|
|
Articles: Poetry | bhayam puTTi perugutOmdi | |
|
mI kavita chaalaa baagundanDi. TaiTil 'bhayam '
ani peTTinaa kuuDaa sariggaanE vunDEdanukunTaanu . viDadIsi raayaDamlO SrIlEkha gaari salahaa chakkagaa vundi.
Thanx for a good poem.
Posted by: Mr. sreedhara rao machavolu At: 9, Oct 2004 2:49:46 PM IST viplove !
'VUVVETHTHUNA' antee ardham cheppandi.
Posted by: Miss meenakshivichakshanaone meenakshivichakshanaone At: 8, Oct 2004 12:17:40 PM IST viplove !
'VUVVETHTHUNA' antee ardham cheppandi.
Posted by: Miss meenakshivichakshanaone meenakshivichakshanaone At: 8, Oct 2004 12:01:22 PM IST chaalaabaagundi...ee kavitaku TaiTil kavita lOni padaalatOnE peTTaalani lEdugaa...'amtarmadhanam ' ani peTTumTE baagunDEdi...
Posted by: Mr. Rudra Kottu At: 8, Oct 2004 9:30:09 AM IST evarO annaTlu gampalaku gampalu kavitalu raasi banDlakendukettaDam
Posted by: Saleem At: 7, Oct 2004 11:24:28 PM IST chaalaa bAvundi.adbhutamaina ardham.kavitalOni pratyEkata antaa A pErulOnE vunnaTlugA vundi.SrIlekha cheppinaTlu viDadIsi rAsinaTTlaitE marI bAvunDEdi.
Posted by: special_special At: 7, Oct 2004 7:27:33 PM IST one more word is changed, i found it now itself.
aSruvulanu varShimchaDam this is not my expression. what i wrote is-- ) kaLLabiguvuna nokkipeDutunna aSruvulanu EDustAnEmOnani
varshimchaDam roTin`gA vADE prayOgamE. EDavaDam amTEnE aSruvulananu varShimchaDam kadaa. alAmTidi aSruvulanE EDavaDam (--amtE intensity in weeping...thats my meaning
when we r severly hurt n someone try to console we say ' naa EDupEdO nEnu EDostAnu ' amTaamu kadaa...adE ikkaDa vADadalchaanu
Posted by: Viplove K At: 7, Oct 2004 5:30:42 PM IST imkA cheppAlamTE ... nAku A eks`preShan sUT avvadu . nA kaLLu kaDavalu kAdu , gumDE oka mahA samudram . A samudramlO keraTAlu uvvettuna egisina nADE kamTa nIru vastumdi
Posted by: Viplove K At: 7, Oct 2004 5:11:48 PM IST #TEl amdamgA lEkapOyinaa kAkiki tana pillE muddu kadA .. alAnE nAkUnU... bAlEkunnA nA kavitalO nA vAkyamE naaku muddu
Posted by: Viplove K At: 7, Oct 2004 5:05:33 PM IST sumbramaNyam gAru...mIru cheppAka AshcharyapOyi pOsT ayina kavitanu chaduvukunnAnu... A prayOgam nAdi kAdu..
nEnu ' kaLLabiguvuna nokkipeDutunna aSruvulanu EDustAnEmOnani ' ani vrAsaanu.
evarO ii eDiTar A vAkyAnni mArchAru.
ii prayOgam bAvumdi kAnI ... nAku nEnu vrAsimdE sahajamgA vachchimdi ... ii vAkyAnikI nAkU E sambamdham lEdu . A pogaDta / mechchukOlu nAdi kAdu .
Posted by: Viplove K At: 7, Oct 2004 5:03:33 PM IST
|
|
|
 |
Advertisements |
|
 |
 |
Advertisements |
|