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| I vimarSalannI chadivAka gAnI, nAku mI kavita arthaM kAlEdu.
raghUjI cheppiMdaitE assalu arthamu kAlEdu ::)
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 30, Jan 2005 11:39:38 PM IST
. nArikELaM anagA kobbarikAya
kobbarikAya valachi, pIchutIsi, kAya baddalukoTTitE
lOpala jalaM, kobbari kUDA atimadhuraMgA vuMTAyi.
I kavitalO A madhurabhAvaM vuMdiani nAku tOchiMdi
kAkapOtE grAhyAniki koMta sAdhana avasaraM
subrahmaNyaM cheppinaTTu sAmAnya pAThakuniki idi
nArikELapAkaM.
dayachEsi nannu apArdhaM chEsukOvaddu.
kiriN ninnu chinnabuchchAlani kAdu
nEnu sulabhaSeililO mAtramE vrAyagalanu
allA ani ardhaM chEsukOlEnani kAdu
nI kavita nAku ardhaM ayiMdi
padyAlalO chaMdassulOpaM cheppagalanu tappa,
kavi bhAvAlaki mArpulu, chErpulu cheyyagala Sakti nAkulEdu
niraMkuSAya kavaya:
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 3, Dec 2004 8:43:23 PM IST
simple one kiranjee :)
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 30, Nov 2004 10:58:13 AM IST
moodu stanzas toa simplicity ni saadhyamainanta varaku chaetulu andinanta maeraku aalinganam chaesukunToo vachchina kavita idi.
chivari stanza loa 'raalutunna swapnaalu kaadu nilabaDutunna buDagalu kanipistunnaayi' anae expression subject nu convey chaeyaDamloa droaham chaesaayani anipistundi. varsham gurinchi maaTlaaDutunnaaaraa?...varshamloa mee aaloachanalu ela pratibimbistunnaayoa maaTlaaDutunnaaraa?...andunaa modaTi vaakyamloa 'swapnaa'laku renDoa vaakyamloa 'buDagala'ku pontana kudaraledu.laedanTae 'raalutunna swapnaalu ' anakunDaa [endukanTae modaTi stanza loa already chinukullaa raalutunna swapnaalu anaaru kadaa!] unDi vaeraegaa try chaesi unTae baagunDaedi. modaTi stanza chakkagaa vachchindi. koddidgaa ekkuva kRushi peTTi unTae chivari stanza inkaa baagunDaedaemoa?
anyway good effort Kiran garu!
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 29, Nov 2004 2:29:14 PM IST
oka minee kavita ni, muLLu vEsi saaga teesinaTTundi. bhaava saandrata paluchabaDindi
Posted by: Saleem At: 29, Nov 2004 12:16:52 PM IST
kiraN jee , meeru sahRudayaMtO sveekaristaarani bhaaviMchi naaku tOchina konni vimarSalu ...
bhaavaanikee paaThakuDikee madhya bhaasha,kavi aDDuraavaDaM aMTE idEnEmO! aMduku Saastrigaari kaameMTE nidarSanaM
kavitalO cheppadalachina chakkani bhaavaM paaThakuDini sUTigaa taakalEkapOyiMdi.. mUDava KaMDika chaalaa chakkagaa uMdi.. modaTi reMDu KaMDikalalO chaalaa bhaagaalu tolagiMchinaa bhaavaM lO vachchE maarpEmee lEdu..paigaa appuDu kavita mariMta sUTi gaa paaThakuDini taakEdi.. kavi arjuniDilaa sariggaa bhaavaaniki guri peTTaali.. kavitvaM aMTE kaasta GanaMgaa uMDaalanukuMTE porapaaTu.kavitvaM saadhyamainaMta saraLaMgaa sUTi gaa uMDaali.
ivi naa abhipraayaalu maatramE..tappuluMTE kshamiMchaMDi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 29, Nov 2004 10:34:31 AM IST
.nEnu sulabhArdhagrAhyakuNNi.
aMduchEta nAkumAtraM idi nArikELapAkaMlAvuMdi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 28, Nov 2004 9:30:06 PM IST
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