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Articles: Poetry | | The promise of true love in a marriage... | |
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| Hello Vahini, Nice poem with really high language. not only high but also beautiful too.
I wish you join authorsden.com.
gudiyaji@myguruonline.net
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 7, Nov 2002 4:13:15 PM IST
I am shocked to see such a nice poem written in high language by a lady name.
i dont have much of my own thoughts regarding this marraige, i always hated it. but reading ur poem made me think that even there may be something divine and lovable thing in this so called marraige.if really marraige makes ppl forget about all the dark, enigmatic shades of life, really it should be appreciated. i wish u get such a good marraige in ur life as a reward for ur poem.
but i feel something is missing in this poem, i feel it wold have a been more good, if there is some more paddig between the two phases u explained in urpoem.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 7, Nov 2002 12:25:58 PM IST
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