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Articles: Poetry | | manasu nimDina priyavallabhuDiki O chinni lEkha... | |
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| swITI gAru,
ayAM verI hApI far yuvar riplayis. nijamE chadivE vALLaki kUDA arthaM kAvAli. arthaM chEsukonE manasu uMDAli.
peLLiLLu ayipOyi, bAdhyatalatO uMDE vALLaki bahuSA prEma guriMchi fIl ayi rAstE, roTIn gAnE uMDaDaMlO AScharyaM lEdu.
Edi paDitE adi rAstE kavitvaM avutuMdi ani vyAkhyAniMchaDaM chAlA 'tappu'. prati okkarU utsAhaMtOnE rAstAru. aMdarU SrISrI, tilak`, ekseTrA ekseTrA kAvAli anukuMTE kudaradu. anukaraNE tappa orijinAliTI uMDadu.
sajeshan&s ivvachchu kAnI nirutsAha parichE vidhaMgA evari kAmeMTs kUDA uMDakUDadu.
ilAMTi vATiki nochchukOkuMDA chakkani samAdhAnaM ichchinaMduku mIku nA hRudayapUrvaka abhinaMdanalu.
alAgE viplav kUDA emduku ilA kAmeMT rAsADO teliyaDaM lEdu. oka vayasu vAru, oka jeMDar vAru mAtramE falAna vidhaMgA rAyAli. falAnA vastuvulni ennukOvAli ani ekkaDA lEdE!
mI lEkha lOni prati vAkyAnni nEnu arthaM chEsukOgaligAnu. maMchi romAMTic nEchar mariyu eMtO ArAdhana, arpaNa bhAvaM kanipistOMdi.
mI nuMchi tappakuMDA marinni maMchi kavitalu vastAyi. SubhAbhinaMdanalatO.......
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 13, Aug 2004 10:43:36 AM IST
mee le^kha chaalaa baagundanDi. meeru eduru choostunna vyaktini twaralo^ kalustaarani aaSistunnaanu. Ann Arbor is such a nice place to live. Do you know that it is home to first BBS(Bulletin Board Systems) in the world?
Posted by: Mr. Srinivas Turlapati At: 8, Aug 2004 8:08:04 PM IST
Dharma Rao garu,
nenu melakuvathoonee raasaanandi, but oka daani meaning.. raasee vaaari meedee kaakunda chadivee vaari meda kuda depend ayi vuntundi, that's for sure. Best example is what's going on here.
rendoo line loni valapu antee prema anee kakunda check if there could be any other meaning...
and pannendoo line loni ' nee seevalanu pondutuu nEnE nee daasuraalanainaanu' ani raasaanu. sevalanu pondutu yajamaanulavutaaru daasulavvarau, adi andariki telusu, even an 11 yr girl could tell that, I'm 26.. so naaku telavaka potundaa?? akkada meaning entoo sariggaa chadivi choodandi...
ayinaa 5 & 6 lines loo ilaa aalochistee nEnu raasindi tappugaa anipinchaledaa...
maamuluga ayitee ' nee sevalanu pondutu nEnu yajamaninainaanu' ani raasi vundeedaanni, kaani ikkada ' nee sEvalanu pondutuu nEnE nee dasuralanainanu' ani raasaanu........
'kavitvam raayaalanna mee aakanksha manchide gaanii konchem aalochinchi raayandi.ela raasinaa kavitvam avuthundi anukunte porapatu.kaabatti eesaari raasetappudu marinta melakuvato raayaalani korutunnaanu.
selavu.' - u'r comments, elaa raasina adi kavitvam avutundi ani evvaruu anaru. Sir, sariggaa chadavandi, chadiveeppudu ' pratii okkaruu edoo okati geekeesi kavitvam ayipotundi ani anukuntaaru ' anna feeling ni manasuloo vunchukokandi, raasina vaaru ilaa enduku raasi vuntaru.. let's think of that again ani anukondi, ardham kaakapote.. ila ani raasaaru, what do you mean by that, was that a mistake or did u mean something else ani adagandi, tappuledu, antheegaani eduti vaalla meeda intha harsh comments...... entha varaku sababoo aalochinchandi, plz.
Viplove gaaru,
naa feelings ni naaloonee dachukomannaaru, if I'm not wrong meevi 128 articles vunnaayi TP.com loo, entandi meekoka rule, naakoka rule aa?? anyayam kaduu... and naa name and identification ki vastee... female ani cheppaanu, ayina male or female that really doesn't matter ( particularly here) you don't need to trust me that I'm female, I just posted an article, adi chadavandi antheegaani neeneemi 'neenu female ni so adi matramee drushti loo pettukuni ee article ni chadavandi' ani kinda note emi pettaledu.ayina I don't need to provide you guys some sort of official documents stating that I'm a female, do I???
anyways thankyou guys for reading my article and taking risk of commenting on that.
Kiran kumar garu,
tappakunda inka manchigaa raayataniki prayatnistaanu, thanks for the suggestion andi.
Posted by: Sweety At: 7, Aug 2004 7:06:06 PM IST
namaste.
rendo linelo meeru raasinadi ardharahitamgaa undi.valapu ante prema.andulo kalavaram repadam enti?taruvaata pannendo linelo nee sevalanu pondutu nee daasuraalini ayipothaanannaaru.sevalni pondevaaru yajamaanulavutaaru gaani daasulavvaru.kavitvam raayaalanna mee aakanksha manchide gaanii konchem aalochinchi raayandi.ela raasinaa kavitvam avuthundi anukunte porapatu.kaabatti eesaari raasetappudu marinta melakuvato raayaalani korutunnaanu.
selavu.
Posted by: Mr. dharmarao gonipati At: 7, Aug 2004 5:34:21 PM IST
not good for u to touch such topics.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 6, Aug 2004 10:38:52 PM IST
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