|
|
|
|
Articles: Short Stories | | snEham | |
|
| kathanaM baavuMdi kaanee rachana lO pariNati avasaraM.idE modaTi prayatnaM aitE maatraM muMdu muMdu iMkaa baagaa raayagalaranipistOMdi.
ALL THE BEST.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 2, Oct 2004 3:19:10 PM IST
Nice Budugu gaaru,
may be its ur own experience ayi vuntundemo.Out of Country unde valla bhaa valu elane vundochu.Kadha kante kooda meeku Khada raayali anipinchina teeru bagundhi,ante selecting something to write. if you try same way ,mey be u may become What u want 2B.Anyway raayali ane alochana ravadam manchide gaani ela raaste baguntundi ani konchem alochiste,inka manchi stories rayagalaru anu kuntunna.
All the best.
Posted by: Mrs. Bindu Sajeev. meripo. At: 2, Oct 2004 1:35:41 PM IST
Sorry Mr.Budugu garu... I forgot to tell you the most imp. thing.
Let me congratulate you for an excellent narration!
Posted by: Mr Suresh KVS At: 2, Oct 2004 3:17:44 AM IST
In my opinion, the writer wants us to think more by writing this - and to create a debate.
This story sounds stupid and silly in many ways... but going by the narration, I don't think the writer is stupid.
Unless the writer comes back to us, we cannot say what he means by all this?
Till then, let everybody comment on it :-)
Posted by: Mr Suresh KVS At: 2, Oct 2004 3:16:17 AM IST
rachayita garu,
miru rasina katha lo ammayi ki chala adharsa baavalu gala ammayi ga rasaru kani mi adhari parichayam choste kevalam apartment choosi petti, grocery lu kunkune laga vundi. anta matram chetane aa amayi anta serious ga preminchadaniki karanaalu emi levu. katha lo aa amayi paatra consistent gaa vunnatu naaku thochadam ledu.
ecard vachina taruvata meeku tholi subha leka pamputunaanu ani raasi nappudu a male character enduku navvitto naaku ayite ardham kavadam ledu.
Posted by: Ram At: 1, Oct 2004 11:14:48 PM IST
Narration bAgAnE uMdi kAnIMDi, mI Ending assalu nachchalEdu. navvu eMdukO arthaM kAlEdu. mugiMpu elA uMTuMdO, Emi uMTuMdO ani chadivina nAku 'chirunavvu' chUsi 'ChI' anipiMchiMdaMDi.
I didn't like this one. This story lacks sensitivity. No reason of why that girl is interested, (the help is not the one to be mentioned), why this boy is not interested, (but for caste).
Even the f'ship is not shown in good light. The story gives an impression of a companionship. But not f'ship. parAyi dESaMlO, oka daggara kalisi udyOgaM chEstunna teluguvAru kAvaDaM mAtramE reason gA anipiMchiMdi. Not every companionship is a f'ship.
anni parichayAlU snEhAlu kAvu. af`kOrs aMdari UhalU, AlOchanalU okalA uMDavu.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 1, Oct 2004 8:46:20 PM IST
| |
|
|
 |
| Advertisements |
|
|
|
|
| Advertisements |
|
