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| Oo Hrudayapu Vedana .. Chakkaga Chepparu .. Nice Poem.
Posted by: ChandramSetti ChandraSekhar At: 12, Nov 2002 10:32:19 PM IST
nenu mee vimarsa ki yemi anukovattledu RAJA gaaru...Mee vimarsa ni +ve gaa theeskumtaanu ani maatramey annanu!!!
so eka e vishyam gurimchi marchipodaam...yemdukamtey...naa kavitha meeda 10 comments unnaa...avi mana eddari comments thoney full ayyetattlumdi..migtha vaariki kooda comment chesey avakaasam eddam ok??
thanks for your comments
Posted by: Mr. Venu Gopal Ryali At: 12, Nov 2002 2:05:40 AM IST
Chivariga okka mata
Nenu chala clear ga munde rasanu...nenu mimmalni kavi ga matrame vimarshinchanani
" Mukhyam ga evari hrudaya spandana vallaki chala amulyamainadi. Nenu mimmalni Kavi ga matrame vimarshinchindi. :) Spandinche hrudayaniki sada joharlu...."
and pedda padalani upoyigesthene kavitwam ani nenu analedu. Nenu exact meeru annade annau..
"chakkaga , acchanina mamulu telugulo rasthu..madyalo aa "bhari" prayogam bagaledu..."
Arthamcheskondi :)
Raj
Posted by: Saleem At: 12, Nov 2002 0:57:05 AM IST
Ayyo meeru chala perosnal ga teesukunnaru
Sorry :)
Raj
Posted by: Saleem At: 12, Nov 2002 0:42:59 AM IST
Chandra gaaru ardham cheskovaalsi na asalu personey nannu sarigga ardham chesko ledu...so nenemto telini vaallu nannu ardham cheskumtaarani nenu yeppudoo expect cheyyaledu...
So chandra ji Lets just take it as comment and lets not take their comment too personal..
Manishi samgha jeevi kadaa...Lokulu kaakulainaa...kaakulu lokulainaa....manam vaarni gouravimchaali lekapothey manam "OMTARI" ayipothaam!!!
Prati vimarsa numchi kooda manam "MANCHI" ni vethukkumdaam...Manam MANCHI gaaney migilipodaam yemantaaru?
Posted by: Mr. Venu Gopal Ryali At: 11, Nov 2002 11:37:42 PM IST
Hahaha..."SAILI" aney pedda maatanu vimarsa lo baagaa vaadaaru meeru kaani..naaku nenu yeppudoo oka KAVI gaa voohimchukoledu...
First of all "KAVI" anabadadaaniki konni arhathalu kaavaali...aa arhathalu naaku levu!
KAVI annavaadu yevari anubhavaannainaa thana anubhavam gaa spamdimchi wraaya gala samardhudu.Nenu naa anubhavaanni maatramey nenu pomdu paruchukunnanu.So yelaa chooskunna nenu KAVI ni kaadu RAJA gaaru...
Eka saili amtaaraa?KAVI kaanappudu SAILI anedi pedda maata gaa vinapaduthumdi..mee vimarsa ni nenu +ve ga theeskumtaa...Nannu nenu yeppudoo KAVI anukoledu...Meeru nannu "KAVI" ga anukuni COMMENT chesaaru...SO naalo KAVI ayye lakshanaalu yekkado unnayannamaata :-) so naalo kavi ni vethukkuni meeru annattlugaa NAA SAILI ni,naa UNIKI ni chaatukodaaniki prayatnisthaa!!!
Final ga OKA VISHYAM : Pedda padaalu vaaditheyney adi kavitha amtey nenu oppukonu.akshraalu simple ga umtey ney amdariki clear ga ardhamavuthumdi ani naa uddeysyam.Any how i try to improve my self...Thanks for your time.
Posted by: Mr. Venu Gopal Ryali At: 11, Nov 2002 11:24:12 PM IST
Prasanti garanna " premenemo anukunnaa .." Antee Munduga Manaloo Kaligee Alajadi Entadi Ani Anweshinchinappudee Adi Kevalam Abhimanamaa, Antakuminchina Premaa Annadi .. Chivariga Tattadu.
Convince Chesukovadamenti !!!
Taruva .. Kalam Enni Malupulainaa Tipputundi.Mitrudu Venu Aalochana Karkasam Anadam Ela Avutundi.Edo Vimarsiddam Anukuntee Elananinaa Cheyyavachu.Kani Danikantee Mundu Kavi Ee Vuddesyamto Rasadoo Telusukuni .. Taruvata Vimarsisthee Baguntundi.
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Kontamandi..Raj Lantivallu Vuntaru.Alantivi Pattinchukoonakkaraledu..Venu garu .. Meru Bagane response Icharu.
Posted by: ChandramSetti ChandraSekhar At: 11, Nov 2002 11:22:31 PM IST
Venu garu:)
Actual ga aa sentence kinda nenu type cheyalsindi vundi. Kani adi lekunadane post chesinattuunnanu.
Chappaga vundi ante ...padalu chala mamuluga vunanyi evo konni dialogues kattalu kattalu ga rasinattundi. Bhavam kuda
pedda goppaga ledu. Kontha nuthanatvam chupinchatini ki kaneesa prayatnam jariginattuledu. Kavi ga mee hrudyam ragili kavithvam rayatam abhinandneeyam, kani adi meeru cheppettappudu meedina VOICE vinapaddam ledu. Smakaleena kavitvam meeru chaduvuthune vuntaru...ilantive kotanu kotla "kavitvalu" vastunnayi. Meeru annatta kaviga mee viluva meeru kapadukovalante meedantu oka saili alavatuchesukondi. Ee advice ikkada rastunna chala mandi kavulaki. :)
Mee kavithalo akkadakkada evo konni pedda padalu upayoginchinattunaru. Udaharanaki "timira jeevithamlo..." anna prayogam bagaledu. chakkaga , acchanina mamulu telugulo rasthu..madyalo aa "bhari" prayogam bagaledu.
Mukhyam ga evari hrudaya spandana vallaki chala amulyamainadi. Nenu mimmalni Kavi ga matrame vimarshinchindi. :) Spandinche hrudayaniki sada joharlu.
Raj :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 11, Nov 2002 11:04:52 PM IST
Lakshmi Prashanthi gaaru
Thanks for your comment.Eka pothey "PREMENEMO ANUKUNNA" ani naakey doubt ga umdi ani annarukadaa...daani uddeysyam yemitamtey adi "PREMA" ani naaku telusu kaani priyuraalu daanni sarigga recieve cheskoleka povadamtho naalo nijamgaa "ADI PREYMEYNAA?" anna doubt kagina time wraasukunna kavitha edi.
Any way thaks for your comment
Posted by: Mr. Venu Gopal Ryali At: 11, Nov 2002 8:56:50 AM IST
Mr Raj Palla Gaaru
Mee Comment vimarsanathmakam ga umdatam baagaaney umdi.Kaani Vimarsimchinappudu yemduku baagaledo chepithey daanni SADVIMARSA amtaaru.Lekapothey aa Vimarsa ki vimarsa chesina vaallaki VILUVA umdadadu.
So e saari numchi mee viluva meeru kaapaadukovalamtey SADVIMARSA cheyyadam nerchukomdi!!!
Thanks for your comment
I wish you all the best
Bye
Posted by: Mr. Venu Gopal Ryali At: 11, Nov 2002 8:49:12 AM IST
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