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Articles: Short Stories | | prayaaNamloa praNayam | |
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| abbaa Emi navvinchaaranDI...edurugaa vunDi maaTlaaDutunnanta idigaa vraasaaru...kaLLaku kaTTinaTTu vundi
very nice....keep writing...
Goodluck
Tulasimohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 26, Jan 2006 3:16:02 AM IST
kaDupubba navvinchAramDi...I katha chadivi navvukunnamtalA... bAbOy` I madhya kAlamlO eppuDu lEdamDi.manchi kAmeDI kathanandinchina miiku dhanyavAdamulu.
Posted by: special_special At: 27, Feb 2005 1:20:26 AM IST
i have read ur story...sweet n lovely..
so after all u became a pair now..congratulations for both...(hopin tht the story is real)
so,is the same love flowing between u,even now?
just out of enthusaism adigaanu....
well, the story was good..nothin to comment on the story line b'coz of 2 reasons..
1. this r someone's feelings goin thru all the way which can't b reharsed to make it more interesting or romantic..
2. and this is ur story....a real one...n the story was narrated as it is..
anyways...all the best to u, couple...
hearty congratulations once again to both of u..
Mystry.
Posted by: Mystry Mystry At: 3, Feb 2005 7:15:02 PM IST
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