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| Offcourse mee kavite prerana anuko -
Desabhimanam weekend topic laa marindi.
we (WE) don't have +ve out look sir.
I want to change that !?
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 18, Jan 2005 9:12:19 PM IST Sastry Garu (guruvu garu) -
Ms.Mamath B
Thanks for your comments -
I do agree with your comments.
I can say like.
neevukonna blaaku TikkeTTu
neevu lanchamichhina rail bertu
-0-
anochhu - kaani 'tosukoni tokkisalaaTalo'
manamu kone sinimaa TikkeTTu gaani ,
ekke reilu gaani '
kalipina bhaavam raavaTaanike
alaa e bhaavamu lekunDaa ,
vaari vaari voohalaku vadileSaa.
idi samardhana kaadu -
I will imporve next time.
Thanks -
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 18, Jan 2005 0:04:17 AM IST Good one. inkastha explanatory ga vunte bagundedhi rendava charanam lo.
Posted by: Ms. Mamatha At: 17, Jan 2005 11:27:35 PM IST . kavitalO bhAvaM, bhAShA kUDA bAgunnAyi.
kAkapOtE, sinimATikkeTTu, reillO bertu vITivalla bhaMgapaDaDaM ellAgO ardhaM kAlEdu. koMcheM vivariMchu.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 17, Jan 2005 2:25:53 PM IST
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