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Articles: Poetry | | phaisal..!! | |
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| raghu gaaru...meeru raasina 12 lain la vimarshaloa..modaTi lain loa vyangyamu..4 lain laloa chiraaku ( modaTloa noo chivarloanoo ) , 4 lain laloa udaaharaNalu, 1 lain loa prayoagam anTae aemanukunTunnaaroa mee avagaahana, chivarloa rendu lain loa oka sooTi visuruto aaroapaNa ....baagundi!
nenu mee 12 lain la vimarshaloa vishayamunna 5 lain lu maatram (4 lain lu udaaharanNalu oka lainu prayogam anTae mee avagaahana ) touch chaestaanu. manninchanDi.
meeru Sree Sree chaesina prayoagaalatoa ee kavitvam loa jarigina prayoagaanni compare chaesae prayatnam chaesaaranTae.....nannu Sree Sree ettuku edigina kavi anna anukovaali..laedaa meeru antakanna takkuvaloa unna kavitvam chooDakooDadu raayakooDadu anna oka uchcha sthitiloa ayinaa unDaali. raghu gaaru..Sree Sree chaesina prayoagam appaTloa graandhikaanni daivatvam CHandassu paramaatma anukunna CHaandasa kavulaku chempa peTTu. Sree Sree laeni telugu kavitvaanni oohinchaDam ' gaaDjillaa ' elaa unTundoa ani ' aenimashan ' chaeyaDam laanTidi. khachchitangaa ee chinni minee kavita aayana sthaayitoa polchadagedigaa unnaa naa jeevitam dhanyamainaTTae.ee chinna kavitaloa vachchina chinna oohaku manchi viluva unnaTTae. ika meeru vervaeru vaakyaalu udaaharinchaaru. anduloa frankly naakaemee prayoagam kanipinchalaedu. vaaTiloa pada prayoagam baagunDochchu. doubt laedu. adi expreminet anTae naaku difference undi .
ika prayoagam 'alavoakagaa ayaachitangaa' vachchaedi annaaru. anTae organise chaesukokundaa...kavitvam raayaDam anna abhipraayam sphuristundi.'adae panigaa koorchuni chaesae sainTific prayoagam kaadu' - naenu intaku mundu cheppinaTTu ilaanae jaragaali vishayaalu alaanae jaragaali vishayaalu anna vaadana sariayinadi kaadu ani naa abhipraayam. prayoagam conscious gaa jaragochchu unconscious gaa jaragochchu. nyooTan laa gurutvaakarshaNa siddhaantaanni kanipeTTinaTTu undavachchu eDwin thaamsan laa balb kanipeTTinaTTU unDavachchu. creativity annadi..kaevalam oa merupu merisinaTTu alaa vachchi medaDuloa merisi vellipotundi anukoavaDam porapaaTaina abhipraayam.
ika kavitaloa..nijanga meeru expect chaesina levello experiment jarakka poyi unDavachchu. inkoa vishayam aenTanTae... probably ' faisal ' anae raayalaseema graameeNa pada prayoagam antagaa hattukuni unDakapovachchu chaalaa mandiki . naenu oka raayalaseem graameeNa praantam nunDi vachchina yuvakuDigaa naaku baagaa impressive gaa anipinchavachchu. aedi aemainaa ee specific ' faisal ' padamu daani vaaDuka gurinchi kavitaloa adi enduku reader ku effectivegaa anipinchadoa explain chaesae diSagaa meeru emannaa cheppagaligitae dhanyunni. samayam laeka samayaaniki javaabu raayalaekapoyanu kshantavyunni.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 30, Nov 2004 12:56:13 PM IST
ee kavita post chaesi padi roajula painae ayyindi. ee kavita meeda jarigina chinna charchanu, vachchina vimarSalnu... final gaa naa response post chaesi mugiddaamanukunTunnaa.
Taim teesukuni vimarSa post chaesina prati okkariki kRutaNgatalu.
asalu ee kavita raasina uddeSyam background cheptaa. S K University loa oa friend unTae kalavaDaaniki vellaanu. aa roaju raatri bayaTa mess loa bhoanchaesi maemu vastunDagaa inkoa friend nu parichayam chesaaDu. he is doing his M A(Telugu lit.) . aa abbaayi he is from Anantapur . aa roju punnami...baagaa gurtundi.. auditorium daggara koorchoni pichchaa paaTi maTlaadutoo...Dabbulu aemi ivvagaladu anae chinna discussion !. cheppukunToo vastunnaamu...chaduvistundi, sinimaalu choopistundi, vilaasaalu istundi...anToo discuss chaestoo unTae naa friend 'manchiga politics l loa paduvulistundi' annaadu. inkoa Anantapoor phrend peddagaa navvi ' phaisal ' annaaDu. andaramu navvukunnaamu. ayitae..appuDae andaramoo saahityam anTae kaastoa koostoa interest unnavaallamu...idi kavita frame chaeyaDaaniki upayoagapaDutundi ani.... immediatega ee lines anukunnaamu. marusaTi roaju ... our friends had shown it to telugu professor Rachamallu Ramachandra Reddy ...vinae unTaaru anukunTaa reaDars aayana paerunu...!. it was also displayed in the notice board for telugu literature students . adee sangati ee kavita actualgaa naenu raasina kavita kaadu. naa mitRulu raasindae. naaku nachchindi.
