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| chaala baagundi subrahmaNyam gaaru.. raaj meeru raasindi kooDa adbhutangaa undi.. Keep it up guys :)
Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 20, Jun 2004 1:16:07 AM IST
adbhutaM raaj ... Ur 'saradaa raata' is more poetic than most of the so called poems here
chaalaa baagaa raasaaru...
ismaayil kavitvaM lOni niSSabdaanni niSSabdaM gaanE sRusTiMchaaru mee ee niSSabda kavita lO....veree guD
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 17, Jun 2004 1:58:37 PM IST
Omkaaram nunDi modalukoni
naa vanTari gadi kiTikee kirru chappuDudaakaa
ippaTi varakoo SabdaalatO kavaatu chEstoo
padaalni prasavistoo vachchaanu...
Sabdam , artham
ardha Sareeraalayina aksharaalatO
kaagitaalni aliki aliki alisipOyinappuDu,
SabdaalatO Salya saarathyam endukoo
aksharam nunDi arthaaniki aDDadaari vundanToo, 'ismaayil '
'antaa tella kaagitam ' ayi niSSabdamgaa ahvaanistaaDu....
oka aDDa geeta, oka niluvu geeta paDavanToo
painaa kindaa aakaaSam , nadee anToo,
samasta prakRutini niSSabdamgaanE sRushTistaaDu...
manchu tumparallaanTi maaTalatO
gunDelOtullO gaaDhamayina anubhootulni
niSSabdamgaanE chekkutunnappuDu.....
intalOnE idugO ismaayil vaarasuDokaDu
bhaavalni mOyalEka chatikilapaDDa padaalni
choosi navvutuu,
aakupachchani aanandageetaala merupulatO edurochchaaDu...
nijamgaanE niSSabdam Sabdaanni jayinchindee vELa !
ee kavita choostoonE edO saradaaga raasaanu. Nice one, I liked it :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 17, Jun 2004 1:22:55 PM IST
raavu gaarU,
bhaasha chaalaa asamagramainadanee,
manalni kadiliMchE E bhaavaanni vyaktaparachalEdanee teliyacheppE kavita idi..iMdulO negeTiv dRukpathaM Emee lEdanE anukuMTunnanu.
'aakupachchani' anna prayOgaM kottadEM kaadaMDee... aakupachchani EkaaMtaM,aakupachchani j~naapakaM ilaa chaalaa kavulu vaaDinadE...
Thanks alot for ur comments.
Regards,
Subrahmanyam.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 17, Jun 2004 10:48:04 AM IST
sir , i felt , totally msg. is tending towards either negative or a vacuum,if i am not wrong.
u may correct us .
ofcourse , if the silence is not helping,and the words are failing , then , the shine in ur eyes is transferring the feelings.
it is really great imagination.
akupachani geetam .. pl. clarify the color code.this is a new trend , i believe.
if so , congrats for the trendz setup.
regards.
Posted by: Mr. rao needs At: 17, Jun 2004 10:17:25 AM IST
Quite enjoyable.
Rama Rao Saripalli
Posted by: Mr. Rama Rao Saripalli At: 16, Jun 2004 0:02:37 AM IST
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