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| baagundanDi subrahmaNyam gaaru, aalOchana aacharaNa kaakapOtE asamtRupti niluvunaa dahistundani.. Wonderful :)
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 14, Jun 2004 12:04:48 PM IST
Sarma gaarU....
nEnu cheppiMdi asaMtRupti kaliginappuDu niSSabdaM kUDaa niSSabdaM gaanE yuddhaanni prakaTistuMdani...aMTE mana nissahaayata chUsi chEtanaitE nannu chEdhiMchu annaTTlugaa annamaaTa... aa asaMtRupti ni maaTallO evvarikee cheppukOlEmani deeni saaraaMSaM... manalni kadiliMchE aanaMdaannainaa,aavEdana nainaa bhaasha lO vyaktaparachalEmannadi nirvivaadaaMSaM kadaa!
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 14, Jun 2004 11:57:04 AM IST
Emoey subrahmaNyam asamtRupti kaliginappuDallaa niSSabdam umDaDam tappadaa? asalu ii remTikii EmiTi sambamdham ??. okavaeLa niSSabdam valla asamtRupti kaligitae???.ii raataloe asamtRupti kaligitae niSSabdam kalagaDam tappanisari ani cheppinaTlugaa anipimchaDamlaedaa???? aaloechimchu.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 12, Jun 2004 4:46:50 PM IST
'Human wants are unlimited'. Every individual has some kind of dissatisfaction due to non fulfillment of desires. But, I am satisfied with the style of writing the poem. Kudos to Mr.Sbrahmanyam.
Venkata Rama Rao Saripalli.
Posted by: Mr. Rama Rao Saripalli At: 11, Jun 2004 7:42:38 PM IST
Raaj first of all thanks for the comment.Why to say sorry raaj... ur comments are always welcome.
Let me clarify...
ubiki vachchE kanneeru 'saitaM'...ikkaDa ee saitaM ki chaalaa ardhaM uMdi... meeru cheppiMdi nijamE... asaMtRupti cause kanneeru effect. maamulu gaa aitE vEdanani taggiMchaalsina kanneeru, ikkaDa asaMtRupti ni iMkaa ekkuva chEstOMdi..aMTE ikkaDa asaMtRupti aMta ekkuvagaa uMdi ani cheppaDaaniki aMtakaMTE maMchi upamaanaM dorakalEdu.
ika aaKari vaakyaalu...
aggipullatO deepaanni veligiMchochchu,aDavinee tagalabeTTochchu... sphUrti kUDaa aMtE... aalOchana aacharaNa gaa maarakapOtE asaMtRupti kaarchichchu ni ragilchE pramaadaM uMdannamaaTa.
mee saMdEhaalu nivRutti ayyaayani aaSistU...
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 11, Jun 2004 11:12:19 AM IST
Though I liked they way u wrote, I am a bit confused about few lines.
'ubiki vastunna kanneeru saitam asantRupti ki aajyamu pOsindi' -- I feel asamtRupti and kanneeru follows a 'cause and effect' relationship. kanneeru is the expression or effect of asamtRupti , but not the 'cause' for it. Or through kanneeru u vent out your asamtRupti. so how did it cause it?
And the last four lines u meant to say aggipulla laanTi spoorti works in a negetive way in a weak moment?
I applogize if I caused any inconvinience with my autopsy :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 11, Jun 2004 10:56:02 AM IST
@kiraN jee 'asaMtRupti' meeda raasina kavita evariki maatraM 'saMtRupti'nivvagaladu? raasina vaaLLaki tappa.... :)
@Murty gaaru it was an impulsive poem. kaabaTTi naaku prastutaM asaMtRupti Emee lEdaMDOy :)
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 11, Jun 2004 10:41:55 AM IST
asamtRuptiki kaaraNamEmunTundi? kOrinadi jaragakapOvaDamE. samtRuptitOnE asamtRuptinijayinchaali.
ayinaa moolaavaarikiasamtRuptimeeda kavitvamu cheppaalani enduku anipinchindO
Posted by: Mr. HAYAGREEVA MURTY Rachuri At: 11, Jun 2004 8:38:17 AM IST
koMcheM vivaraM gaa raastaaraa raghujee... mee asaMtRupti ki kaaraNaM..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 10, Jun 2004 11:27:19 PM IST
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