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| Thank you very much friends.....
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 30, Nov 2004 8:30:35 PM IST
Chaala baagaa undandi(Raasaarandi) kalyani Tota gaaru.Manusu baaramugaa undandi kavita chadivana taruvaata.Gatamu malli raadu ani taluchukunnappudu baadagaa undi.Ilaanti kavitalu inkaa raayalani korutuu ..oka abimaani
Posted by: Mr. - chivalrous At: 26, Nov 2004 6:47:27 PM IST
chalaa baagundi kalyani gaaru !!!!!!!
Posted by: Jasmine Meera At: 19, Nov 2004 5:16:33 PM IST
nee aalochana bagundhi kalyani.....keep posting
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 16, Nov 2004 1:50:27 AM IST
Nice thoughts Kalyani gaaru... I thought i can say couple words but aandhrudu gaaru already did.. :)
Good luck.. keep writing :)
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 12, Nov 2004 1:21:55 PM IST
Thank you so much Andrudugaru.Really I like the way you commented.Deffinately I will read those poetry which you suggested.Once again Thanks a lot and keep suggest me sir.
Kalyani.
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 12, Nov 2004 1:54:13 AM IST
kaLyaani gaaru...meeru oka manchi expression iddaamanae tapana...
clear gaa kanipistundi...kaani konni contradictions loa paDi...konta varaku taggaalsi vachchindi.
udaaharaNaku....modalu peTTinappuDu 'ninnaTi nirvikaarapu Sakalaalu' annaaru...chivarloa..'kaLLa munde kanumarugavutunna ennennoa madhuraanubhootulu...' 'entoa andamaina baalya, yavvana kaumaara daSalanu...'...anTaaru.....mari gaDachina gatam...madhuramainadaa?..laeka...nirvikaaramainadaa?
inkaa kaalam 'madhuraanubhootula parimaLalanu karkaSangaa tanaloa imuDchukoni...'...ani kaalaanni vimarSinchi...chivarloa...'kaalam kadilipoatundi'..'nirmalangaa niSchalangaa nishkalmashangaa'..ani contrary qualities nu kaalaaniki aapaadinchaaru...karecTaenaa?.....
ika kavitaa vastuvuku vaddaamu.....raepaTiki ninnaTiki vaarathi....anae
sabject enduku teesukovalanipinchindi meeku?.... philosophical touch iddaamanukunnaaru.... technical gaa cheppaalanTae ivannee 'bhaava vaada' roopaalu.
naa suggestion aenTanTae meeku o manchi kavita raayaalane tapana chaalaa undi...alaagae aatRuta kooDaa undi...chaalaa manchi quality !!...ayitae...meeru traditional expressions loa paDi... track miss ayyaaru ani naa feeling ...anduku...manchi saahityam chadavanDi...tilak kavitalu, Sivaa reDDi kavitalu [eeyana kavitalu jagartagaa chadavanDi okkoaasaari chaalaa kaampleks gaa confusing gaa unTaayi ], konta stree vaada kavayitrulu like oalgaa, jaya prabha kavitalu chadavanDi. ika final gaa aandhra bhoomi, aandhra prabha laanTi magazines loa photos to paaTu vaeyinchukune kavitalu maatram eTTi paristitulloa chadavakanDi...kavitalloa immaturity perigipotundi.... anyway keep writing...... manchi saaahityam chadavaDam maravaddu.........manchi saahityam 'iraanee chaay'
laa atukkunaelaa unDaali...manasuku!
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 11, Nov 2004 4:01:38 PM IST
nice one kalyani
Posted by: Mrs. manvita manvita At: 11, Nov 2004 11:13:31 AM IST
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