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Articles: Poetry | | prEmaa.... | |
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| bagundi snehaji
ram
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Perugu At: 13, Apr 2004 9:26:17 PM IST
chaalaa baagundi
Posted by: Mrs. Vidya K At: 13, Apr 2004 8:23:20 PM IST
bagundhi andi Sneha sarma garu
Posted by: Mr. VidyaPrasad Prasad At: 13, Apr 2004 6:32:59 PM IST
Simple words with excellant meaning.Keep going
Posted by: Mr. Sarma DLN At: 13, Apr 2004 2:34:09 PM IST
except the last line everything is very good .
last line didn't fit properly in the flow , i feel.
vadilEyamaaku nannilaa
vEDigaa vundi vennela
anatam kanTe
same words use chesi
vadilEyamaaku nannilaa vonTarigaa
naa prEmanu chEyaku aDavi kaachina vennelagaa
anE meening vachchETTu raasi vunTE inkaa baagunDEdEmO !
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 13, Apr 2004 9:58:57 AM IST
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