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Articles: Poetry | | Vandeemaatharam | |
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| hello viplove garu,
enti chala rojula tharuvaatha mail chesaaru.
Choosara mimmalni meeru mosaginchukuntunnaru amma or aunty iddaru same antunnaru kaani mee manassakshinadigithe thelustundi meeru annadi correct or wrong. Emantaaru.
Enti emannaru meeru only good and bad ee rentinee nammuthara sare edi manchii edi chedo kooda chebuthe baavuntundeemo? Ade kaka people ani kooda meeru mention chesaru according to you who are the good and bad people ?Either Indians or Pakistanies?
Saree meerannatte anukundaam
A Amma thanu brathakadam kosam thana kanna biddalani bali cheyyalani anukodu. thalli premanu thakkuvagaa anchanaa veyakandi plz.
avunandi ammaku gunde kaavalani pakkintaavidanu champi gundenu thesukuraavadam thappe ?
kaani ikkada samasya adi kaadu
amma gundenu edo aatavastuvu annattugaa pakkintaavida pillalu adukovalani choostunnappudu ee poursam kala bidda aina oorukogalada thana thallini rakshinchokoovataaniki thana pranalanu kooda lekka cheyyakundaa valla daggaranchi amma gundenu dakkinchukoovalanu
kuntadu adi tappa? anthe kaani chetha kaani cheva leni biddala vundaru? emantaaru?
ahhhhha
santhi ni appu thechukovatam tappu gani unna santhi ni dwamsam chestu
araachakaanni stustinstuntee poradi saadinchu koovatamlo tappu ledanu kuntaanu?
ok what ever it my be thanks for ur comment friend
keep criticising me.
ok bye
Posted by: Miss vanirathna surya At: 19, Nov 2002 7:13:36 PM IST
Madam,
accidentally i checked this poem again and surprised to see ur ansers for muy comments here.If u wanted to answer u might have sent me a mail. How do u expect me to come here again and search for ur answers?? i wont get intimated by this site if u answer like this, ok?? if u want to say anything to me plz mail to me.
Regarding to ur questions for me, whatever i may call, "amma" or "aunty", i love evryone the same. I dont love bad people just if they happen to be related by blood to me. I belive in GOOD and Bad thats all.
Ok, anyway its ur views u expecte in this poem, its up to u.
Amma vishayamlonaina sare swartham manchidi kaadu.Maa amm bratakataniki gunde kaavalani cheppinantha maatraane nenu pakkintavidanu champi avida gunde teesukuraanu.
Similarly for the peace in my country i dont like to take it away from other countries.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 19, Nov 2002 4:01:50 PM IST
Hello Mr.Viplove garu ..!
Mee comment 3ed Para Chusthee .. Mee Mediacal College loo raging Ekkuvee Anipisthondi.
Nenu, Naa .. Anee Bhavamee Lekuntee Meru Ila Chaduvukuntundi Vundaru .. Ounaa? Antati Intension Naranaraana Lekuntee Mana Sodarulu Sarihaddulloo Paharaa Kasthoo Manalni Rakhshincharu.
Antenduku .. Vandemataram Antee Vadalu Pongee Spandana Vundabatee .. ARRehman Matramee Aa songs compose Cheyyagaligadu.Tanakantee Mundu Konni Vandalaadimandi Music compose Chesinaa Elanti Aalochana Vallaki Vachindaa??
Manaloni Bhavalanu Anusarinchee .. Ee Prapanchanni Manam Chudagalam.
Manaloo Antati Ghadapu Bhavana Vuntenee Manameedainaa Cheyyagalam .. Ikkada Vandemataram Antee Mana Desamee Kadu Meru, Mee Kutumbam, Mee career .. Ilaa Pratee Dantloonoo applicable.Vandemataramantee Vandaladi Spoorthidayaka Bhavala .. Samaharam .. Adi Edo Oka Daniki Sambhandinchindi Kadu.
Meru Cheputunnadaaninibatti .. Prapamchamantaa Manadee.. Antoo Videshaloo setelle Aipoyettunnaru.
Antachadivaka .. Nannu military loo join Avvamani Vuchita Salaha Ivvoddu.
Feeling loo intensity Chudandi Kani .. " Melantivallantaa Raktam Dharaposthee Ee Prapamcham Antaa Bolood too Nindutundi .." Whatz this nonsense words.. u've used!!
Mee Bhava Vyaktikarana Hakkuku Nenu Addupadinattunnaa .. I don't say sorry.
