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Articles: Short Stories | | pitrOtsAhaM | |
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| rachayitalu maatramae cheppagaligaeTivi okaTii reMDuu aDagaalani naaku chinnappaNNiMchii eMtoe kutuuhalaM. ilaa oka rachayitae paaThakulaku pakkanae vuMDi chadivistuu saahitya saeva chaesae vaaLLaMTae mari ishTa paDalaekuMDaa vuMTaamaa, naa SraaddhaM kaakapoetae.
miiraevanukoekaMDi, aa chivari maaTa naa uutapadaM aMtae, naa SraaddhaM kaakapoetae. hayyoe, maLLii vachchiMdi diini SraaddhaM kuulaa.
avunaMDii rachayitaluMgaaruu, miiku teliyani vishayaalaMTuu laevu kaavuna koddigaa oepika uMchukuni dayachaesi praSnaluu javaabuluu miirae raasi mammulanu kanikaristaaranukuMTaa.
'puTTinappaTiniMchii kaakinaaDa Taunuloe perigaanu' aMTae mari koMdaru 'puTTaka muMdunuMchii akkaDae perigina vaaLLu kuuDaa uMTaaraa', haeviToe padaalu eTunuMchi eTuvaipu veLtunnaayoe ivvaalraepu. paata taraM muMDaavaaNNi illaa vadilaeyaMDi. naa SraaddhaM kuulaa.
'akkakunna chinna vudyoegaMtoe koMpa naDustuMdi' ippaTiki naDichi naDichii isaakapaTnaM chaeruMTuMdaaMdi, chaa vedhava joekulu. naa SraaddhaM kuulaa.
'abhimaanaMTa', naa SraaddhaMTa, ani taMDrini asahyiMchukunaevaaDunnuu, appucheyyaTamae SraaddhaM peTTaDaMgaa cuusaevaaDuu mari aa taMDriluMgaarini pani chaestuMTaenoe cheppitaenoe asahyiMchukunae putrapuMgavulunnaarani katha dvaaraa cheppinaMduku bahusaMtoeSaM.
diini SraaddhaM peTTaa. adae siga taragaa laagaa annamaaTa. innaaLLuu akka pani chaestuMdoe ani baadhapaDipoeyi telugu siniimaa hiiroe laaguna taMDrini maryaadagaa pilavakapoyina veMTanae raaLLatoe koTTaesaevaaDallaa okkasaarigaa taMDri pani taladiMchukunaelaa vunnadani akkanuu tallinii iMTloe tini kuurchunae vaaLLugaa cheppaesina kathaanaayakuluMgaariki Sraaddha vidya vachchoe laedoe cheppinaTTu laedu kathaloe.
aa vishayaM maLLii vachchae kathaloe aemannaa chebutaaraemoe paaMDityaM vellivirisi, kuppakuuli. diini SraaddhaM peTTaa.
Srii ramaNa gaari navya patrika ii katha vaesukunaeMta ettuku ediginaMduku telugu kathalaku amerikaa vaaridvaaraa maMchi roejulochchinaMduku marinni Sraaddhaalu uurikinae peTTi tiiraali.
railu paTTaalamiida ii kathanu paDukoebeTTi nii kharma baaguMTae nachchutuMdi annaTTuMdi chivariki. diiniki pitroetsaahamu kaMTae putranirvaakaM anoe paaThaka Sraaddhakharma anoe peTTivuMTae baaguMDaedi.
iTlu,
veeramaachinaeni vraalu
Posted by: Mr. satyanarayana veeramaachineni At: 28, Sep 2004 10:20:22 PM IST
prasad gari katha chala bagundi.ye patra tama sahajatvaniki, svabhavanikii ateeetamgaa pravartinchaledu.adyantam asakti gaa, chakkagaa sagipoyindi.
hotel business lo lakshadhikari ayipodamu,maro dabbunna ammayi aa hotel ki vachi abbayito premalo padatamu lanti asandarbha vishayaalu lekundaa chalaa sahajam gaa undi.
