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| ee tulasi mahathalli ki good
comments ni tappinchi negetive comments ni sportive ga thesukovadamu thelayadu anukunta...
eema rasthunna kavithalu gurinchi nejalu cheppakudadu bagunnayi ani cheppali kabolu varun garu
Posted by: Miss vasavi kanniga At: 10, Dec 2004 11:35:14 PM IST
Hello Thulasi garu,
Chala chakkaga rasarandi.
This poem reflects everone and their past experiences('Gatham')
Hope to see more poems from you like this one.
and one more thing...
For one talented person..there could be many fans(Abhimanulu) and also there would be enemies(Dhweshulu).I think u know whom i am talking about,(about dr.varun).
anyway, keep posting.
Posted by: SriSai At: 8, Dec 2004 3:35:38 AM IST
thankyou so much for spending your valuable time on my poetry varun garu....Different ppl write on same concept in different views.you might feel my poetry is similar to someoneelse's poetry.That means... is it copying? how can you justify that? I cann't agree with you.
ikkaDa chaalaa mandi manchi vimarSakulu mariyu saahityaM chadivina vaaLLu chaalaa mandE vunnaru annavishayaM marchipokanDi sumaa...!!nijangaa nEnu okari kavitalanu kaapI chEstE vaareppuDo nannu vimarSinchEvaaru mariyU one and half year nunDI ikkaDa nEnu managaligEdaanni kaanE kaadu...
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 6, Dec 2004 1:27:43 AM IST
dear tulasi
do u watch more films? u r good at copying poems ,don't you have anything to write on your own ?,i am not disgracing you ,it is true ..because many poems that you posted were already written by many people.i think you are just reading other ppl poetry and swiching the words and giving them a new name and calling it your own poetry and posting them. anyway that is also genius idea to make a poetry.don't think i am jelous about your poetry
suggesting you this,because it doesn't make any sense. good luck
DR.g
Posted by: Dr. VARUN G At: 5, Dec 2004 11:59:30 AM IST
thank'u' so much for your comments and suggestions.
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 1, Dec 2004 10:44:16 PM IST
manchi bhaavanatoa raasaaru. anubhooti kuripichaalanae prayatnam baagundi. alaagae konni suggestions chaeyanaa?..'nulivechchani Njaapakaalu' ' jeevana pravaaham ' ' neeDalaanTi gatam ' laanTi expressions choostae munduku vellaalanae mee tapananu ....konni existing style kavitalu paTTukupoyaayi ani anipistundi. alaa kaaka ' gataanikunna sugandham ' laanTi expressions konta nootanatvaanni aapaadinchukoDaaniki chaesae prayatnaaluga telustunnaayi. naa anchanaa aenTanTae..mee svanta shaili develop chaesukoDaaniki meeru prastutam chadivae kavitalu kaaka inka manchi saahityam chadavaalsina avasaram undi ani.
manchi kRushi peTTi raayaalanukunae meeku naa abhinanadanalu.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 30, Nov 2004 2:51:30 PM IST
'sarigga jeevitam akkade alaage aagipote baagundunu kada..!' beautiful....prati manishi yedo voka samayamlo tappakunda anukuntaadu,akkade life ala vundipote baagundedi kadaa ani....nice work tulasi...
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 29, Nov 2004 11:25:24 PM IST
the work is good...
but all doesn't have the sweet memories as u described...
actually the scope is limited....it pertains only to such experiences which we always miss now...like a beautiful childhood, with no fears abt future....but even this is not true in all cases...
anyways, the work is very well...
i shud appreciate it....
keep posting....
best wishes,
Vani.
Posted by: Ms. Vani M At: 28, Nov 2004 11:57:58 AM IST
baagundi mee kavita tulasi gaaru.. gatameppuDu NgNjaapakamlaa mana venTE unTundani..
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 28, Nov 2004 2:21:34 AM IST
gataM mottaM chEdugaanE vunDipOdu kadA...andulO konnainaa manchi anubhavaalunTAyi...vaaTi taalUku anubhUtulanu jIvitaMlO eppuDayinaa talachukOkunDA vunDam....'appuDu bhalEgunDEdi kadaa' anE idi tO raasinadE ee gataM...chEdu anubhavaalanu talachukOvaTAniki peddagaa ishTapaDaM kaabaTTi.ikkaDa gataM gurinci +ve gaa cheppaanu nEnu... :-)
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 27, Nov 2004 1:05:48 AM IST
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