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| Subrahmanyam Garu,
Mee katha chaduvutunte edo santhosham, anandam. May be I found something in your article that is missing in this fast pace world.
Ee kathanu andinchinanduku danyavadamulu.
Posted by: Mr. Amar Nallapureddy At: 1, Nov 2006 2:04:17 AM IST
Hai Subrahmanyam Garu,
my name is Krishna, Mee article chaala bagundi andi . Nenu Rayakapoina chaduvutuntanu . Chala bagundi , Continue cheyandi.
Bye
Krishna
Posted by: Mr. VAMSI KRISHNA UPPALAPATI At: 18, Aug 2004 5:57:11 PM IST
nettuTi kurulaa!!!!!!!!!!!!
sarae adi amta peddavishayam kaadu. kadhani naDipimchina tiiru baagumdi. chaduvutunnappuDu nijamgaanae kaalaejii vaataavaraNamuu, muraLilaamTi vyaktitvam unna kurraaDuu, samudrapu oDDuu ivannii kaLLamumdu kadilaeyi. amdukugaanuu rachayita abhinamdaniiyuDae, anumaanamlaedu.
ekkaDoe eppuDoe chadivina remDu vishayaalu cheppaalanipimchimdi ii kadha chadivaeka.
1. tanapai taanu joekulaesukumTuukuuDaa haasyaanni pamDimchagaligaevaaLLu nishkalmasha hRudayuluu, vishayaanni loetugaa chuuDagaligaevaaruu avutaaruTa.
muraLi paatriikaraNa pai vishayam nijam anipimchaelaa unnaadi.
2. eduTi vyakti tanakamTae telivainavaaDu ani anukumTuu vyavaharimchaevaaDu nijamgaa telivainavaaDu.
kaevalam maaTalu vimTuu muraLi pai oka abhipraayaanikivachchina ii kadhakuDu( kadhaloe kadhani cheppina vaaDu ) aa vishayaanni grahimchukunnaTlugaa cheppi pai vaakyaalanu kuuDaa nijam anipimchaelaa chaesaeDu rachayita.
mottam miida kadha adbhutamgaa vachchimdi.
marinni ilaamTi kadhalu raayaaloey subrahmaNyam
bannemma pai velibuchchina abhipraayamtoe naenu Ekiibhavistunaanu sumaa.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 14, Aug 2004 1:34:01 PM IST
ea kadhalo^ raasina 'ne^nu' ne^nu kaadu What a bummer.....
Mr. Moola ne^nu ko^Da^ mee gurinchi raasaaru anukunnaanu. e^di e^maina chaalaa baagaa raasaaru
meeru mention che^sina pustakaalu ne^nu chadavale^du. jeevitamane^ pustakam chaduvutunnaa. inkaa chaalaa pe^jeelu unna^yi chadavaalsinivi :)
Posted by: Mr. Srinivas Turlapati At: 10, Aug 2004 1:09:18 AM IST
naa kavitalannee chadivi Opika gaa kaameMTs raasinaMduku dhanyavaadaalu praSaaMti gaaru...
ika ee 'tera tolagina vELa' vishayaaniki vastE...
'nEnu' ani cheppinaMta mAtraana kathakuDu,aMdulO chebutunnadI okkarE anukuMTE porapATaMDee.kathakuDu tana abhipraayaalE tana katha lOni paatrala dvaaraa cheppistE atanu jeevitaM lO reMDu mUDu kathalu tappa raayalEDu.kaadaMTaaraa?
ikkaDa konni vishayaalu meeku cheppaali...nEnu kavitalu raayaDaM modalupeTTi iMkaa 2 saMvatsaraalu kUDaa kaalEdu.kaalEjeelO chaduvutunnappuDu kRushNa Saastri kavitalu chadavaDaaniki teerika ekkaDidi?
nEnu mounaM gaa uMDaTamaa?????? nEneMta mounaM gaa uMTaanO raghu gaarinee lEdaa naMDUri gaarinee aDagaMDi chebutaaru.kaabaTTi aa kathalO raasina 'nEnu' nEnu kaadu..:)
nEnu prastutaM Edee an&vEshiMchaDaM lEdaMDee...aa reMDu kavitalu pratyEkaM gaa ee katha kOsamE raasinavi.meeru cheppina pustakaM maatraM tappaka chaduvutaanu.
ika goppa kavula prabhaavaM vishayaaniki vastE meeru cheppiMdi nijamE, modaTlO SreeSree,tilak la prabhaavaM ekkuvagaa uMDEdi naa meeda.tilak prabhaavaM lEkuMDaa evarU kavi kaalErani naaku anipistuMdi.pOsT mEn adbhutamaina kavita.kaakapOtE nEnu kUDaa iMkaa peddagaa saahityaanni chadavalEdaMDee.
raviSaMkar gaaru baagaa ishTamE gaani aMtakaMTE ekkuvagaa aayana guruvugaaraina ismaayil gaaraMTE ishTaM naaku.meeru bahuSaa ismaayil ni chadivi uMDaru.okka saari chadivi chUDaMDi naa mIda ismAyil prabhAvaM tappakuMDA gamaniMchagalaru.'muggu' lOni chukkala guriMchi meeru cheppiMdi chaalaa nijaM.
