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Articles: Poetry | | varsham......!! | |
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| Modata kavita gurinchi:
ee kavitalo vasrhamlo ua ahladanni veliki teesi readerku cheppalane prayatnam bagane kanipistundi...
ee kavitalo Kalyanigaru I mean poet[ess] varshamlo unna oka anubhootini teesuku ravalani prayatnistunnate kanipsto...tanu oka kavyam raasindi annattu cheppi end cheyadam koddiga asambaddanga anipistundi...kavita madhyalo kathanikllo vache expression {laya baddanga vinabadutondi...etc] koddiga kavita shaili nundi deviate ayinattu anipistundi...al unda kudadu ani nenu ananu..kani adi kavita shailini supplement chesettattu ledu ani na abhiprayam....
aa tarvata grammer mistakes....[parledu manam teluglo achu chandassu etc lo rayalsina avasaram ledu....this is an acceptable mistake...but its an effort to give a nice expression out of known language]...inka bhavanalo edo random thoughts alage organise chesukokunda dinchinattu undi tappa...readerku explain cheddamu ane tapana taggi nattanipicnhindi konni chotla [..daraalato dooranni tagginche vaarathila...ento ee epxression?aa tarvata manmadha gola etc avoid chesi undalsindi]...but oka lady ayi undi...tanalo unde bhavananu tana vantu prayatnam tanaku telisina telugulo taanu raayadam bagundi....Kalyani garu ...vimarsha choosi kagaru padoddu...aa vimarshalo manchi teesukuni improve chesukunte sari...andaru noru moostaru including nenu!...meelo bhavukataku bhavanaku sambandhinchi oka crisis undi..daanni vidagottalante...moosa kavitvam chadvakandi...siva redddy kavitalu, tilak kavitalu, sri sri kavitalu, chera banda raju kavitalu chadavandi....u will really gt gud value !...
Raghotam rao gari vimarsha gurinchi:
Papam raghotama rao garu konni genuine lopaale etti choopincharu. Kakapote raghotam rao garu...edo sree sreno..leda...krishan shastrino...vimarshinche levelo vimarshinchadam modalu pettaru...enduku anta pedda astralu cheppandi...Kanylani gharu ! meer alochinchalsindi emitante...Raghotam rao gri vimarsha mottanni waste ani kotteste meeru kuda nashta poye chance undi...review chesukuni further growth miss ayye chance undi....Raghotam rao garilo oka professional arrogance kanipistuindi...suddenga eduti poet nu brand veyadam, chala ghatainna phrase avasaram unna lekunna vaadadam.....unnayi. Parledu evari style fo criticism variki unutundi. Wat important is wats the criticism about not how the criticm is. Nenu raghotam rao gariki vinna vinchedemitante...mee grandhika , siddanta vimarshalu...sagam mandiki artam kaavu elagu...endukochina godava...lets contribute positive to the poet and to the readers. Common manku anda kunda only meelanti panditlaku matrame ande criticism enduku cheppandi...oorike shilpam , vastuvu ila edo debate lo mataladukunte baguntndi kaani...public lo utsaham koddi kavitalu raase valla daggara matladite emi sababu cheppandi?.....anduna oka ammayi raasindi kavitanu. enta mandi ammayilaku ila tapna untndi...aadadi putti nappudue sagam expression lekunda gontunu nulipestaru intlo...me lanti cirtiques...migata sagamnu champite ila aada kavayitrulu dorakaremo mana telugu vallaku?...idi nenu adugutunnadi reservation kadu concession kane kadu..oka positive drukpathamto telugu bhashaku melu cheyamani!...
vijay
aandhrudu2u@yahoo.com
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 31, Oct 2004 1:19:59 AM IST
Chakkaga ga quote chesaru Kalyani garu. No one is a born poet. Ala ani comment chesetappudu avatali valla feelings artham chesukovali ani bhale chepparu andi.:)
Shresta
Posted by: Ms. Shresta Ms At: 22, Oct 2004 2:24:56 AM IST
hellO raaghOttaM raavugaaru,
mee sudeergha caamenT choosaaka,meeku maLLee caamenT peTTakunDaa unDalEkapOtunnaanu.
modaTagaa mee vimarSa meeda naa abhipraayaM chebutaanu,.
vimarSa cheyyaTaM tappu kaadu kaani cheyyavalasina daaniki viruddaMgaa chEstEnE tappu.vimarSa eduTi vaarini alOchinpa chEsEdigaa vunDaali kaani baadha kaliginchElaa kaadu.ee saiTlO mee snEhitulE chaalaa mandi vunnaaru,vaaLLu vimarSa chEstE santOshaMgaa sweekarinchaalanipistundi ,alaa sunnitaMgaa cheyyaali(O bhaavukuDu chEsE vidhaanaM adi),antE kaani tappulekkaDunnaayabbaa ippuDu nEnu caamenT cheyyaali ani vetiki chEsEdaanni yEmanTaarO mari.
intaku mundu mee meeda vunDeelEnaTTu naa manasulO O abhipraayaM vunDEdi,adi ippuDu poortigaa pOyindi.
