing.
all the best..
Posted by: Mr. Raghu Raghu At: 27, Apr 2009 6:08:48 PM IST
divya gaaru
kavita baaguMdi. ayitae chivari kochchae sariki kan pyUjan modalayiMdi.
modaTi lainu chadivi napuDu praemikuDevaro telisi, duaram kaavaDaM valana viraham toa, vraaSaaranu konnaanu.
chivarikochchae sariki praemikuDevaDO teliyakuMDaanae imta viraham kalagaDam anaedi artham kaalaedu.
Posted by: jhon Reddygaru At: 28, Mar 2009 1:18:21 AM IST
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