Janaki ram gari prasna prasad gari ke ayinaa.. naaku telisinantavaraku javabu cheppalanukuntunnanu.
brahmanardham ante .. rakarakala subha, asubha kaaryala lo .danalu pattadam.
sadharanam gaa danalu pattadam valla danam ichevaari graha sthi ti lopalu ,papalu modalainavi danam pattevariki sankramistayani antaaru.anduke andaru danalu pattaru.pattevaaru vidhi gaa gayatri, itara japaalu ceyyalani antaaru.
i karanalavalla brahmanardhala ku velle brahmalani chinnachoopu koodaa choostaaru.
manchi katha andinchinanduku dhanyavaadaalu.
sridevi
Posted by: Ms. sridevi Dhawala At: 28, Sep 2004 7:59:41 PM IST
ne^nu Brahmin ne^ ayinaa naaku braahmanaardham anTe^ aemiTo^ teleedu. anTe^ aemiTanDi?
prasaanti gaaru cheppinaTTu kadhaanika aadyantam aasaktikaramgaa saagindi. chaalaa chaalaa baagundi
I hope you write lot more stories of these type. Good Luck
Posted by: Janakiram Lakkapragada At: 28, Sep 2004 6:22:54 AM IST
aMdarakU Thanks .
surEsh gAri snEhitulu annaTTu, 'oka rachana chadivi, dAni venukanunna vishayAlanu tamaku telisI, arthaM ayina paddhatilO, A rachana guriMchi EmannA anukOvaTAniki pAThakulaku hakku vuMTuMdi.' surEsh gAru chAlA bAgA rASAru.
oka rachayita(tri) uttama purushalO rAsinaMta mAtrAna adi A rachayita(tri) jIvitAnubhavam ani analEmu. rachayita(tri) oka pAtragA mAri kathanu cheppaDaM anEdi oka prakriya.
ika sAdhAraNaMgA rachanalu chEsETappuDu tama jIvitAllO chUsina vishayAlU, pErlU rachanallO kUDA vastU vuMTAyi sahajatvaM kOsaM. aMtamAtraM chEta kUDA avi A rachayita(tri) jIvitAnubhavamE ani anukOnakkaralEdu.
A rachayita(tri) adi tana jIvitAnubhaM ani cheppinapuDu mAtramE manaM alA ghaMTApathaMgA anukOgalugutAmu. eTochchI, phalAnA katha jIvitAnubhavaM cheppina paddhatilO rASAru ani anukOgalugutAmu. appaTivarakU manaku arthaM ayinaTTu manaM pAThakulugA EmannA anukOvachchu.
prasAd^
Posted by: Mr. UDAYA BHASKARA VARA PRASAD JONNALAGADDA At: 27, Sep 2004 9:51:55 PM IST
Anupama garu,
Thanks a lot for your reply. I got your point and I agree with you. May be you are right.
I just want to share with you what I know about writing this way...
Actually, writing a short story or a novel, in the 'first person' (Tana gurinchi taane swayamgaa cheppukunnatlu raase vidhaanaanni writing in first person antaaru.) is a technique. It's not a new concept. There are many other short stories and novels came in Telugu as well as in English this way. Though it looks like the writer's own story, it's not.
If it's the writer's own story, then, it is called autobiography, not a short story or novel. Short Story or Novel is fiction.
Anyway, let's leave this to the imagination of the readers of telugupeople.com. I respect your imagination.
An intellectual friend of mine recently said, that every reader/viewer has a 'right' to think and imagine whatever way s/he wants, about any written article, story, novel or movie. The writer's responsibility is only to write, but has no control over the reader/viewer's imagination.
So, we are free to think whatever way we want :-)
Posted by: Mr Suresh KVS At: 27, Sep 2004 11:11:50 AM IST
kathanaM chaalaa baavuMdi prasaad gaaru....
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 26, Sep 2004 11:56:09 AM IST
Anupama garu,
I think you are mistaken.
Mr.Prasad has not mentioned anywhere that it is his own life.
I don't think it's a good idea to look things at personal level anyway. A story should be seen as a story. I am sorry, I am talking wrong.
Best regards to Prasad garu and to you and Prasanthi for posting comments.
Posted by: Mr Suresh KVS At: 26, Sep 2004 4:25:04 AM IST
uday bhAskar gAru,
mI kathAnika AdyaMtaM chAlA AsaktikaraMgA sAgiMdi. eMtO bAguMdi.
marinni rachanalanu mI nuMchi kOrukuMTU.... Selavu.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 25, Sep 2004 9:14:00 PM IST
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