mee kaameMT chadivina tarvaata naaku anipiMchiMdi okkaTE...meeku Opika,sahanaM chaalaa ekkuva ani :)
Thanks alot for ur comments,
Subrahmanyam.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 8, Aug 2004 11:12:17 PM IST
idi chadivAka mI aMtaraMgaM cheppE kaburlannI vinAlanipiMchiMdi. eMduku AvESapaDutunnArO telusukOvAlanipiMchiMdi.
mIru 'muraLi' gAritO Ayana viMTunnArO, lEdO gamaniMchakuMDA cheppina mI anubhUtulani, SraddhagA viMTAnu, cheppaMDi ani aDagAlani anipiMchiMdi.
samudraM ani kAdu kAnI nAku kUDA nILLaMTE chAlA ishTaM. (vAnalO taDavaDaM kAdaMDI). eMta maMdi unnA aMdarinI alA maunaMgA mana dRuShTikONaM lOMchi chUstU, manatO manamE mATlADukOvaDaM nAku kUDA chAlA ishTaM. iMdulO rAsina mI fIliMgs chAlA vATini nEnu kUDA fIl ayyAnu.
kAnI bAgA navvochchina vishayamEmiTaMTE jNjAnulu goppavAru maunaMgA, gaMbhIraMgA uMTAru kAbaTTi mIru kUDA alAMTi sthitinE meyin`Tain chEyAlanukOvaDaM. I vishayaM gurtu techchukunna koddI navvostOMdi. eMta 'pedda' (vishaya parijNjAnaMlO) vArilOnainA 'pilla' tanaM uMTuMdanE dAniki idE udAharaNEmO.
mIru dEnni SOdhistunnArO nAkaitE teliyadu gAnI oka vELa mI an&vEShaNa 'tatvaM' ayitE, mIru SrI ekkirAla bharadwAja gAri rachanalu chadavaMDi. Ayana kEvalaM shirDI bAbA mIdE kAdu, vEdAMtaM mIda, 'AdhyAtmikAnikI - sain&suku' madhya gala saMbaMdhAla mIda kUDA rASAru.
nAku aMdarU, 'kavitala mIda goppa goppa rachayitala prabhAvaM uMTuMdi', aMTE EmiTO anukunE dAnni kAnI....... mI kavitalu chadivAka.....
SrISrI gAri prabhAvaM, tilak gAri prabhAvaM kanipiMchiMdi. (af`kOrs mI aMta bAgA sAhityAnni nEnu chadavalEdu leMDi. kAkapOtE mahAprasthAnaM, amRutaM kurisina rAtri reMDiTinI chadivAnu. nAku 'pOsT`mAn`' kavita bAgA nachchiMdi)
mIku raviSaMkar gAru bAgA ishTamani, mana TipilO mIru tarachu pErkonE mI 'muggu' lOni 'chukkala' sAMgatya prabhAvaM kUDA mIlOni ' anubhUtula' agni ki, 'anubhavAla' AjyaM pOstOMdani mAtraM anipistOMdi.
vaijAg veLLinappuDu bIch`lO chinnapillalA nEnu koTTina kEriMtalu nAku ippaTikI jNjApakamE. siMhAchala Silpa souMdaryaM ippaTikI anirvachanIyamaina AnaMdAnni kaligistuMdi. lOkal bassulO ekkinaMduvalla, 'jU' lO ekkuvasEpu gaDapalEkapOyinaMduku eMta bAdhapaDDAnO ippaTikI gurtE. tarvAta 'kailAsa kOna' lO ekkuvasEpu ApEstE mA kakka anna mATalu nAku iMkA gurtE. 'sahajatvaM sahajatvamE. I prANaM lEni kRutrima bommalu, kurchIlu vITi daggara iMta sEpu ApAru. kAnI prANamunna A jaMtuvula madhya gaDipina tRuptini, anubhUtini ikkaDa poMdalEkapOtunnAM. I sAri manaM mAtramE vachchi chUddAM. I bassulO kAkuMDA' ani. mIru vaijAg anagAnE nAku idE gurtukochchiMdi.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 8, Aug 2004 4:52:47 PM IST
mI kavitalni chUstunnA, chadivETappuDu evarI MANASVI anukOvaDaM, A evarOlE, kavita bAguMdi anukOvaDaM paripATi. nEnu eMtO 'kuLLukunE' mA sOdaruluMgAru (okkasAri kUDA manasfUrtigA pogaDaDAniki manasu rAni nEnu, mIraMdarU Ayananu tega poguDutuMTE..... mahA 'kuLLukuMTAnaMDi'. adi chUsi iMkoMcheM 'ha ha ha ... oho ho ho' ani nannu vekkiriMchE) raghugAri dwArA....... 'subbu, subbu' ani mI pEru tarachugA vinaDaM alavATayyiMdi.
kAnI mI I 'tera tolagina vELa' chadivAka, mIru mI 'prabhav`' ni vetukkOvaDAniki veLLinaTTu, nEnu mI kavitalanniTinI okkasAri chadivAnu.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 8, Aug 2004 3:55:54 PM IST
banneejee bhayapaDakaMDi mee chuTTU elaaMTi uchchu bigusukOvaDaM lEdu.... :)
divya gaarikee,kiraN gaarikee dhanyavaadamulu..
raghujee aa bhOgaTTaa EmiTO cheppEru kaadu...:)
Regards,
Subrahmanyam.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 6, Aug 2004 11:52:18 PM IST
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