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| inner meaning chaalaa vundhi andy mee kavitalo....perfect....raghottamarao gari comment tho first dhaaniki ardham baga ardhamayindhi... :-)
keep posting...meeru vimarsinche vidhaanam chalaa bagundhi. definetely we need that kind of critics to find out our mistakes to get betterment in future writings....keep do that ....the way of ur commenting is making a writer very thoughtful in a right way. That's the main job of critic i mean to say. Criticism also one of wonderful arts. You have it. Nice to have u here.
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 19, Nov 2004 10:25:01 PM IST
nijamayina kavulanu grthuchesaru mee kavitato. ee site goppa kavulato Saahiti people anipinchukondi.
Posted by: Mrs. LAKSHMI JYOTHI GRANDHI At: 16, Nov 2004 9:35:31 AM IST
baagundi...ilaa Taim teesukuni ee kavita meeda vimarSa poasT chaesina prati okkariki kRutaNgatalu...
modaTaga ee kavita inta mandini choosi inspair ayyi andari koasam oka chiTTi kavita raayaalanipinchi raasindi....ayinaa idi kavitaa roopamlo unDabaTTi vimarshaarhamayyindi.
ayitae modaTi renDu sentences ....oka chinna paaTi charcha raepaayi.oka moola, subramaNyam gaaru vimarSa vadalaDam..anduku oka moola naa pramaeyam emee lekunDaa readers respond kaavaDam chaala santosham vesindi.
vimarSincheTappauDu gamaninchaalsindemanTae...vimarSa raastunnaamaa... feed back raastunnaamaa ani. feed back ela unTundi?..idi ilaa undi..idi alaa undi...idi naaku nachaledu...idi naaku baaga nachchindi...idi aedchinaTTu undi...anTe main ga impressions raayadam anna maaTa...ayitae vimarSa annadi...inkaa munduku veLLi...sahaetukangaa viSleshistundi..!!
modaTi renDu sentences concretegaa laevu ani chaesina vimarSa ela undanTae...'avannee vedaalloa unnaayaSa' anna kanyaa Sulkamloani Dailaag gurtu teppistundi...:)).....vimarSakudu elaanoa cheppi unTae naa buRRa kooDaa konta baagu paDaedi kadaa?..... concretegaa ledu anukunnaa kooDaa raayadam nakaemannaa aanandamaa?..
ika kavita ilaanae unDaali alaanae undaali...ani vimarSinchae paddatito naaku fundamental differences unnaayi. ilaa frame work nirdaeSistoo poate...ika kavitallo kotta prayoagaalu jaragavu..saahityam....alaanae inka koppu kaTTae style lone unDaedi..ilaa baabd kaT chaesae prayatnaalu jarigaevi kaadu..Sree Sree kavitvam vachchinappudu..andaroo alaa nivverapoayi...asalu idi kavitvam kaadu...kavitvamlo Chandassulu gatraa laevu ani mottukunnaaru...idaenTi vachanaalu raasi..kavitvam ani foaj kodutunnaaDu ani visukkunna vaalluu unnaaru.....kaabaTTi...kavitvam moortangaane unDaali ledaa... abtractgaa unDaali ani..saraLangaa unDaali ani ledaa klishTangaa undaali ani..... fix chaeya koodadu ani naa abhipraayam.....tvaraloa...'kavitvam elaa unDaali - kavita vimarSa elaa unDaali ?' ane oka article ee site lo poasT chaeddaamanukunTunnaa....... lets not discuss impressions...lets discuss rationale..lets discuss logic ...
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 11, Nov 2004 2:16:46 PM IST
AndhruDu gArU mIru prOtsahinchE paddhati chAlA bAvundi :)
Posted by: special_special At: 6, Nov 2004 6:54:05 PM IST
To be frank not at all impressive... Sorry to say that...
kaMTi chUpu ku ajeerti , medaDuki kashaayaM taagiMchaDaM ivEvee concrete expressions kaavu.veelainaMta mUrtaM (concrete) gaa , saraLaM gaa raayaDaM kavi cheyyavalasina muKyamaina pani. paigaa kavi spRuSiMchEdi paaThakuDi hRudayaanni ,medaDuni kaadu.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 5, Nov 2004 12:06:38 PM IST
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