|
|
|
|
Articles: Poetry | | Mother | |
|
| If u took this topic of mother just to start ur poetry, i have to say that, its not original.
it seems u searched for words which sound great and can explain the greatness of a mother. By choosing that, u couldnt express all the original feelings u have for a mother.
Just if u say ' i like my mom' it will be a good poetry. the theme of motherhood is such divine.
so try to follow ur feelings, than searching for words.
and finally, did u show this to ur mother?? write how happy she felt when she read this. Express that in ur next poem, for which i will wait.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 9, Aug 2004 1:58:11 AM IST
Very nice and charming poetry
Expression is wonderful
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 8, Aug 2004 8:35:53 PM IST
Awww..Pinky this is so sweet. venkat
Posted by: Mr. venkatappaiah chilukuri At: 7, Aug 2004 2:45:57 PM IST
| |
|
|
 |
| Advertisements |
|
|
|
|
| Advertisements |
|
