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Articles: Short Stories | | Syndrilla gets Liberated | |
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| when will u write another story ?? @Shobha.
Posted by: Miss Prakruthi At: 5, Dec 2004 8:57:47 PM IST
Shobha garu,
it is like a narration to a small child...u need to improve ur style of writing...
u shud first go thru stories of others (may b upcoming or famous authors) and news articles.. it'll help u to shape ur new ideas...try reading yendamoori's success to five steps..it opens the hidden talents..u need to have a strong story line..
wishin u all the best and hopin for a very good story..
Voice of revolution.
Posted by: Voice of revolution At: 2, Dec 2004 5:38:49 PM IST
Hello shobha garu,
naa peru sunanda.
nenu mee short story sydrilla chadivaanu.
chaala baagundi story.
i really appreciate it.
meeru ilaanti stories inka rayalani aasisthu ...
sunanda
Posted by: Miss lakshmi sunanda LAKSHMI SUNANDA At: 20, Jul 2004 9:57:12 AM IST
EE story kalpithamu.
In the old story cyndrilla gets liberated with the help of a prince and a fairy....
Here she walks out of the house and becomes independent and self dependent thus getting liberated......
Anyway this is my first attempt for a story.I will take the comments sportively.Wish me best of luck....
Posted by: Miss shobha cherukupalli At: 6, May 2004 5:48:23 PM IST
hello shobha...antha Impressivegaa ledandi.... :(
It lacks 'punch'.
Posted by: Mr. Bhanuprakash P At: 5, May 2004 4:53:37 PM IST
Ee story inthakumundu vinaledu but waz interesting...I thought, it iz the old Cinderella story but itz different...
Posted by: UK At: 5, May 2004 2:08:57 PM IST
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