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| Hats Off.. excellent Subrahmanyam garu!
Posted by: Mr. Satish Kumar Barnala At: 15, Aug 2004 12:37:17 PM IST
nAku nachchiMdi. AvESaMtO, swaMta anubhavaMtO vachchinavi ilAgE uMTAyi. anni kavitalU AhlAdaMgA uMDAlaMTE elA kudurutuMdi? SIrshika bAguMdi.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 12, Aug 2004 4:07:56 PM IST
neehaar gaaru,
First of all thanks alot for ur feedback meeru cheppiMdi koMtavaraku nijamE..ravi SaMkar gaari kavitvaM lO bhaashaaDaMbaraM kanabaDadu.telugu lO unna koddi maMdi niSSabda kavullO ravi SaMkar gaaru okaru.nEnu
aayana cheppina vaakyaM ee kavita baadhanuMDi veluvaDiMdani cheppaDaanikE kOT chEsaanE tappa ee kavita 'niSSabda kavita' ani cheppaDaaniki kaadu.idi mummaaTikee Sabda kavitE! iMdulO kottadanaM kanipiMchakapOvaDaM, naa baadha ni paaThakullO palikiMchalEkapOvaDaM maatramE ee kavitalO lOpaalu kaavachchu tappitE kavitvaM lO niSSabdaM lEkapOvaDaM maatraM aadu.eMdukaMTE 'Sabda brahma' gaa pErugaaMchina ajaMtaa kavitalannee Sabda kavitalE! annee chaalaa goppa kavitalE!
anubhavaanni anubhavaM gaa paaThakuDiki aMdiMchaDamE kavita lakshyaM adi niSSabda kavita ayinaa,Sabda kavita ayinaa!
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 29, Jul 2004 12:39:33 PM IST
Subrahmanyam gaaru,
mee kavitalannee chadivaanu. konni chaala bagunnaayi. konni verbose gaa unnayi. ee
kavita baane uMdi kaanee naaku kavitalO kottadanam kanipiMchalEdu. ravisankar gaarini quote chesaru kaabatti chebutunnaa. ravisankar garu, ilaa padaadambaraalu takkuva vaadutaaru. varnanalakanna padachitraaniki praamukhyata istaaru :) ee kavitalo sariggaa ade lopinchindi.
looking forward to more.
nihar
Posted by: Mr. nihaar nihar At: 29, Jul 2004 11:35:55 AM IST
chaalaa baagundi subrahamaNyam gaaru.
raamaaraavu saripalli.
Posted by: Mr. Rama Rao Saripalli At: 29, Jul 2004 10:44:15 AM IST
chaalaa chaalaa baahundi subramaNyam gaaruu,
AvEdana prasphuTangaa kanipistOndi.
Posted by: Mr. HAYAGREEVA MURTY Rachuri At: 29, Jul 2004 8:13:32 AM IST
It disoppointed me. Not about the element you have chosen, but the way you expressed it! I didnt feel your pain, Sorry!
Posted by: Saleem At: 28, Jul 2004 10:14:55 PM IST
aMdarikee dhanyavaadaalu...
jeevitaM lO jarigE prati saMGaTana kavitvaanni prabhaavitaM chEstuMdi kadaa kiraN jee...
'prapaMcha du@KaM tO mamEkamai karigipOyaakE oka padyaM rUpudiddukuMTuMdi' ani ravi SaMkar gaaru annaaru.alaa nEnu raasina anni kavitallOnU atyaMta baadhalOMchi veluvaDDa kavita idi..aMdukE muMdu modalupeTTaDamE aahlaadaM gaa elaa raayamaMTaav ani peTTaanu.
vijayagaariki kotta gaa anipiMchinaa,viplav ki baagaa nachchinaa kaaraNaM baadhE kavitaki paryaayapadaM gaa maaraDamE kaavachchu.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 28, Jul 2004 7:20:31 PM IST
Mr. Mula, paatra yokka aave^dana enduko^ cheppi unTe baagunDe^di. Overall very nice.
Posted by: Mr. Srinivas Turlapati At: 28, Jul 2004 7:11:24 PM IST
baagumdi
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 28, Jul 2004 4:26:12 PM IST
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