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| everything was good...
mainly the language....felt like i was in a village in india....
but something was missing in the story...
something....am not a good writer...at the same time...am not a great critic...
but still theres something missing in the story...
Posted by: Ms. sravanthi Chinta At: 23, Dec 2004 10:12:20 AM IST
guntur jilla yaasa adhbhutamgaa vundi. chaala rojula tarvaata asalaina gunturu jilla bhaasha chaduvutunnaa.
story chaalaa baagundi. waiting for the next part.
Posted by: Mr Suresh KVS At: 12, Dec 2004 8:50:13 AM IST
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