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Articles: Poetry | | **peLLi ** | |
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| anukooluDu dorikE rOjaa?
pratee peLLikoDukoo anukooluDu ani cheppalEmu..
alaagE prati peLLi kooturu anukooluraalEmee kaadu.
jeevita bhaagaswaami dorikE rOju ani anTE saripOtundEmO !
iru arachEtulu kalisE rOjaa?
arachEtulu kalavaDamEmiTo krotta kaamsepT gaa vundi ... chiTikena vrElu kalavaTam choosaam kaanee ..!
idea and concept is good and it would have been better if it is stuffed with some more lines with meanigful sentences . over all it is a good one .
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 13, Apr 2004 9:45:05 AM IST
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