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| maMchi vyaMgyaM....
Keep it up kiraNjee..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 16, Nov 2004 1:01:40 PM IST
ee rojullo nadustunna raajakeyaalaku,rajakeeyanaayakulaku addam padutundandi mee kavita....good one.
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 10, Nov 2004 8:06:48 PM IST
vyangyam chaala baagundi.. kiraN gaaru..
mukhyamantri avvaalsina fEsu annaaru kaani.. aa chivari vaakyam varaku atanu evarO teliyadu aandhruDu gaaru
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 10, Nov 2004 3:18:43 PM IST
vyangyam baagaa sphurinchindi....kiraN gaaru...manchi TaesT undi meeku....chivari nunDi 4va sentence loa..mantrilaa ani mallee meeru repeat chaesi cheppavalasina avasaram laedu...anTae kaadanTaraa?....udaaharanaku cinemaa loa...buRRa meesaaalu, galla chokka, aDDa diDDangaa kaTTina pancha...unTae...manam goonDaa anukovaTamledoo?..vaaDae vachchi naenu 'goonDaa' character ani chepte gaani artam kaadaa manaku?...paigaa...anduloa reemphasis kooda emee ledu..aa wording redundant akkaDa...! chinna porapaaTaelenDi... I think to avoid these kind of mistakes u need good amount of practice...!!.....manchi kavita... 'Dabbu balupu' gurinchi manchi expression!!
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 10, Nov 2004 1:48:18 PM IST
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