ayitae ee kavitanu elaa choodaali?
ee kavitaloa goppa padaalu levu. goppa vaakyaalu asalae laevu. observe chaestae..okae okka padam ee kavitaloa meaning convey chaesindi. adokka padam teesaestae...ika kavita emee laedu. adokka padam pakkaku peTTi kavitanu chadivitae.... asalu idi kavitae kaadu. this is a very small experiment with language. I dont want to label it as a great work here . ee saiTloa unDae utsaahavantulaina kavulaku kavayitRulaku ee kavita post chaeyaDam valla ...nenu aemaina contribute chaestaanaemoa ani ikkaDa poasT chaesaa. manaku bhaasha entoa expression ichchindi. mana manasuloa anukunae vaaTiki bhaavam kalpinchindi.
ika kiran gaaru anae 'goppa anubhooti ledu' !. aa vishayam naenu Sraddagaa aaloachistaanu endukoa ani. ayitae kiraN gaaru post chaesina soamaraaju kavitaku deeniki oka fundamental difference undi. 'faisal' has come with little effort of experimentation with a single common usage word with certain accent whereas the poem by Shri Soamaraju encompasses common man's style of talking only. (but soamaraaju kavitaloa goppa aardhrata undi.. its just a great expression no doubt).ilaagae telangaaNaa yaasaloa chaala kavitalu unnaayi. avi tvaraloa post chesta so that it can benefit everyone . kaabaTTi naa feeling aenTanTae renDu kavitalanu compare chaeyalemu ani.
ika chivarigaa 'yoo'rmila gurinchi....navvostundi...aemannaa raaddaamanTaaraa?
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 25, Nov 2004 4:57:51 PM IST
mee kavita baagundi. kaani nEnU kiraN gaaritO EkIbhavistunnaanu. koddigaa dialogue laa anipinchindi.
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 24, Nov 2004 12:44:02 PM IST
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baagundi !!..naa kavita chivariki ' sh ' gaari laanTi vaallaloa kooDaa inspiration nimpi kavita raayaalanna urge techchindanTae naaku santoasham! ' sh ' loa manchi sense of humour undi. naaku ee direction loa aloachinchananduku navvaesindi. paigaa ' phaisal ' pada prayoagaanni baagaa artham chesukunnaaru ' sh ' gaaru tana modaTi kavitaloa.
mari ee pada prayoagam ' sh ' medaDuku
'maeta' vaesindi...alaa kavita dorlindi!!..
saadhaaraNangaa prajalloa unDae vaaDuka elaa kavitalloa effective gaa use
chaeyochchoa ee kavitaloa explain chaeyaDaaniki prayatninchaanu.ee graandhikaanni vadili saadhyamainanata varaku common man ku daggaragaa elaa kavitvam malavachhoa cheppaDaaniki chinna prayatnam chaesaanu. raayalaseema graameeNa bhaashaloa ee 'phaisal ' chaalaa viriviga kanipistundi. especially kaDapa vaipu. deeni usage nu inkaa elaborate gaa explain chaeyadaluchukunTae ilaa raayochchu...
kavitvam
haayi gunTadi
gunDe nimputadi
adaragoDtadi
' sh ' buRRaku 'maeta' aestadi
phaisal....!!
:)
PS: 'sh' gaariki kshamaapaNalatoa...
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 22, Nov 2004 11:38:24 PM IST
' phaisal '...anna padamtoa chivarloa end ayyindi. chaalaa mandi aDigaaru ' phaisal ' anTae aenTi ani. ' phaisal ' antae....' khatam ' ani..idi saadhaaraNangaa raayalaseema vaipu unDae bhaashaa prayoagam...ika antaa waste ayipoayindi anae uddeSyamtoa vaaDutaru.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 22, Nov 2004 1:26:03 PM IST
Exactly.....kluptam gaa baaga chepparu Vijaygaru....keep posting.
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 22, Nov 2004 9:38:35 AM IST
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doMganAyAllaku padavulistadi
I padaprayOgam chAlA sahajaMgAvuMdi.
kluptaMlOnE nirliptata dyOtakamowtOMdi.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 22, Nov 2004 0:02:58 AM IST
'paisalu saduvulistadi'....hmm...paisalu ichchE chaduvu ....ahA nE oppukOnu paisalu chaduvulistumdanTE
Posted by: special_special At: 21, Nov 2004 11:06:59 AM IST
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