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| manassunu ranjimpajEsE
ranjani gaari ee
kavitE oka selayEru
err...viplov has a point there!
so..
nee vanTi pulakintalu pushya raagamulE!
nee gajagamana naDakayE gOmEdhikamaayenulE..!
nee pachchani kanupaapalE naaNyamaina pachchalE!
Posted by: Mr. Siri Siri At: 1, Nov 2004 3:44:46 PM IST
3 lines r the feelings of the man but not the girl's beauties. so u cant compare them as diamonds in girls character or appearance.
only 6 diamonds.
and does the girl have no good heart or mind or character other than a cute face, cheek and style ?
character and heart will be the precious diamonds not such external things. its not much good to waste vocabulary and poetry to praise just a skin depth beauty.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 31, Oct 2004 10:47:26 AM IST
amdam anEdi KaChchitamgA nirvachimchalEnappuDu
evariki tOchinavidhamgA vAru
cheppukOvachchu !!
prayatnAlu chEstumTEnE rEnj lu perugutAyi !!
prOsID ayipOmDi !!!
all the best
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 31, Oct 2004 9:17:29 AM IST
bagane undi..improve chesukuntaru ante suggestion ivvagalanu....kakapote ilanti description chala routine ayyindi..ammayi anadm mutyalatonu..vennelatonu..rangulatonu...describe cheyadam koddiga telugu telisina prati poet chestunna pane...kabatti....asalu andamu gurinchi rasetappudu....oka vioshayam gurtunchukovali....andam ante enti ani mimmalni adigaranukondi meeru define cheyagalaraa?....kani adi explain cheyadaniki kavitalo prayatninchali ela?...andam anedi khachitanga idi ani define cheyagalige padam kaadu...andam anedi oka anubhoothi...mari elanti anubhoothi?...udaharanaku...konni anubhootulu ela untayanate....oka poetku chelli ante chala prema...anduku aayana anubhootini ela explani chestadante...'nee padam meeda puttu machanai chellemma...toda buttina runam teerchukontane chellemmma ' antadu.....mari 'padam meeda puttumachanai....' ane anubhoothi entadi?.....akkade peot creativity kanipistundi...aa anubhootini define cheyagalama?...cheppadaluchukunnademante.....anubhhhotini explaina cheyali...ante......anduna oka complex anubhootini express cheyalante......manaku mutyalu, vennela, rangulu saripovu...adi chala mandi cheppearu....baga alochinchadi ...baga try cheyandi....meelo rayalanna ugre undi..ika effort pettandi...u will repa best out of u!..ok?
Vijay
aandhrudu2u@yahoo.com
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 30, Oct 2004 11:33:42 PM IST
amta viluveina nAri nAku dorikitE bAgumDu !!
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 30, Oct 2004 5:40:43 PM IST
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