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Articles: Poetry | | mamatala tIpi | |
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| namaskaaram
amarapaali gaaru,
dhanyavaadhaalanDi, mI salahaa baavundi.
SrIlEKa gaaru,
mIru mamchi rachayita ayivunDi, naa pratI kavita ki kaamenTs istU nannu enkarEj chEstunna mIku naa dhanyavaadhaalanDi,
I rOjullO vyaasaalalOni, kadhalalOni, kavitalalOni tappite satyam anEdi manaki bayaTa ekkaDa kanipinchaDam lEdu. andukanE satyaanni saahityapu viluvala maaTuna daachaDam annaanu.
Posted by: Mrs. manvita manvita At: 31, Oct 2004 7:48:44 AM IST
modalu pettetappudu koddiga confusingga unna..['like sahitypu viluvvala ..etc.]....overallaga bane vachindi kavitha...paavala billaku gelama vesi ...expression bagundi...commercialisation of affections/relations ....ika asalu manchi subject choose chesukunnaru....andukui appreciate cheyali...lekapote ee prema doma, priyuralu etc. ega bore kottestunnayi telugu kavitalu....keep practising...and focus on human values ....anyway gud effort! keep it up manvita garu!
vijay
aandhrudu2u@yahoo.com
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 30, Oct 2004 11:45:57 PM IST
baagundandi!! @manvita!!!!
Posted by: Jasmine Meera At: 30, Oct 2004 4:51:49 PM IST
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