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Articles: Poetry | | snEhapu rekkalu | |
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prEraNa
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nEstaM,
nI snEhaastaanni andinchi chuuDu
sakala lOkaalanu jayistaa !
naa manasu veeNa meeTi chuuDu
madhura geetaalanu aalapistaa!
naa tODuga prakkana nilabaDu
konDalanainaa pinDi chEstaa!
nI tODE lEninaaDu
vekki vekki eDustaa...
(ammO.. nEnu kUDaa kavitalu vraasEstunnaanEmiTi??!! :)))
Posted by: Mr. Siri Siri At: 1, Nov 2004 2:30:01 PM IST
first group of lines and last group of lines are good ..but centre lo vunnavi maatram confusion create chestunnaayi ..
friend sandadigaa vunnappudu manamu koodaa inkaa happy gaa njoy cheyaali
anthekaanee mounam gaa venaka koorchovatamendhuku
baadhallo vunnappudu vodaarchaali
anthekaanee gnaapakaalatho vukkiribikkiri cheyatamenti .. assalu artham kaaledhu ...
deeni bhaavamemi tirumalesaa ?
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 2, Sep 2004 8:53:38 PM IST
chaalaa baavuMdaMDee....
Keep it up.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 1, Sep 2004 1:01:22 PM IST
chala bagundi.... but sneham modalu kakundane, snehithulapi anumanalu penchukunte ela.. chivariki sneham lo okkare manchivallannnatlu.. just a small doubt!!!
Posted by: Venkat At: 1, Sep 2004 8:28:09 AM IST
baagumdamDi lEkha gaaru.
Posted by: Mr. Satish Kumar Barnala At: 1, Sep 2004 7:19:08 AM IST
baagundi srilekha...good wording..!!
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 31, Aug 2004 10:32:05 PM IST
kavitagaa baavumdi kaanI , AlOchana maatram amaayakamgaa , atyaaSalaa umdi.
emdukamTi prati snEham EdO okanaaDu aa rekkalanutumchEsi , tokkEsi , nalipEsE veLutumdi
Posted by: Viplove K At: 31, Aug 2004 9:40:35 PM IST
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