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Articles: Poetry | | Saardhakatha.....! | |
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| thanks prasnthi gaaru for your comment.meeru suggest chesimdi baagaaney umdi...kaani meeru annattlu sukhaalu,kastaalu jeevitham lo life partners ayinaa...Mana voohallo ayinaa kaasepu kastaalanu pakkana petti only sukhaaley jaragaalani anukovadam thappu ledanukumtaa kadamdi?
so my concept is...
HOPE FOR THE BEST
PREPARE FOR THE WORSE!!!
what do u say?
note:marchipoyaa annattlu e link oka saari check cheyyamdi Meeremantaru? (Need your opinions on a Short Story)
- Mrs. raji chalasani
daani gurimchi naa comments wraasaanu amdulo mimmalni oka vishyam contradict kooda chesaa choodamdi and bounce back :-)
http://telugupeople.com/discussion/comments.asp?tc1=922
once again thanks for your comments
Venu Ryali
Posted by: Mr. Venu Gopal Ryali At: 15, Nov 2002 8:17:53 PM IST
Beautiful and Beautiful. Rhyming of words is perfect. A very good poem for a B'day.
But I contradict with you in the last para.
Prati rutuvu vasanta rutuvu, prati masam madhu masam, kaaledu kadandi. Even in the inner meaning sense.
Kashta Sukhaalu , cheekati velugula doboochulu jeevitham lo yevarikainaa tappavu.
"Sukhamu", "Velugu" le kaavaali anukokundaa,
Yelanti paristitullo ayinaa, santhosham gaa, achanchalam gaa munduku saagi maname oka velugu avvaali ane message iste inkaa baagundedi ani naa abhipraayam.
(No doubt that yours is pretty good).
Especially the first lines.
aasalu "Vaakitlo" unte, niraasalu "Kougitlo" ne untaayi. Cent % correct.
A very good write.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 15, Nov 2002 7:17:26 PM IST
venu garu,
mee kavitha chala baagundi.
inthaki evaridando puttina roju cheppalede.
oh andarini uddesinchi vrasara sarelendi,
avunandi meeru annadi correct.
puttina prathi vyakthi oka naatiki gittaka thappadu andukane chanipoye lopu thama thama jeevana kaalandi sadviniyaga parachukogaligithe nijangaa vaari janmaki saardhakatha labhistundi.
jeevithanni entha baga varnicharandi.
inka meeru aneka kavithalu vrayalani korukuntoo selav.
Posted by: Miss vanirathna surya At: 15, Nov 2002 2:51:54 PM IST
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