Posted by: ChandramSetti ChandraSekhar At: 30, Oct 2002 9:51:54 PM IST
Hi Ms Vanirathna Surya Garu I am Ramesh Babu from kuwiat
Just I read your poem on this site about Vandemataram. I feel you gave a gift to our telugu people specially who are real Indians who loves India who likes India. I request to more people who have a pen power like you to write some thing more about our India and about our Indian people and Indian culture to know about India to every body. Nice poem keep it up have a good luck . JAI HIND
Posted by: Mr. RAMESH BABU POLUMURI At: 29, Oct 2002 9:13:53 PM IST
namaste mr.viplove k garu,
mee comment challa baagundandi mee dorani loo alochiste meeru cheppindi correctee kaanee entha mandi ee prapancham anthaa okkatee ani aalochstunnaru cheppandi.
andaroo okelaa aalochincharu kadandi swarthamtho aalochincheevallu koodaa untaaru.
naavishayaanikostee maatram adee desam vishayamlo ante nenu swarthaparuraalnee.
okka vishayam sootigaa adaganaa andi meeru mee ammanu preminchi nanthagaa pakkinti auntynoo leka edurinti pinninoo preminchaleru endukani cheppagalara vaallu kooda manalaanti pillalni kani penchinavallee ayinaa manam vallanu aunty anee pilustamu kaanee amma ani pilavam kadandi endukoo kaaranam cheppamantee meeru emi chebuthaarandi.
aa kaaranaanee neenu ippudu meeku samaadanamgaa cheppananu kondi.
ofcource naa abhiprayam tho andaroo eekeebhavinchaalani neenu kooru koovatam ledu kaani kondarainaa naalaa alochinchevallu untaarani neenu aasistunnanu.
once again thanks for your valueble comment andi
thank you very much.
anukuntee andaram
manamanthaa maanavulam
endukanee ee bedabhavam
jarugadulee aa maaranahomam
saagadulee ee daarunakaandam
etu choosinaa prasaantham
avuthundi ee prapancham
from
vanirathna.s
Posted by: Miss vanirathna surya At: 29, Oct 2002 12:42:33 PM IST
i am very sorry for ur socalled PATRIOTISM, which u expressed in ur poem. I always feel that the word, "us"or "manam" refers all humanbeings on this earth, let they beindians or pakistanies or americans or anyone, but we are all the same.
"matru bhumi" shouldnt mean the place at which we are born or the country of it, We all belong to mother earth only.
just like we respect our country others also do, may it be a pakistani or an afghanistani.
what do u mean by saying that we will spill our blood for our country??? if ppl of every nation thinks like this, the world will be full of blood seas.
blood is very precious, it can give life, it shouldnt be wasted for taking lives away. if someone who read ur poem takes it another way and becomes ready to lose his life unnecessarily for the sake of patriotism, r u not responsible for it?? plzz think about it.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 29, Oct 2002 11:05:22 AM IST
Hi vain garu,
ITs realy excellent keep it up and waiting for more poems from ur pen.
sreeni
Posted by: Mr. M.S.Reddy At: 28, Oct 2002 10:28:33 PM IST
Entertainment Kosam+time pass Kosam Rasevi Konnaitee, Eda Lootullo Bhada Vyaktikarinchevi Konni, Kani Oka purpose too, Entoo intension too Raseevi Nijamga Chala Goppavi.Mee Kavita Ee Mudoo Kovaloki Chendutundi.
Manam(Navataram) Nunchi VandeeMataram .. Teesukellaru.Adi Mee Bhava Sandrataku Tarkanam.Kavita Modati Padam, Title nee Janalu Chusi Chaduvutaru .. Akkada Meru success Aiyyaru.
2 Loo .. "Manamainaa Anekulam" Deeni Gurinchi Koncham Marala Chudandi.. suggest Cheddamantee Naku Tattadamlaa!!
Alagee Bharata Mata Putrulam Annaru .. Biddalam Ani use Chesthee Vache depth Gamaninchandi.(Appudu pai Vakyam Kuda Marutundi).
Last di .. "Mana Pratee Nettuti Kanam" Anuntee flow saripotundemo .. Chudandi.
Mana Nuduti Sindhoram .. Mahodayaniki Sakhsheebhootam Ani .. Evaroo Anna Matalu Gurthosthunnai.. Chivarloo Chadvutunte.
Mee Modati Kavitee Intalaa Rasarantee .. Mundu Mundu Marinni Manchi Samajika Spruha Gala Kavitalu Vasthayani .. Aasisthunnam.
Posted by: ChandramSetti ChandraSekhar At: 28, Oct 2002 8:07:27 PM IST
nice poem ms.surya..
Posted by: Ms. Taara kum At: 26, Oct 2002 9:19:57 PM IST
Vanirathna garu,
your poem is good. I wish everyone of us behave as suggested by you in the last para.
Eka Kantamto manamandaram
paadaali Vandematharam
manushyula madhya ledu antaram
gurtunchukovaalidi nirantaram.
Yemantaaru?
Good POem. Keep it up.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 26, Oct 2002 12:52:39 PM IST
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