vaakya nirmaaNam baagOlEdannaru,baagaanE vundi.daani pakkanE O saameta cheppaaru adi chaalaa asahyaMgaa,asandarbhaMgaa vundi.eduTivaarilO tappulu enchE vaaru tamalOni tappulu telusukOlEraTa....mari enta varaku nijamO meelaanTi vaarikE teliyaali.
meeru chivaragaa annaaru,nEnu ekkuvagaa byaac gravunD meeda dRUshTi peDutunnanani ika mundu(mee caamenT choosaaka peTTanani aaSistunnaa ani)yenta telivitakkuvatanaM anDi,meeru annaarani nEnu naa ishTaanni champEsukunTaanani elaa anukunnaru meerasalu.ippuDu nEnu 'mee aalOchanaa dhOraNi,maTlaaDE vidhaanaM assalu baagOlEdu anTaanu 'ika meeru maaTlaaDaTam maanEstaaraa,cheppanDi..!ikkaDa ee aascharyaardhakaM saripOyindanTaaraa..!
ikkaDE telisipOtundi mee alOchanaa dhOraNi enta astavyastaMgaa vundO,mundu daanni maarchukunTE manchidi(vubhayulaku).
chivaragaa okka maaTa,nEnu kavitalu naa aanandaMkOsaM raasukunTaanu,naa feelings ni vunnavi vunnaTTu gaa pEpar meeda peDataanu.antE kaani daaniki mundu venuka O scripT tayaaruchEsukOnu.naa kavitalu maamoolu manushulu choosi santOshistE naaku adi chaalu(meelaanTi goppa vaLLaki nachElaa raayaDaM ,raayavalasina avasaram naaku lEdu).
yenni chadivaanO,yenniTiki caamenT peTTaanO teliyadu annaru,mari vokE vokka kavitanu bEse chEsukuni ,naa mottaM kavitala venuka vunna byaac gravund gurinchi yenduku caamenT chesinaTlu.
prasaantata kOsam raasukunE(chaduvukunE) ee kavitalani,aa prasaantataki dooraM cheyyaTaaniki prayatnichakanDi.mee abhipraayaalanu eduTivaari meeda ruddalani aalOchinchakanDi.
ee meyilu ni nEnu maamulugaa ayitE meeku persanal gaa pampinchEdaanini kaani ikkaDa meeru naa vishayaMlO andari mundi ishTaM vachinaTlu raasaaru kanuka,nEnu kooDa andariki telisElaanE caamenT pampistunnanu.idi naa swabhaavaaniki viruddaM kaani avatali vaaru elaa vunTE vaallatO alaa vunDaTamE naaku ishTaM.
meeru mee gurinchi chivaralO anna rendu swabhaavaalalO renDavadi meeku vartistundani naa uddheSyam.
unTaanu,
Subham.
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 20, Oct 2004 10:18:39 PM IST
Thank you friends...
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 17, Oct 2004 7:51:08 PM IST
wow.. Kalyaani beautiful verse:-).. varshamlO taDisinanta aanandam kaligindi .. Keep writing.
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 17, Oct 2004 12:15:23 PM IST
hayyO .......enta bAvundO cheppalEnu.....asalE varshamanTE ishTam.....ika mI kavita chadivAka...inta andamaina varNana ....vAh adbhutam..
Posted by: special_special At: 16, Oct 2004 7:53:39 PM IST
Hi
Varsham gurinchi chaala baagaa raasaarandi,cheppaarandi.Mee ooha sakthiki naa johaarlu.Mee kavita chadivina taruvaata vaana mida prema,gouravam periginidi endhukante varsham definition,andaalu telisinadi kanuka.Inka nunchi varsham vaste chustuu mee kavitaloni padaalu gurthuku techhukoni inkaa ekkuva anandamu feel avutaanu.Konni words ardhamu avadaaniki chaala time pattinadi meaning teliyaka.But ardhamu avina taruvaata aa sentences malli malli chaduvutnte haayi kaliginchinadi.
Meeru baagaa raastaaru kanuka involve avvi chaduvutaamu,fun untaadi.originality untaadi.Inta kanna baagaa varsham meeda evaru raayaremo.Andharu chinna comments pettaaru.But nenu ekkuva enjoy chesaanu kaabatti,pedda comment pettaanu(meeru inkaa ekkuva kavitalu raayaalani korukuntunnaamu). Prema mida ekkuva kavitalu raayandi ,alaanti kavitalu chaduvutunte inkaa anandamu feel avataaru magavaallu and aadavaallu .
Thanks baagaa raastunnanduku.
Posted by: Mr. - chivalrous At: 16, Oct 2004 3:06:35 PM IST
oops....kalyani* ;-)
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 16, Oct 2004 0:17:36 AM IST
'paayalu veedina pilla kaaluva.....kottha singaaralanu addhukuntundhi' ee line chala bagundhi kalayni...yeh avunu....raayabharam, rayabhari anna rendu padaalu okatelaa vadakundaa oka padaanni marchi raasthe bagundedhi.....nice one though....keep posting
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 16, Oct 2004 0:09:55 AM IST
correct Kiran garu,rendu padaalu vokate laa kakundaa marchi raste inka baagundedi....Thanks for your valuable suggestion and Thanks to all for your comments and compliments....
Kalyani.
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 15, Oct 2004 11:02:14 PM IST
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