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| Sarma gAru
anubhavAla tAlUku punAdulu pUrvajan&malO uMTAyi aMTE ippuDu manaku edurayE anubhavAlu annI mana pUrvajan&ma swayaMkRutAlu, RuNAnubaMdhAlu. dAnnE kadA manaM puNyafalaM lEdA pApafalaM ani aMTAmu.
chikkulu dikkulu choostunnaayi aMTE ikkaDa nA uddESyaM : Looking at the road for the person to come so that they can have their prey.
mI abhiprAyAniki nA kRutajNjatalu
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 25, May 2004 12:52:25 PM IST
baagumdi
kaanivaaLLadaggara kanniiLLu peTTalaemu, ayinavaariki kanniiLLu chuupalaemu. idi chaalaa baagumdi.
anubhavaala taaluuku punaadulu puurvajanmaloe umTaayani janavaakyam. idi komchem ardhamkaavaTam laedu
chikkakumDaa pakkakeLadaamamTae chikkulu dikkulu chuustunnaayi
dikkulu chuustuu nilchoevaDam amTae Emii cheyyalaeka nilchoevaDam ani anaDaaniki badulugaa vaaDataaraemo.kaakapoeyinaa kaakapoevachchu.
mottam miida mii Saili maatram praSamSaniiyam. mamchi bhavishyattu umdanipistoemdi
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 5, May 2004 3:44:20 PM IST
ok..prasanthi
than Q
pothe ..
maro peradi kavitha pampanu.chhuusaava..
bagunte site lo pettedi
ram
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Perugu At: 13, Apr 2004 9:39:17 PM IST
. ammalU.. IkavitalO eMta hRudayavEdana nimDi
vuMdOkadA!! viShAdham, nirliptalalO bhAvataraMgAla tAkiDiki taTTukonE Sakti kavitvaMlOnEvuMdanibAgA
nirUpiMchAvu. bAdhAtapta hRudayAlaku I gEyaM koMteinA mAnasika vUraTa kaligistuMdi. nijaMgA vidhi balIyameiMdi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 13, Apr 2004 2:32:55 PM IST
Murali garu,
Thanks for your comments. This is what one expects from a reader in comments section. Edi nachcimdi, edi nachchaledu, elaa raaste baagumdi umtundi, ilaamti oka analysis iste, Writer can know.
I don't think so that there is a break in the flow. It depicts the psychological trauma of the person from present situation to what next... and at the end a realization that no one can do anything and there is some higher ordinance which controls us.(No matter whether we agree or disagree). This can be understood only one faces few blows. That is what elderly people name 'Experiences'. Ofcourse one should not be deterred and should keep hope, be positive, fight and face, face and fight, and should learn lessons and apply them.
Ultimate goal should be 'Live life to the fullest and enjoy each and every moment, if not king size. Nothing is going to stay and nothing is permanent. Change is the only thing which doesn't change'. What do you say?
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 13, Apr 2004 12:33:07 PM IST
prasanthi ,
chaalaa baagaa raasaaav . particularly
1) kaani vaari daggara kalla neellu pettalemu
ayina vaariki kallaneellu choopettalemu
2) third degree treatment dayagala devudu koodaa
istaadani ippudippude arthamavuthondhi
3) kooluthunna bhavanthini krungakundaa aapaleru
kurustunna varsham lo tadavakundaa niluvaleru
6th stanza maatram madyalo chinna speed breaker laagaa anipinchindhi.
8th stanza lo 3rd & 4th line place lo just single line vundi vunTE baagunDEdEmO
konni plEses lO pOeTik gaa rithamik gaa vunDi konni plEses lO vaakyaalu pleyin gaa vunnayi ..
baT iT ees haarT Taching ..
inkaa cheppaalanTE
manasuni sarf lO vEsi pinDi aarEsindi ee kavita
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 13, Apr 2004 10:48:14 AM IST
mee article chala bagundandi. really very nice.
Posted by: Ms. kusumalatha k.v.n At: 12, Apr 2004 9:20:11 PM IST
Thank you Sir. I am not worried or de-spirited. As long as I receive encouragement from you, sujana garu and Jayaprada garu, I will continue my writing. Thank you.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 12, Apr 2004 1:18:39 PM IST
kavitha bagundi prasanthi.,aithe x-ray vallaki
samajika spriha meeda rasinave gelustuntai.,
don't worry.
ramkrishna
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Perugu At: 11, Apr 2004 4:48:03 PM IST
kavitha bagundi prasanthi.,aithe x-ray vallaki
samajika spriha meeda rasinave gelustuntai.,
don't worry.
ramkrishna
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Perugu At: 11, Apr 2004 4:46:43 PM IST
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