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| idi 'kuppili padma' laanTi stree vaada sahiteevettala nunDi vachchina katha anTae namma buddi kaavaDam laedu. chivari ending enta paelaangaa undi. oka rachayitrigaa unDaalsina Expression karuvayyindi. rachayita cheppalanukunnadi sooTigaa cheppaesukuntoo potae...saahityam enduku asalu?...maamulu maaTalugaa cheppavachchu kadaa?...ido simple incident ..chivarloa...naagamaNi ila anukunTundi anna maaTalatoa ending ...oka incindent nu incident gaa cheppaDaaniki kathakudu avasaram laedu.maamulu manishi ayitae saripoatundi. aa chivari para chaala diluting gaa undi. aa chivari vaakyaalu... readers feel kaavaali...rachayitri noaru vippi chepparaadu. kathaku maaTalaku aa maatram difference laekapotae elaaganDi?
I feel there is a lot of scope in this particular story to improve expressions and to impart the hidden feelings of a socially mingling 'secluded woman'.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 16, Nov 2004 5:12:38 PM IST
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