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| chaala funny gaa undandi kavita.alochanalani baaga pettaarandi kavitalo.baagaa raasaarandi.meeru cheppinadi nijame chaala varaku andi.
Posted by: Mr. - chivalrous At: 31, Dec 2004 3:47:43 PM IST
Can you explain me why this is called kavita or definition of kavita? I do not see any poetic content in it. What form of creativity it is? if you can put your thoughts on paper and present as it is, then it should be in some other category. It doesnt even make a good essay :-)
Probably you should try to use some metaphors. The thoughts or emotions are not even told in a new way. Give us a new way to see the things.
Posted by: Saleem At: 27, Dec 2004 3:53:42 AM IST
fantastic
Posted by: Mr. RAMU DEVARASETTY At: 25, Dec 2004 8:59:46 PM IST
Hi Rama prasadgaru,
You are right.I am Mrs.Veera S Thota. Thanks for your Compliment.
Bye,
Kalyani.
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 23, Dec 2004 9:46:00 AM IST
Hello Kalyani thota,
plz let me know whether you are wife of mr.veera s. thota or not. if so i am friend of veera s. thota. this is ramaprasad.padala. let me know if i am right.
your poetry is so much impressive. i liked it very much
Posted by: Mr. Rama Prasad Padala At: 23, Dec 2004 7:07:26 AM IST
Mrs.Kalyani garu,
Meeru cheppindhi 100% correct. Enthomandhi cheppalendhi meeru andhanga, suthi metthaga chepparu. Nijanga america lo vunna prathivaru naaku thelisi roju ki okasaraina eevidhanga aalochistaremo!!!! Mee kavithalanni follow avuthunnanu, eekavitha maatram nijanga present NRI life ki addampaduthundhi ani cheppadamlo sandheham ledhu.
Suresh
Posted by: Mr. Suresh At: 22, Dec 2004 7:27:17 PM IST
:-)
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 21, Dec 2004 10:22:29 PM IST
Kalyani garu,
Kavitha chala bavundi. Kaani anni complaints tho compromise ayye badulu enchakka swadesaniki vellipote better emo kada.
Live your life as it is at this moment andi. Rather than thinking of the past or the future.I very well know that what we call 'the present moment' very nicely cheats aways and goes away to the past. But then,antha mi chetullone vundi. How you treat it.
Sorry, if my comment hurt you:)
Luv.
Shresta
Posted by: Ms. Shresta Ms At: 20, Dec 2004 11:53:29 PM IST
your are 100% right Kalyani garu..nice peotry...
really i am missing a lot all my family and my friends over there..
Posted by: Mr. Raj Chinny At: 20, Dec 2004 9:00:13 PM IST
baagumdi. Kuch pAnEkEliyE kuch khOnA padtAhi! kabhee kabhee... Kuch pAnEkEliyE sabkuch khOnA padtAhi!!
Posted by: Mr. Satish Kumar Barnala At: 20, Dec 2004 11:59:17 AM IST
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