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Articles: Poetry | | ' pOneeTeyil ' | |
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| Good try Praveengaru,baagundi.keep posting....
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 19, Nov 2004 9:28:12 PM IST
very cute. keep it up praveen
Posted by: Ms. smiley smile At: 18, Nov 2004 11:25:15 PM IST
ee sabjekTloaa unDae 'aardhrata' enta goppadanTae...vimarSakulandaroo inta varaku aadavaallae!...antae mari...ee bhoomi meeda vaallu tappa..inkevaru ilanTi manchi bhaavanalanu nilabeTTagalaru?
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 18, Nov 2004 9:37:19 PM IST
chelli jaDa anae concept koddiga attachment toa kooDukunna sabecT anduku ..chinna paalugaarae panipilla jaDatoa kalipi raayaDam...kavitaloa 'aardhrata'nu penchindi. subject loanae dammu undi asalu. ilaanTi sabjekT choose chaesukunnanduku abhinandinchaali.
ika poatae kavitaa Saili valana reader loa pratyaekangaa kalagaalsina feeling ku punch miss ayyindaemoanani anipistundi. okasaari jaagartagaa chadivi chooDanDi. 'tanaku alaanTi jaDa laedani aeDchae chelli....' 'naa chellini aeDpinchaDaaniki idoa lakkee chaans'.. manchi bhaavanalu!!. ayitae expression maamoolu sentences gaane unDipoayindi. guDamba gaaru....manchi prayatnaalu chaestunnaaru. alaanae cheyanDi... subject choose chaesukunae vishayamloa... reader ku 'aardhrata' andiddaamaanae tapana clear gaa telustundi. adae nibaddatatoa...raajee lekunDaa.... expression peTTanDi. perhaps u need to get exposed to good poetry which would enable you to empower your expression by observation and experience!!..
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 18, Nov 2004 9:34:30 PM IST
:)) Chaala bavundi andi...
Posted by: Ms. Shresta Ms At: 15, Nov 2004 7:36:49 PM IST
adbhutam
Posted by: Sri Moukthika At: 15, Nov 2004 9:35:53 AM IST
:)
Posted by: Jasmine Meera At: 15, Nov 2004 1:45:29 AM IST
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