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Articles: Poetry | | panDaga vachchi veLLindi | |
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| daralu mandi poyi matabulu konukkoleni, panduga elachestro theliyani vallaki ememi tapasulu vuntayi chepparu. baganey vundi
Posted by: Mrs. LAKSHMI JYOTHI GRANDHI At: 19, Nov 2004 10:20:54 PM IST
Hello Praveen,
Nice poem.I appreciate your effort and encouraging you to write more.
I liked this 'Pandaga Vachivelindhi' just so simple and nice.
Good luck for next one.DOn't forget to post more poems of yours.
-- sree
Posted by: SriSai At: 19, Nov 2004 0:39:37 AM IST
meeru annadi correct...gud go ahead!!! ....ayitae okaTae request sabjekT manchidi ennukoanDi...baaga aloachinchanDi...saadhyamaitae research chaeyanDi...meeru true gaa mee heart ku elaa feel ayitae alaa raayanDi.idi suggestion ...aa tarvataa padaalanu amarchanDi...
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 18, Nov 2004 0:49:10 AM IST
praveen gaaru..utsaaham koddi kavita raayalanukunnaaru...aa utsaahaanni aaraneevakanDi...meeru chaesina tappallaa meeku kavitaloa unna standard telisinaa compromise kaavaDam. alaa kaakunDaa unTae..adbhutamaina kavita ayinaa raasi unDagaligae vaallu..ledaa kavitvam maaTa ettakunDaa ayinaa unDae vaallu. aloachinchanDi..panDaga ila unDamani cheppindi...ani cheppaDaaniki kavita ani paeru peTTaDam daeniki?..kadaa? straightgaa chepbdaam.. atleast chaalaa rhythmatic gaa cheppaaDu ani ayina anukunTaaru kadaa?...aem parledu...meeru compromise kaakunDaa raayanDi..adokkaTae dRushTiloa peTTukoanDi...ammoa mana readers chaala telivi meeri poatunnaaru!:)))
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 17, Nov 2004 7:30:38 PM IST
.I rOjullO Dabbu peTTi ivannI ellAgU konalEmu.
kanISaM pErleinA chadivitE adO tutti (tRupti)
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 17, Nov 2004 5:39:03 PM IST
guDumbaa gaari kavita lO muDontulu crakers pErlE vunnaayi
Posted by: Mrs. alamkruta arpita At: 16, Nov 2004 3:33:18 PM IST
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