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Hey bava,
First kavitha aina, chaala baga raasavu.Keep going and All the very best in future!
Mr Murali Mohan garu, u did a splendid job in encouraging that way.Maku maa opinions mee la express cheyyatam raadhu. Mee laa encourage chese vallu vunte, talented people baaga shine avutharu.
Posted by: Bhaskar Giduthuri At: 15, Sep 2004 8:26:17 PM IST
chitti rose ,
janaalani vuddarinchataanikemi nuvvu bayaluderakkarledhu ...maaku thelusu entha raayaali emi raayaali ani .. neelaagaa mangali pani cheyaledhu ,evari profile lo emundhi .. profile vundhaa ledhaa ani keliki vaasana choose vaallemi leru neelaagaa ... time management lo neelaanti vaallakante 100 times better migilina vaallu ..
pani choosukoo , lekunte chitti rose, mogga poovai , janaala segalaki vaadipoyi raalipothaav ..
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 8, Sep 2004 10:05:42 AM IST
mee madilO ghaneebhavinchi vunna kavitaahimam ee kavitalO jaaluvaarinaTlumdE......
chaalaa baagumdi mee minee kavita....telugulO vraayaDaaniki prayatnimchamDi..
Posted by: Mr. Rudra Kottu At: 7, Sep 2004 4:49:56 AM IST
first line is excellent ...
last line aithe ... sooooperb ...
second line is not that impressive ...
3rd line edhoo koncham vinthagaa vundhi ..
general gaa 'naa kallalloo nee roopam' ani kaanee ledhaa 'naa gundelloo nee roopam' ani kaanee raasthaaru .. mari nuvvu 'naa thanuvanthaa nee roopam' annaav .. koncham aalochimpa chesesidhigaa vundhi ... *smiles*
keep same pace and write more and more ...
good luck ...
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 6, Sep 2004 8:48:18 PM IST
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