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SreelEkha gaaroo...meevi marikonni kavitalu chadivaanu...prati kavitalOnoo..O mettaTi anubhooti...meeru feel avaDamEkaadu....maalOnoo kaliginchaaru...
marinnikavitala kOsam...
Posted by: Mr. Rajeswararao seeramreddi At: 3, Mar 2005 11:44:00 AM IST
hi sri lekha,
this is nandu from kuwait.
ur kavitha is so nice . i really appreciate you for such a good one from ur pen.i don't know the thrill and happiness of gorentaku, but my two sisters always fight for that and after that they feel happy. i never stick it to my hands but now i really do it once when i come to india.
your poem is good and really heart touching but i request you to write about the present situation on society, about the politics, present love and affections, about the bad films which is bringing nasty thoughts on youth, about the conditions which brought us and creating bad thoughts on india and many intelligents are migrating to other lands.
i wish and hope that you really understand my thoughts. i wish you all the best and don't give up your hops and thoughts. go on and give life to your pen.
all the best and take care.
anand
us army kuwait.
Posted by: Mr. nandz nandu At: 19, Dec 2004 1:35:15 AM IST
anubhavistE kaanI teliyananta dooram..EmiTi??
bahuSaa aa paata jnaapakaalannee uahalaku kooDa andanantaTi dooramlO ...
In last poem the first two sentences have no relation to the next two sentences and the main theme of the Kavita.
Overall.GUD!
Posted by: Mr. Siri Siri At: 9, Dec 2004 3:49:56 PM IST
chaalaa baagundi lEkha gaaru.. simply wonderful :)
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 30, Nov 2004 11:02:24 AM IST
Srilekha gaaru.... gOrinTAku kOsinappaTi nunDi panDEdaaka paDE aaraaTAnni kaLLaku kaTTinaTTugaa cheppaaru....ippuDu naaku nijangaa gOrinTAku peTTukunnanta sambaraM gaa vundi....gOrinTAku dorakani I americAlO....
Hats off to u
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 29, Nov 2004 10:00:55 PM IST
mundu abhipraayamu raayakooDadanukunnaanu.. anni kavitalu chadivi vadilaesinaTTu vadilaeddaamani anukunnaanu.. baagunna kavita baagundani mechchukoapoatae maroa kavita mallee puTTaTaaniki marinta samayam paTTakooDadani bhaesh, Sabhaash ani anakunDaa vunDalaeka........
Posted by: Mrs. lachchupinni somayajula At: 29, Nov 2004 1:53:21 PM IST
Sree lekha gaaroo...meeloa chaalaa adbhutamaina bhaavukata undanDi. meeru oka pustakam teesukochchae prayatnam chaestae bagunTundi ani naa abhipraayam.
kavayitri cheppae prati maaTaloa taanu reflect kaavaDam chaalaa spashTangaa kanipistundi. I have come across very few writings like this . tilak kavitvamloa unDae bhaavukata ee kavitvamloa kanipistundi. mari aayana influence kavayitri meeda undoa ledoa idamiddangaa cheppalemu gaani..... chaala sensitive feelings express chaestaaru meeru kavitalloa.
naadoa chinna suggestion aentantae...oka manchi social subject teesukuni oka maanCHi kavita raayadaaniki prayatnicharaadoo?...kaviloa paripakvata samajaanni sparSinchinappuDu padunu taelutundi. inkoalaa cheppaalanTae...vanTalloa mana pratibhaa paataavaalu vanTa inTloa mana koasam kaakunDaa andari koasam vaDDinchae oka vindu bhojanamloa choopistae inkaa upayoagakarangaa unTundi kadaa?
utsaaham champukoalaeka inkoa suggestion . stree vaada kavita sankalanaalanu chadivaara like 'neeli maeghaalu'!...'asmita' laanTi samsthalaku meeru telistae egiri gantestaayi. prachuraNaku manchi proatsaaham unTundani naa anchanaa.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 29, Nov 2004 1:10:32 PM IST
vELLannee Topeelu peTTukoni paharaa kaasEvi
wah :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 29, Nov 2004 12:09:07 PM IST
baavuMdaMDee.... sahajaM gaa aMdaM gaa uMdi...mugiMpu chaalaa chakkagaa vachchiMdi..
chaalaamaMdi marchipOtunna oka maMchi anubhUti ni gurtu chEsaaru... dhanyavaadaalu.aitE akkaDakkaDaa vachana chaayalu gOchariMchaayi.kaanee bhaavaM balaM gaa uMdi kaabaTTi vaaTini paTTiMchukOvaDaM anavasaraM.
Keep going.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 29, Nov 2004 10:12:14 AM IST
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