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| soorya gaari comment aacharaNeeyam
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 9, Dec 2004 6:09:02 PM IST
:)...........kaviki kaavaalsindi nijayitee toa feelings nijayiteetoa expression . nibaddata ekkaDinunDoa aakaaSam nunDi ooDipaDadu manishi loaki. meeku aakalaesindi. toaTaloa jaam panDu elaagainaa koasukovaalanukunnaaru. tappu chaesainaa sarae. aedi emainaa mee aakaliki droaham cheya kooDadu anukunnaarae......alaagae continue ayipoanDi. vanda kavitalu kaakapotae vaeyi kavitala tarvaata vachche paripakvata important . .......Savaanikunna maunam kanTae chevulu gimmettaelaa allari chaesae pillaaDi arupulu aanandam kaliginchavoo? detailed comments tappaka raastaa samayaanni choosi.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 9, Dec 2004 6:05:20 PM IST
naa kavita gurinchi aBipraayaalu cheppina vaarandariki Thanks. I kavita lO oka narrator vunnaaDu. pEru 'tyaaga raaju'. lover name 'krishnaveni'. ippudochE sinimaalalO laagaa idi triangle love story. so krishnaveniki 'saagar' nachaaDu. 'raaju' tyagam chesi 'tyaaga' raaju gaa migilaaDu.
In a song of a movie, it I was told 'krishnasaasri kinnerasaani'. As I dont have poetic knowledge and I like Kinnerasani river, I wrote like that.
I dont think this site z for only mahaamahulu. naaku tOchindi raastaanu. evaraina coment chEyavachu. I kaalamlo naalaanTi bulli kavitalu raasevaallE ekkuva. endukanTE ishTam vunnaa kavitvam paTlaa, elaa raayaalo teliyadu. baruvulu choosi posTu cheyaTam naaku raadu.
ofcourse in TP site, we are seeing real poets. I want to put my poems before them.
Posted by: Mrs. LAKSHMI JYOTHI GRANDHI At: 9, Dec 2004 0:49:13 AM IST
madam
krishnasastry ki kinnerasaniki
oh no relation
krish urvasi
viswanadha satyanarayana kinnerasani oohaa preyasalu
please advise if otherwise
supani123@yahoo.com
Posted by: Mr. purushothamarao Ravela At: 8, Dec 2004 7:50:29 PM IST
ee saiTuloa kavitalani traasu laekunDaa alaa alaa paTTukuni choosi... kolichaestaaranDee baaboo.. mahaa mahulu...andaroo chaduvutaaru.. nae cheppaTamenduku.. okarokkarae mee kavitala baruvu gurinchi cheptaaru lenDi..
cheppaanani anukoaka poatae okka manavi.. okaTiki renDu saarlu chaduvukuni.. poshTu chaestae inkaa baavunDaedi..
baalaevani kaadu naa ardham.. inkaa baavunDaevi kadaani...
tappeTTukoakanDae !!
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 8, Dec 2004 3:17:30 PM IST
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