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| inta manchi annavunna mee chelli nijangaa adrustavanturaalu. chaalaa bagundi. ippude chadivaanu.
Posted by: Mrs. LAKSHMI JYOTHI GRANDHI At: 9, Dec 2004 1:00:44 AM IST
ippuDE chadivaanu, Its a touching and excellent
narration inta manchi kavita maatO chadivinchi nanduku chaalaa chaalaa thaanks anDI viplOv gaarU. Best Wishes for a Happy and Colourful Divali
Posted by: Mr. sreedhara rao machavolu At: 9, Nov 2004 2:21:19 PM IST
and i want to clear onething . for u, Srilekha, and few other women who expressed like u ,' that i miss a brother like this one '
One who can write well about sisterhood may not be a good brother. Feelings for a poem about sister is for few moments or days. But brotherhood is a lifetime bond, for which i am anot as good as the brother whom i mentioned in this poem.
I wrote about soldier ( i m not a soldier ) about god ( i m not one ) about corrupts,intellectuals , mother , dad ( i am none among these ) just like that i am not a brother.truth may be harsh, but its true.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 6, Nov 2004 12:35:28 PM IST
chelli paTla annaku umDE bhAvam ani nA uddEsyam . chelli ani mAtramE TaiTil umTE vrAstunnadi annagA bhAvistunnavADA , akkA ? annadi sarigA teliyadani .... title suggests that 1st person singular is that of male's, beacuse some ppl think VIPLOVE is a pen name and could be a woman too.thats y i specifically mentioned sister of a brother.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 6, Nov 2004 12:31:00 PM IST
.naluguru biDDalni pOgoTTukoni nissaMtuvugA punistrIgA maraNiMchina nA chellelni gurtu chEsAvu viplOv guMDe kalukkumaMdi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 5, Nov 2004 0:11:57 AM IST
SiSuvu ni iMtE aMdaM gaa varNiMchina jaashuvaa gurtochchaaDu mee annaku chelli chadivitE...
Very nice one.
Keep it up viplov!
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 4, Nov 2004 10:51:51 AM IST
chaalaa baagundi viplav gaaru. annaachelleLLa anubandham kaLLaku kaTTinaTTugaa vivarinchaaru
Posted by: Mr. HAYAGREEVA MURTY Rachuri At: 4, Nov 2004 9:31:49 AM IST
Chaala chakkaga undi :)
One of the pearls from ur pen!
-Divya
Posted by: VIRGO Gal At: 4, Nov 2004 2:37:51 AM IST
wow.. nicely expressed. great job :) keep it up...
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 4, Nov 2004 0:39:41 AM IST
inta baagaa anna chelli madhya unde sensitive relation gurinchi kavita chadavadam perhaps ide first time...Tilak, Siva Reddy, Sree Sree etc. kavitalenno chadivaa....Perhaps chaalaa mandi miss chesna subject...tarvata...chala mandi chese cinematic and routine broing expressions....Viplove lo oka bheebhatsamaina sensitivity undi...padunu pettadante....dummu dulipe kavi avutademo?!.........woderful job Viplove..keep it up!
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 4, Nov 2004 0:12:02 AM IST
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