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Articles: Poetry | | satyaan&vEshaNa | |
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| arishaDvargaala parishvamgamloe
aadamarichinaaka an~vaeshaNa saadhyamaa?
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 9, Nov 2004 2:27:11 PM IST
oka 5,6 times painE chadivaanu ardhaM chEsukOvaTAniki....appaTikI konni words ardhaM kaalEdu.... high gaa anipinchindi language naaku....
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 6, Nov 2004 7:41:20 AM IST
meeru vaade pada prayogam nijangaa adbutam.....chaalaa baagundi Kirangaru....
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 5, Nov 2004 9:54:49 PM IST
chaalaa baagundi kiraN gaaru, padaalapai meekunna paTTu advitIyam. :)
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 5, Nov 2004 8:47:34 AM IST
.vittulO vodigina mahAvRuxaM
satyAn vEShaNasAgistunna amAyakatvaM
kiraN
nigUDHArdhavaMtameina I padaprayOgam adbhutaMgAvuMdi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 5, Nov 2004 7:38:17 AM IST
pada prayoagam...shaili baagundi...kaakapote kavitaloa koni choTla connections miss ayyaayemonani anipistundi naaku!...udaaharaNaku okaTi.. last line of fist stanza.... anTe mallee modaTi sentence nu repeat chesetappudu....aedoa.. punctuation marks miss ayyina feeling vastundi..daanito main stream of kavita nundi visiresinaTTu anipistundi. Ika ee tarahaaloa kavitaa prayoagam chaalaa virivigaa kanipsitundi manaku..manchide...ayite..naa personal opinion emanTe...ee tarahaa kavitalu inkaa koddigaa refine kaavaali ani...udaaharaNaku..ilanti pada paryogamtoTe..meeru chadivaaroa ledoa teleedu gaani 'pravaaha gaanam' ani oka kavitaa sankalanam by 'daamu' ane oka yuva kavi nunDi. naa daggara inka unTe aa book khachchitanga okati reproduce chestaa..oka rakamaina gaji biji pada prayogam adi inkaa chaalaa.....cheppalsina vishayam sootiga undadu... at the end of the poem u get that complex feeling what the poet wants to communicate....some times it happens that...u feel its only an experiment with vocabulary..anyway
but one must appreciat the efforts of Shri Kiran.....
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 5, Nov 2004 1:06:12 AM IST
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