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| Chala Chala chalaaaaaaa..bagundandi...
Simpy seperb....
Posted by: Mrs. Sree Pavani Modem At: 7, Jan 2005 2:10:11 PM IST
baagundi telugu, chennaagide kannaDa, sooparu imgleeshu, bahut achchaa hai hindee, bhaaloa bengaalee, raamroa naepaali,
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 5, Jan 2005 2:01:43 PM IST
chaalaa baagundi raghu gaaru...
chakkaTi haasyam
Posted by: Ms. sravanthi Chinta At: 3, Jan 2005 1:49:14 AM IST
kadha chadivaenu. baagumdi raghuu
emtabaagumdoe cheppaalamTae
ayyahoe Emamdu avaniiSu kaanaiti
agrahaaramulichchi aadarimpa
alakaapuraadhiiSu chelikaaDa kaanaiti
aksharammunakokka lakshaniiya
chamdra soedarikaamtu Sayya naekaanaiti
padinuurla kamThaala prastutimpa
kamjuputruDa naenu kaanaeragaanaiti
ella loekaala ninneruka saeya
aadivaaramamchu aahlaadamunubemchu
gaadha nuDivinaTTi gaaNu gaamchi
diiveniiyanemchi diirghaayurastamchu
paluka vachchinaTTi.baapanaiti.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 2, Jan 2005 3:39:27 PM IST
bAgumdi !! mari A subramaNyam fOn` nambaru istArA.. okasAri
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 2, Jan 2005 3:37:00 PM IST
bhalE saradAgA sAgipOyiMdi katha...mottAniki kathalO kavita, kavitalO katha kalipEsi, manchi bisibELE bAt chEsEsArugA:)!!!.
Posted by: special_special At: 1, Jan 2005 11:57:47 PM IST
baavuMdi raGujee.... subrahmaNyaM anna pEru chUDagaanE elaa irikiMchaarO EmiTO ani mariMta aatRuta tO chadivaa... :)
ilaaMTivE marinni haasya kathalu raayaMDi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 1, Jan 2005 8:24:26 PM IST
raghUjI, 'kavita'lu rAyaDaM rAkapOyinA, rAyAlanE talaMpu, bhAryapainE rAyAlanE paTTiMpu sadaru bhartagArilO maMchi lakshaNAlu.
saMgItaM, sAhityaM
manaserigina sAMgatyaM
iMkEmi kAvAli I jIvitAniki
50/100 maarks :)
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 1, Jan 2005 9:06:42 AM IST
very nice sir.
But i feel , ucan remove those last lines and end the story with that kiss itself.
Very decent romantic story.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 31, Dec 2004 10:13:48 PM IST
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